Arshi FF: My Life With(out) You KKGSR part24 pg150 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: aakriti120

heya

read both updates just now...

it was soo emotional...

why did khushi leave.?

i hope they meet again...

many thanks for the pm..:)

continue soon..


Thanks dear for loving my work so much.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: ann123

so the misunderstanding track continues...sounds interesting...the hospital scene was so touching...and the letter created the much needed suspense...loving it cont soon😊


well well well agey agey dekho hota hai kya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow awesome please continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
oh my god...so emotional😭 is KKG dead? where has she gone leaving her child
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesummm!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ANOTHER FAB ONE DEAR...
U ROCK
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rkapoor1382

ANOTHER FAB ONE DEAR...

U ROCK

thanks dear...good to see everyone appreciating.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good update - pls continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome..
carry on soon plz..
thanxx for d pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60

Previous part: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2902976&TPN=7�

Arnav opens the letter which says'

Arnav ji,

Hamare us pal ki nishani aapke paas chodke ja rahi hoon'wol pal jo mere dilke kareeb the'who pal jab hum ek huye the'jis pal ka aapko sabse zada nafrat tha'usi pal ki yeh haseen nishani meye aapko sopti hoon'please take care of the baby'I knew that I wont be here when you will be reading this letter'Jiya is very special to me'she was there with me when no one was'I hope you will give her the security and love that she deserves' Khushi.


Doctor: Mr. Raizada you wife was anemic. She had to face a lot of blood lose during her cesarian. We tried our best to save both of them but due to her blood loose...


Arnav: Bus doctor bus...isnt i your responsibility to call her husband and let him know about the situation? How could you take such a drastic decision...

Docotor: Dekhiye Mr. Raizada...yeh decision ek maa par depend karti hai...we only ask the mother on the operation table...Khushi...


Arnav: Mrs. Kushi Arnav Signh Raizada...doctor...correct your sentence...anger bursting out in pain...


Doctor: Dekhiye Mr Raizada...


Arnav: Just shut up doctor...holding his collar...how could you...how could you take away my wife from me?


Arnav faints...


Flash Back Over.


Arnav: Hey shona...good morning! and Many Many Happy Returns of the Day...Kissing her forehead...


Jiya: Hugs Arnav...I am sorry pa...for not listening you...please forgive me...


Arnav: Holding the glass of milk...just forget it baby...have your favourite banana milk shake...daddy has specially made it for you...


Jiya: You are not angry with me na pa?


Arnav: No baby...making jiya sit on him...Ab batao what do you want on your birthday?


Jiya: Keeping her index finger on her lips...counting

DM ke liye new chunri

Barinani ke liye imli

Dadi ke liye pink mala

Mamadadu ki liye stick

Mannudadi ke liye nail polish

Mashi ke liye bindi

Akki (akash) ke liye ... unne to sirf mashi chahiye hamesh...

Ayush ke liye playstation cd

Bui ke liye dher sara laces

Aapke liye new bluetooth


Arnav: bas bas bas...itni lambi list? You have asked for everyone...what do you want baby?

Jiya: holding arnav's neck...smile on your face pa...

Arnav: gets emotional and hugs her...baby you want on your each and every birthday...

Jiya: But aap detey kahan ho?

Anajli: Happy birthday jiya...aaj meri princess kya pehne gi?

Jiya: Papa has got a beautiful dress with lots of pompoms in it...jiya aaj wohi pehnegi...

Arnav: Now go and take a bath baby...you are stinking...

Jiya: pa you stink...

Arnav: No you...and started poking her...

The Raizada mansion was filled with jiya's laughter...

Arnav: Go now...

Anjali while jiya talks a bath...

Anjali: It has been 6 years we have lost khushi...

Arnav: Di.

Anjali: Chotey no matter how much you try to hide...but the pain show on your face...

Arnav: Hugs anjali tightly

Anjali: Please stop fighting with your thoughts and come out of it...you have jiya with you...she is your responsibility...you have always been the best father...

Arnav: But di i cant be khushi...

Anjali: No one can be...chotey...

Arnav: Di woh saaman?

Anjali: ya its ready in the car...this time you make jiya to distribute flowers and chocolates to the kids.

(In the memory of Khushi, Raizadas distribute flowers and chocolates to the kids and a blood donation camp is arranged for the woman)

Arnav: Jiya come on we have to go...we are getting late...

Jiya: coming pa...are we going to the hospital?

Arnav: yes...

Jiya: Yippy...got to meet maa over there...(she cherish the hostipal as she thinks that it was the first and last time her mother was with her)

Arnav: Jiya come lets go...

They do all the formalities...jiya goes to the room where khushi was admitted...the blood donation camp is held there...she always keeps a red rose on the window and kuch bar barati hai...no one else have figured out what she actually speaks and to whom...arnav tried to ask her quite a number of times but she always replied...yeh maa ki baat hai aap sunna pasand nahi karenge...

Arnav: holding her hand moving towards his car...to aaj kya plan hai?

Jiya: wohi jo hamesh karte hai...

Arnav: drives the car out of delhi...there was park where they used to sit and gossip...it was more of giving time to each other...her school and arnav's busy schedule hardly get quality time together.


Jiya and Arnav enjoying chart, samosa, golgappa(panipuri). Jiya doing all sort of nautankis...which always reminds arnav of khushi...he thinks jiya is her mom's carbon copy...he feels good to see jiya like that...he always wanted her daughter to be like her mother...so that he can see khushi in front of him...always...but the emptiness of his heart can never be field...he knows that very well...Today he tried to be happy to see jiya happy suppressing his pain...


Guys i have become a little emotional while writing this OS...so planned to stop her...its a short one...but if i write it will be painful...got a little carried away...i didnt want ot spoil the fun and keep it light. Sorry...

I hope you guys enjoy. thanks for beautiful response and so many likes...

Updated: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2902976&PID=55020885�


Edited by Appy_Indy - 13 years ago


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