os Gopi speak newly uptd after 3 months

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Arial<font size="1">1</font>RedGopi whats wrong .the past few days you have been I don't how to say umm.sad. 😳 .Gopi:I can't take it anymore I cant believe you don't remember anything that happenedt anything that happened on holi ...Ahem:Gopi speak to me Tell me what happened I can't take your sadness. Anymore please speak I need Ur shy smily self again please tell me if I did anything wrong since Holi something happened i can't rememeber what happened please speak Gopi speak tell me so i can fix it.Gopi:well I'm done I am done i am leaving this house i can't take it anymore (sobbing).I am leaving I've been in this house being unmoved by you I'm done I'm leaving right now Ahemji ...No Gopi you can't leave what about me what about mom and kaki and Haa and everyone they love you you can't leave...Gopi:nooo stop o I am done I'm done living in a loveless mRraige I can't beileive you don't rememeber anything that happens on Holi afternoon.I'm done being this shy wife that just cleans and cooks and just obeys her MIL .I'm done I'm done Goodbye Ahemji I'm leaving right nowww.Ahem:!noo Gopi you can't leave .I need to tell you something you need to stay Gopi:why should I stay you don't care about me no one does Ahem:I love you I love you small smiles I love how you act around me your shyness I love how you attend and believe me statute Gopi please tell me speak Gopi .Gopi:I said I'm done Ahemji bye I'm leaving don't worry about me ...Ahem:running down the stairs after Gopi don't leave Haaa Naaa Kami come down stairs nowww...evryone is down stairs as they see ahem begging Gopi but she dosnt give in she just leaves and there's nothing he can do about it she left...


I'll update this if i get at least if I get 10 comments and likes .ill continue this part 2 only when i get 10 okai I hoped yall like it this is my first OS and I'm not that good in writing and all



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Nijagurlrock thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh if yall like it and you want pm updates thingy buddy me so ill send u d link
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was a nice start...so gopi decides to leave...cant wait to see what happens next...
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Please. Continue so far.very good
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Dats Outaline I just realized I had a lot of typos if and when I update this yall ima make sure that yall won't see any typos and ill try to make it longer and more readable .if that at all makes any sence well I got lots of ideas now to write about but i gotta wait till I get atleast ten likes ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yeah please continue:: nice Gopi turaround, unique
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plz continue... n thanx 4 da pm x
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15 likes dont now how much comment
great start,Cant wait too read the next part!
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So thank you guys for the support ...some of u might gasp for what I'm about to say but I'm not even Indian but like I love the culture i love d serials the movies and i understand hindi .i maybb just maybb might have been meant to b born in d Indian culture LOL anyway thanks to all d people that commented and like it and thanks to all d buddy request ...ill send pms ltr tonight thanks yall..




Part 2 of Gopi speaks .
She left... It had almost been 3 months since Gopi left MM .ahem had lost his smile his hapiness .his wife he was sad he didn't eat he didn't even go to work everyday now he wasn't his self anymore since she left...

Gopi Gopi (this is vindaya a girl Gopi met when she left MM .and she went to Bangalore to start her life over again afresh .vindaya took her in and gave her a job as a first grade teacher at her school work ) GOpi wake up yaar you have to go to work wake uppp...ughhh vindaya leave me alone I don't want to work today at all I'm tired of those annoying little kids .They r annoying Meee..


AT MM.: ahem bhai please get ready soon we have to get on the flight in 2 hours for our buisness trip with Mr .Mansoor in BAngalore ..the car will b here soon to pick us up soon and pack enough things cause i wanna stay an extra 2 days for vacation ok...ok ok jigar Whtever you want ahem said in a lifeless tone ..in jigars head he sound soo lifeless now since Gopi bhabi left 3months ago ...6 hrs latr they reach Bangalore.



Back at Gopi and vindayas apartment soo how was school today Gopi at least it was early release we got out early...Hahaha actutally The kids were really quiet and good it was fine I really need to go and get some jalebies down the street ill b back in 20 ...wow this Gopi is pagal for jalebies just like a prego woman but she won't open up to me she won't tell me anything about her past she dosnt like talking about it maybb one day she really look at me as a sister and tell me about why she came to Bangalore(Gopi running to d elavator thinking about jalebies.yummn I can't wait so Gopi ran down the stairs out to the parking lot and then bammm a car hit her

Driver ahem said can't u see you just hit a woman ...ahem jigars and the driver rushed out of the car to see who and if the lady was okay and bammm he saw Gopi on d floor trying to get up she just got hit by a car but she was okay...ahem and jigars mouth opened and there jaws droped it was Gopi ahems heart skipped a beat like a million times and then Gopi tuned around to see who just hit her and then baammm she saw the 2 brothers her jijaji and he husband still husband not ex cause they didn't get divorced..her heart skipped .

Ahem finally broke the silence Gopi kya what are you doing in BAngalore .where have you been i have been worried sick about you...Gopi still on silence...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Update very Intresting Cant wait Too read the Next part!
hope Gohem will be back too each other and Talk Abot there problems!

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