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Posted: 13 years ago
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Episode 2 is really rockin,,,,,,, cant wait to watch the 3rd one,,,,,,,, plsss update soon am goin mad,,,,,,,, very good story writin,,,,,,,,👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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EPISODE 3
Anya will be deeply lukin into each other's eyes..the crowd loved aour ananth's voice..they will give him a big round of aplause..ahaaa..the eye lock breaks..our bholi bhali navya apne palkein jhuka lethi hai...ananth luks at the crowd nd smiles n says thank u..ritz n appy ask navya about y was she late..she misd ananth's beautiful voice...she'll smile...nd again her eyes turn towards ananth..the whole crowd will be congragulatin him..he'll be thankin all..n suddenly...he luks at navya..he realises she is watchin him..oh god!!navya will be shocked..she ll again turn off her eyes..she ll be askin to herself..navya..yeh tu kya kar rahi hai..kyun usse aise dekh rahi hai..then the crowd clears gradually..n then ranbir plans to introduce ananth to navya..he cals ananth n takes him to navya n gang..
ranbir:navya..yeh mera best friend ananth..
ananth:hi..nice meetin u..(with a cute smile)
navya:(oh..o..o..she's lost in his eyes again..k she's back to concious..)hi..(with a very light smile..n thodi si ghabrayi hui..)
navya:(to appy n ritz)chalo tum dono class nahi chalna hai kya??
appy:arre yaar navya..tu bhi kitni borin hai yaar tu..mausam itna accha hai(lukin at ananth)aur tu us borin se class mein jakar baithne ki baath kar rahi hai..
ritz:ha yaar navya..aaj bunk karthe hai na..
navya:nahi yaar..dekh aaj college ka pehla din hai yaar..aur pehle din hi bunk...nahi nahi..teehk nahi hai..
ananth,ranbir n harry will be lukin at her..
ananth:haa guys chalo hum bhi class chalte hai..(ek aur seedha saadha baccha)
appy ritz are shocked n luk at him..
harry:(to appy n ritz)aise mat dekho..yeh bhi navya ke category ko hi belong kartha hai..
all start laughin then they go to class..
in class:
navya n ritz sit together..n behind them appy is sittin..
ananth n gang enters the class..
appy:(to navya n ritz)arre yeh hero kitna handsome hai na yaar..
ritz:kya baath hai appy..tujhe bada interest hai ananth par..
navya is silently listenin to their conversation..n smilin..
appy:haan yaar..but kya kare woh toh...navya ke ankhon mein khoya hua tha..n she starts laughin..
navya:(surprised..luks at appy..)appy yeh tum kya keh rahi ho..maine toh abhi tak usse teek se baath tak nahi ki..
ritz:haan yaar appy..dono ne abhi tak baatein kahi ki..ankhon hi ankhon mein baatein kar rahe the...taki koi inki baatein na sune..
navya stares at ritz n appy..aur muh phula kar baith jaathi hai..ritz n appy giv hi-fi n start laughin again..
ananth sits beside navya..(kuch 4 ya 5 feet ki doori par)ranbir sits with him..n harry sits behind them..after sittin ananth luks at navya n gives a hi wala smile..she turns her face u knw ghabrakar..ananth narrows his eyebrows..n luks down n smiles..lecturer enters into the class..this lecturer is one of the best lecturers in the college..Ms archana mam..a middle aged lady..quite broad minded..fun-lovin types ki..the whole class wishes her gud mornin..she too wishes all..
Ms.Archana:hmm sabhi students aaj kafi acche mood mein lag rahe hai..
class:yes mam...
Ms.Archana:haan haan...hona hi chahiya..afterall its the day of love..
class:ooo...
Ms.Archana:k..k..hum log aaj ek game khelte hai..a message game..wat say?
class:woohoo..yes..
Ms.Archana:k..yaha mere paas kuch chits hai jahan par maine is class ke saari ladkiyon ke naam likhe hai..every boy will pic a chit..aur usme jis bhi ladki ka naam hoga..us ladke ko us kadki ke liye ek message likhna hoga..
class:ooo..
Ms.Archana:aur..aur.. poore lass ke saamne use padhna hoga..aur us ladki ko bhi wohi ladke ke liye ek message likhna hoga..
class:awesome game mam..nd all start laughin..
every guy pics a chit..n tel the name of the gal written in the chit..
ab ranbir ki baari ayi..
ranbir:(he smiles)ritika..
appy n navya get excited n luk at ritz..n wink their eyes..titz is ofcourse verrry happy..now its the turn of our hero..
ananth:navya...(n luks at her)
navya is shocked again..appy murmers hayyee..navya..kitni lucky hai tu..ritz smiles at navya in excitement..navya slowly luks at ananth
Ms.Archana:hmm..intersting..k..k..abhi message likhna shuru kardo..
whole class starts writin messages..ranbir n ritz lukin at each other chori chori..n appy is teasin ritz..
Ananth is lukin at navya..navya realises tat he's lukin at her..she's a little ghabrayi hui..ananth is continuously lukin at her..she luks at him ..he's still lukin at her..navya is confused about y is ananth lukin at her so much..(actually humara hero is observing her to know how is she..warna message kaise likh saktha hai..)
Ms.Archana:k..k..class.ab ek ek karke sabhi apni messages padho..
each students starts readin their messages..some funny messages..some love messages..some friendship messages..whole class is enjoin this game..ab ayi ranbir ki baari..
ranbir:tum bohot acchi ho ritika..
ritz:tum bhi bohot acche ho ranbir..(ittefaq se both had written the same message to each otehr..whole class..ooo..ooo..o..oo..n ritz blushin..)abhi ananth ki baari..
Ms.Archana:haan ananth..abh tum apna message do navya ke liye..
harry:arre mam..woh kya kahega..usne toh aaj hi join kiya hai..woh toh navya ko jaantha bhi nahi..
Ms.Archana:teek hai..usse try to karne do..kabhie habhie ek mulakath hi kafi hoti hai..kisi ko samajhne ke liye..
ananth:(hesitates)navya..bohot hi innocent ..hmm..simple aur thodi si ghabrayi hui si hai..
class:(all start clappin)
Ms.Archana:wah ananth...dekha class..maine kaha tha na..ek mulaqat kafi hai kisi ko samamjhne ke liye..k..ab navya tumhari baari..
navya n ananth luk at each other..
background voice:kya yeh pehli mulakath ki pehchan..
layegi in dono ko aur bhi kareeb..

~~~~EPISODE 3 END~~~~
neetha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
hope u guys love this 3rd epi..thanx a lot for lovin ma work😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Awesome dear.lovd it pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Liked it a lot ... Do continue
shahz thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Awsome yaar plz continue.. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Superb,mindblowing!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
superb superb chapter loved it very much
your writting skills is awesome
keep writing and update soon
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
very nice awsome di aap sach mein writter bon jao yaar awsome ab bas epi four dekhne khe liye dil machal raha hai thank u for the awsome post😛


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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
superb post jus luved it...cant wait to hear msg...giv epi4 asap im gettin impatient...

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