ff:NAVYA..a love saga..:)EPI33 updated:)page 109

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hello navyans/shamyans...this is an attempt to re-write our navya
storyline..we all love navya as it is..but jst thot re-writin again wit
a little diiferent way wud make us re-live our navya..our anya..so here
i am..with navya-redefined..
serial name:navya..a love saga..
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/navya/2886936/ff-navya-a-love-saga-epi33-updated-page-109�..epi 26
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2886936&TPN=90&#58508686..epi27 n 28

END~~~
4th april mornin 6:30...
Ananth's house:
ek khoobsurath mansion...us ghar ka ek bada sa kamra...
alarm ringin...a handsome guy rollin on the bed turns of the alarm..n wakes up..he enters his bathroom..splashes water on his face..
camera focus on :eyes...expressive yes...sexy brown eyes...eyes of a young charmin guy with wonderful dreams...eyes portrayin decency..nd
holdin faith in moral values..
navya's house:
background voice...navya..jaldi utho beta der ho hojayegi..a girl on her bed sleepin tight coverin her face wit the blanket..navya aaj college ka pehla din hai...der nahi hona chahiye beta..she open up her blanket..n sits on the bed..
camera focus on :smile...a beautiful impressive smile..a smile very young..a smile very innocent..a smile portrayin simplicity nd a beautiful character...
meetha ma enters navya's room..
meetha:navya..
navya:(background voice)ha ma utgayi..
meetha:accha beta jaldi nahalo aur college ke liye tayar ho jao..
navya:(background voice)ha ma..
Ananth's house:
bhagwan shiv ki bohot badi moorthy hai...subah ki arthi chal rahi..arthi ke baad saare family ke log dadaji ki ashirvaad lete hai..ananth bhi leta hai..
baba:ananth beta aapke college ka aaj pehla din hai na??
ananth:(background voice)ji baba..
baba:accha hai beta ..khoob mann lagakar padiye..aur humara naam roshan kijiye..
anath:(background voice):bilkul baba..n walks off to his room..
ananth's papa:bauji kahi ananth mumbai ki bheed bhaad mein humare
niyamon ko bhool na jaye..
baba:nahi om..aisa kuch nahi hoga..bharosa rakhiye apne bete par..
ananth's room:
he's gettin ready...he open his wardrobe nd removes out a white shirt..wears it ...
navya's room:
navya opens her wardrobe..removes out evry dress n is confused wat she
shud wear..thn finally she wears a white beautiful salwar kameez..
phone ring...navya pics up t cal..
navya:hai ritz gud mornin..(in excitement)
ritz:hai navya...accha jaldi tayyar ho ja..mein tumhe lene a rahi hoon..
navya:tu kyun lene ayegi..mein khud ajaongi yaar..
ritz:navya bhool gayi kya..aaj valentines day hai...itna khoobsurath
din..mein tum aur appy saath mein jayenge..
navya:ohhh..lekin hum logon ke liye toh yeh roz ke din jaisa hi hai...
appy:(conference)arre yaar..navya..tu bhi na..kitni borin si
hai...valentine wish karne wala koi nahi hai to kya hua..dhoond toh
sakthe hai..(all start laughin..)
navya:accha teek hai..mein breakfast kar lungi aur tum logon ko ghar ke
bahar miloongi..
ritz:oyyii sun na..tune kaunse color ka dress pehna hai??
navya:maine...white..n she turns towards the mirror...here we c our
gorgeous heroine...beautiful n simple..woow in white..
ritz:accha teehk hai...chal baad mein milte hai..bye..
navya in her dining room..poori family saath mein breakfast karthi
hai..dadi puja ki thali lekar navya ke paas ati hai aur use teeka
lagathi hai..thn navya hugs her dadi..tel bye to her mom n dad...n tels
bye to her bandar bhai harsh too..n she reaches the road..ritz n appy
waitin fr her in their car..
ritz:navya kitni der kardi yaar...
navya:sorry sorry..
appy:chal koi baath nahi..bata na mein kaisi lag rahi hoon...??huh??
navya:hmmm...teehk hai..kafi ok ok..lag rahi hai..
appy muh fula leti hai..n navya n ritz giv a hi-fi n laugh..
ritz:arre yaar mausam kitna accha hai na aaj..aisa lagraha hai..har
taraf pyaar hi pyaar hai..
appy:ha ha..tujhe to lagega hi..tera dil toh already kisi pe agaya hai na..
