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Posted: 13 years ago
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i wrote something after a very long time .wrote a full lenght essay 6 yrs back in my exams😆 their would be huge grammatical mistakes sorry for that in advance
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its not an OS more like a scene



gopi was all bubbly and happy ahem couldnt unerstand why .he had no clue wat so ever y her wife was passing smiles every now and then .something fishy is going on a voice from inside came but he ignored it meanwhile his mom came into the room asking him y didnt he moved the cars .she asked him to move them before holi playing starts.really confused ahem told his mom that something strange had happend .he doest remembers wat he had done all afternoon(tun dhun naa know comes the twist)and how he ended up sleeing in his bed koki was struck by lightening(booom)then she told him about bhang and urmi and dhanwals drama.asked him what he ate or drink during the festivities.he told her he ate a ladoo (forgot to tell her that is was mamis laddoo😈).koki the spy went in search of answers but the worst thing happend (guess guess)gopi heard all this bakwaas and was devastated(said nahi nahi nahi 3 times btw y always 3 times it could be 4) ran to mandir and cried like hell 😆(oh gosh she really cries like a 5 yr old never growing up)questioning kanha ji what it had to happend to her but sombered after a while promising kanha ji that she would never question ahemji and would live rest of her life dreaming about those moments(besharam kahin ki who shares their SR thoughts with kanha ji)(end of love sick puppy gopi)
next day gopi tried her best avoiding ahem she looked miserable and sad faced(practice of last 1 and a half yrs).Ahem noticed it was very suprised(u would be maha surprised when ur amnesia is over) what happend to her beloved gopi who was fully charged and happy yesterday but today she looked like hell (put 2 batteries of energizer good to go)kokis son so spy mode on😎tailing gopi every where to find out the reason to make her happy but unsucsessful as ever (practice of last 1.5 yrs oops forgot SR)after a while he got tired with that cat dog chase and asked her what was wrong with her she was all emotional and crying but then a demon took over her

she said

baa🤬how could u do every thing and foget(pulling his hairs with full force).how dare u touched me under bhang effect(my advise take a stick hit him on head amnesia over) u shame less guy i am going to kill u 😡🤢took a stick jammed it on his head(yipee took my advise) and every thing came flowing back amnesia over.ahem was sooo embaressed hid his face in gopis pallu with shame saying u have every right to be angry u should do the same as i did to u 😳to punish me.(demon departed)smiling again (victory)and feeling a bit shy she said it wouldnt be a punishment its going to be a reward😊


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dont know how to add romance so guyz dream on ur own
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yaayyy you did it. funny post. Poor Gopi. And poor Ahem. I'll bet he will never forget anything again. 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOL.. very funny post! 😆 .. nice sense of humor.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Finally A unique ending: COOOL, loved the ending TWIST lol, really fun to raed, end was a suberb and unprecedented in my view: awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A very funny post Goody.
The mother son chat could just be as similar to your one.
It will be great if Gopi vents her frustration.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That is one way to bring back ahem memory.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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every body thanku for taking out time and reading it 🤗 and thanxs alot for all the nice comments 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hahaha!! 🤣 like the stick part!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vinder90

Finally A unique ending: COOOL, loved the ending TWIST lol, really fun to raed, end was a suberb and unprecedented in my view: awesome

😆i went over board with the twist 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Xarina

Yaayyy you did it. funny post. Poor Gopi. And poor Ahem. I'll bet he will never forget anything again. 👍🏼

i posted it just because of ur encouragment thanku

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