OS-Teri Meri Kahani - Last Part - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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gr8 goin...carry on...n do update soon...
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thts not fair, pls update soon... lovely part
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Can't wait to see what happens next...

great os 👍🏼
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wow...!!!
It was awesome...!!!
Loved it...
Continue soon...
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awesome update..

loved the dance and the selection of songs..

continue soon..

and thanks for the pm..:)
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Liked it a a lot! Please update soon!
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its was amazing do continue soon and pm when u do

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it was amazing do continue soon
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Continue please ...
Very good description of khushi
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The lights comes in and everyone starts clapping...cheering them saying once more...once more...

Khushi coming back in her senses moves back...and was about to go...arnav holds her hand and says...will you dance with me once more?

And the song goes...lights dimmed...

Ankhein teri...Arnav looking at khushi's eyes
Itni Haseen...Khushi looking her eyes with arnav's
Ke inka aashiq...meye ban gaya hoon...mujhko basale in mein tu...isqh hai...maula mere maula mere...

They does a lovely duet...forgetting all their nok jhok and jhagras...they were so full of themselves...

The DJ: So any guess...yes its Mrs and Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada who won this compition...

After the dinner they left...

In the Car...

Khushi: trying to avoid arnav looking outside the window...

Arnav: Trying to catch the glimps of khushi's reaction...but unable to see her face...tries to speed up the car...while putting his hand on the gear...his finger lands on khushi's hand...

Khushi's eyes became big thinking what is he trying to do...looks at arnav and pulls her hand off..."Aap shayad bhul gaye hai ki aapka college ka function khatam ho gaya hai" (i think you have forgotten that the function is over" so please dont try to touch me...

Arnav: WT...dont talk to me like that...i have not done it purposely...it was...

Khushi: Please dont give such excuses...

Arnav: Speeds over

Khushi: What are you doing arnav ji...holding the dashboard of the car...scared.

Arnav: Kept numb

Khushi: please slow down otherwise i will just get off from the car...

Arnav: Smirks

Khushi: Khushi holds arnav's biceps and dig her face on it

Arnav: Reduces the speed remembering that khushi is scared of speed.

Both of them arrives at RM

Arnav: Get out of the car...

Khushi: ya fine...you are a monster...you dont care about anybody...

Arnav: Oh really...fine...i am not answerable to you...

Khushi gets down from the car and arnav speeds the car and leaves RM.

Khushi worried...Arnav ji...where are you going...its 1 o clock at night...by the time she finishes her line arnav is gone...

Khushi goes to her room...thinking about the whole evening how arnav danced with her...she started to take of her clothes, while doing that her mangalsutra gets stuck in her dress...she tries to release it but due to lot of pulling it broke...

"ARNAV JI" aap thik ho na? Mujhe aapki chinta ho rahi hai...suddenly the light goes off...khushi becomes more scared...she quickly changes her dress and goes down to the dining table and waits for arnav...holding the mangalsutra in her hand...her eyes gazed the door of RM...no sign of Arnav...see could see DM's face due to the diya (candle) which was lite praying to her to keep arnav out of any musibaat (problem)...

Khushi's tension was now getting on her nerves...she was panique. She wanted to call arnav to ask whether everything is ok or not but she didnot due to her ego...she waited and waited...there was no sign of arnav...

It was 3:15 at night suddenly she could hear a noise of a car breaks...she was hyper ventilated...this time due to nervousness...she manages to go near the door as it was still dark she couldnt see properly...

She opened the door and could make out arnav was standing in front of her...

Khushi: pushing him...what the hell do you think of yourself...Do you even realize what one goes through...why are you torturing me like this...where have you been? Why didnt you tell me and go...yes Mr. Raizada...i have full right to ask this question to you...i am your wife damn it...there is no electricity in the house...everyone is sleeping...i am waiting for you...and you dont even bother to contact me? Listen Mr. Raizada...i cant take this anymore...for 6 months we have decided that we will not fight unnecessarily nor we will give pain to each other. then what are you trying to prove by doing this? after 6 months do whatever you feel like i will not even be bothered where you go, what you do...whether you are alive or dead...

Khushi paused "alive or DEAD" how could i say these words?

Suddenly the diya (candle goes out) It became dark...

Arnav hugged khushi...Khushi tries to go out of his grip but suddenly felt warm on her shoulders...her body was unable to take the weight of arnav...

Khushi: Arnav ji...Arnav ji

Arnav dropped down on the floor...so do the mangalsutra beside him

Next part will be coming soon...in the meantime do leave your comments...

Edited by Appy_Indy - 13 years ago

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