ritz:kya fayda yaar..sirf mere dil ki baath hai...usse toh koi farak nahi padtha..
navya:aisa kyun keh rahi hai..shayad woh bhi tumhe pasand kartha hoga...
appy:ha yaar..
ritz:nahi yaar...woh sirf mujhe apna accha dosth manta hai..aur kuch nahi..
appy:accha chod ..navya..kya pata aaj tujhe bhi koi miljaye..koi rich
handsome rajkumar tumse akar takra jaye..
navya:appy yeh asli duniya hai..koi magical world nahi..ki koi prince
mujhe mil jaye..yeh magical moments meri life mein..nahi yaar..(she
smiles lukin outside the window..)
the trio reach the college..college is decorated wit heart shaped
balloons..flowers...etc..etc..
background song: teri meri yeh arzoo..kahi ankahijustujoo..abhi
abhi jo jagi jo so rahi thi..
kahi gayi khamoshiya..kaisi yeh nazdikiya..abhi
abhi mein jagi jo kho rahi thi..
dil ki baatein dil se keh dona..door na
ja..paas reh lona..yeh jawaani ki kahaani..
bezuba hi kehna jaye hum...
BEKABOO..O..O..o..dekho hum aur tum dekho horahe hai..
BEKABOO..O..O..O..khabon ke rangin ho rahe
hai..
BEKABOO..O..O..o..hum aur tum dekho horahe
hai..BEKABOO..O..OOO..
they get down fron t car..n start walkin lukin at the beautiful
decoration around. appy keeps lukin at the guys around...n ritz eyes
serachin fr someone her heart beats for..n navya..enjoin the beautiful
atmosphere..
appy:arre ritz waha dekh ranbir..ritz luks at him..
appy:hi ranbir ...ranbir luks at them n walks towards them..navya luks
at ritz smilin...ritz is nervous so navya holds her hand..
ranbir:hi to all...kaise ho..
appy:hum sab teehk hai..tum bolo..valentibes day par kya special
hai..(with a naughty smile n winks at ritz..)
ranbir:nahi yaar...humari kaha aisi kismat..kismat itni kharaab hai ki
koi ladki meri taraf dekthi tak nahi hai yaar..
appy:hai koi..lekin tumhari nazar abhi tak uspaar padi nahi..(she says
it softly..)ritz hits her hand n gives a tuf luk at her..
ranbir:tumne kuch kaha..
appy:nahi nahi..kuch nahi..
phone ring...ranbir receives t cal..ha yaar anath bolo na..kaha hai
tu..accha teek hai..wahi ruk main aa raha hu..
ranbir:k girls..mera ek dosth aya hai..uska humare college mein pehla
din hai..so mein usse lekar aata hu..nd he goes off frm ther..
ritz is a little upset about ranbir still not feelin fr her..navya
consoles her..nd says dont worry yaar ..agar tumhara pyaar sach
hai..toh woh tumhe zaroor
milega..
appy:haa..tension matle..dekho aaj uska dosth aa raha hai..kya naam hai uska..haa..anant ...kya pata..uska dil mujh par ajaye..
trio start laughin...
background voice: dosti aur parivaar..yehi hai navya ki zindagi..
ek aur shaqs banega uski yehi khoobsurath zindagi ka hissa..
lekin is baath se anjan hai navya ...

~~~~EPISODE 1 END~~~~

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neetha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello all...we all hav loved navya..t way it is..this is jst an attempt frm me to re-live navya..hope u all like it...
episode 2 comin soon..👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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briiliant

down memory lane

was supebbb

carry on
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very good. Waiting for the 2nd episode
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear so good.. Am re- reading all those lines..

The way everyone speak u've brought it out so real.. 👏

waiting for 2nd episode 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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arae waah,,,,,, hume ek naya writer milgayi,,,,,,, each an every line is awesome and waitin for the 2nd epi,,,,,,,,
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow yaar superb...your writing style is fantastic the way you describing the details it was so easy for me to imagine every scene ..👍🏼 plz update soon. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome sperb dear carry on👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolfathema

arae waah,,,,,, hume ek naya writer milgayi,,,,,,, each an every line is awesome and waitin for the 2nd epi,,,,,,,,

hey dear..thanx a lot..thats a huge compliment..😃this is my first post...😃😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely... navya love saga from a new writer haaan, carry on...

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