Pyar Hai, Nafrat bhi: Part 9 ADDED! - Page 2

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please continue that was tooooooooo goooooooooooooooood
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hey Jinku, i liked it. Pls continue
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hey good job jink ....it seems so real just ekta style actuallyno thats an insult its a lot better😉
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please jink continue it today yaar dont kill us with the suspense
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its tomorrow now😆 plzzzz continuee jinku!!!!! the suspence is killing me!!!
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Ok, here I go again.

Kripa's car falls over the cliff.

Angad: KRIPA!!

Kripa screams. The car stops just before sailing right off. It is already more than half over the cliff and is shaking, and about to fall right off. Angad climbs out of his car and gets a rope. He ties it to his car and then to Kripa's. He gets inside his car, which is also starting to be pulled over with Kripa's!

Angad: Start, start! Why isn't it starting? Da*n!

He tries again.

Angad: Start!! START!!

His car is also slowly being pulled. Suddenly it starts, and Angad goes into reverse and tries to pull it back. It's really hard with two cars' weight. Then it starts to rain. He can't see much.

Angad: What's going on?

Kripa's car door smashes open and she falls out. Angad runs out of his car.

Angad: Kripa!!

Kripa falls right over the cliff!

Angad runs to the side of the cliff. He sees that Kripa has stopped, but is really far down. He takes a deep breath and jumps right down. He lands hard, and starts to bleed. He goes to Kripa. He carries her and starts to climb back up. He slips many times, but goes on still. He is poked by the thick branches. Finally they reach the top. He sees that Kripa is unconscious. He puts her in his car and drives off.

Later

Kripa wakes up in her hospital bed, with a bandage on her head. She opens her eyes slowly and then screams when she sees that she is in a hospital room.

Kripa sees a doctor standing there.

Kripa: Doctor, what - what ? My - my baby - what - is it - no - did -

Doctor: Please, relax. You and your baby are both fine. There were a few complications because of your having lost so much blood, but your husband, despite being injured himself, gave his blood.

Kripa: My - my - h-husband?

Just then Angad walks in.

Doctor: Oh, here he is!

Doctor leaves. Angad goes to Kripa, but she turns away.

Angad: Kripa, whatever I did, I know it was wrong. I - I know that I was very wrong - but -

Kripa: Wrong? Just one mistake, Angad?

Angad: But, Kripa, I -

Kripa: What? Do you want to say that you still loved me when you humiliated me so many times? Calling me a public property? Saying that anyone could touch me and I would let them?

Angad: Kripa, I know that I was wrong. I was really very wrong to do that to you.

Kripa: No, Angad! It wasn't your fault! It was my fault that I actually believed in you! You took advantage of that!

Angad: Kripa, it was Harshini and my mother who told me about this, if you must know.

Kripa is shocked.

Kripa: H-Harshi-Harshini? How - how - she's my friend - But - when you bet-betray-betrayed me, then how could I expect any better from the rest of the world?

Angad: Kripa, whatever happened - I'm sorry. But if you give me one chance, we can -

Kripa: We can? We can what, Angad? We can marry? We can live together? Why are you doing this to me, Angad? Why? I'll never come to you, do you understand that?

Angad leaves.

Kripa is crying when she hears a voice.

Kripa2: Why are you crying now, Kripa?

Kripa looks up and sees her own reflection.

Kripa: No - go away -

Another reflection comes.

Kripa3: It should be your baby crying.

Kripa: But - why?

Kripa4: How can you ask that, Kripa? When you know that you are the main reason for it.

Kripa: But - but -

All of the reflections: If you actually cared about your child, then you wouldn't refuse to marry Angad.

Kripa: But - Angad did -

Reflections: Angad didn't know what to believe, Kripa! Even you led him on! What about that bag of money? You actually forced him to be against you, Kripa.

Kripa: But he -

Reflections: You are going to spoil your own child's life for this! What has your child done? Nothing! But still - you don't even care.

The reflections vanish. Kripa is shocked.

Later

Everybody is waiting at the mandap for Angad. The house has been lavishly decorated with pillars, drapes and everybody is wearing exquisite clothes. Reporters, Damini, Prithvi, Karthik, Dadi, Naina, Anita, Aliya, Dilip, Nethra, are all waiting for Angad. Only Dadi, Prithvi and Aliya seem hopeful.

Then Angad walks in. Mishti is elated and smiles at seeing him.

Naina: Angad, where were you? Anyways, come on - the time is passing.

Angad: Mom.

Naina: What, Angad?

Angad: I won't marry Mishti.

Everybody is shocked. Behind Angad, Kripa comes out, wearing sindoor and a mangalsutra.

P.S. Who wants me to continue?😉

Edited by JinK - 20 years ago
Kaj! thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Jink continue pls. this is soo good.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#18
please continue that was too good and please give a bit of saas bahu jhatkas that can give nice spic to your wonderful story I mean to say give some nice spicy dialogues betwen Kripa and Naina


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Posted: 20 years ago
#19
hey Jinku...tht was too good...continue na....😊
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#20
jnks iit's totally fab ! plz continue !

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