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Posted: 13 years ago
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πŸ‘awesome post...like it...!
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Very well going.. Awesome neethaπŸ‘
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awesome post,,,,,,,, just loved the way u started and movin the epi's,,,,,,, alll r tooo goood,,,,,,,neetha u better become a writer yaar,,,,,,, story an ur narration is tooo goood,,,,,,
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wow..luvd ittt
waiting fr ur next updt
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EPISODE 4

all r waitin for navya's message...navya is scared..she luks at ritz..ritz isharon mein kehti hai...say na..navya luks at mam..mam also gives her a positive sign..she is scared..she's hesitatin...she luks at ananth..he's curious to knw her answer..hmmm
tin..tin...tin,,,tin...bell rang..class khatam...
Ms.archana:oh..oh..shayad ananth ko navya ka message khud usse akele mein poochna hoga..anyways class...aap logon ke liye ek gud news hai...aaj staff meetin hai..so class nahi hogi..go enjoy urself..
class:wooohhoo..thank u mam...
all the students rush out of the class..thabhi a guy pushes navya(janboojkar nahi..galthi se)aur navya ke hathon se uskekuch papers gir jatha hai..ananth sees it n cums ther to help her..while pickin up the papers he helds his another hand on navya's hand unknowingly..navya stares at him..but ananth is unaware...she keeps lukin at him..n slowly tries to remove her hand off..then ananth realises his hold on her..he luks at her wit a guilty luk..n removes his hand soon..n gives her all the papers wic he collected from the ground..ritz n appy see the whole scene n smilin..then appy cums ther..
appy:(naughty way)navya kya hua..tu teek toh hai na..??
ritz:haan yaar appy..navya ko kya ho saktha hai..(naughtily)annath tum teek ho na??n they start laughin..ananth n navya realise tat appy n ritz r teasin them..then ranbir n harry cum ther to save annath from this raggin..
harry:oye ananth..in ladkiyon se na bach ke rehna..
ranbir:haan yaar..ladkiyan yani apath ki pudiya..
appy:haaa..waise tum ladke bhi doodh ke dhule hue nahi ho..
ritz:tum ladkon se toh hum ladkiya sow guna behetar hai..
behes chalti rehti hai..abt boys v/s gals..tabhi navi ka phone bajtha hai..all turn silent..navi luks at ritz..
navya:renu dee ka phone..
ritz:ha teek hai..tu baat karle..
navya walks a litl aside..
ranbir:k..k..guys behes bandh karthe hai aur kahi bahar chalthe hai..wat say?
ritz:(excited)haan..haan...zaroor
appy:(teasin ritz)haan ritz itna excitement kyun?
ritz:(narrows her eyebrows)hmmm...nahin bas aise hi..bohot din hogaye na..hum saare dosth bahar nahi gaye..
harry:haan yaar idea accha hai..waise bhi class nahi hai..aur aaj valentine day hai toh malls mein khubsurath ladkiyan kuch zyada hi bhari hongi..n winks eyes at ranbir..
ananth gets a message fronm nimmi..to cum home soon..
annath:nahi yaar ..tum log jao..mein nahi aa raha..actually kal mujhe apni family ke saath kuldevi ke mandir jana hai..so abhi kuch kaam baki hai..so jaldi ghar jaana hoga..sorry guyss...
tabhi navya wahan aati hai..
ritz:accha navya tu chal rahi hai humare saath..?
navya:kaha?
ritz:hum log soch rahe the ki aaj mall jaye...
navyaaA:anahi yaar..renu dee ka phone hai..unko meri kuch madad chahiye..kal hum log shehar se bahar ja rahe hai na isliye..sooo..sorry
harry:(upset)accha hai..ananth bhi nahi aa raha..aur tum bhi nahi aa rahi..
navya luks at ananth wit a question mark on her face about y he is not goin..ananth luks at her n says..mujhe ghar mein kuch kaam hai..(kya baath..aur anya ek doosre ke ishare kaafi samajhthe hai...)
ritz:teek hai toh hum bhi nahi chalte hai..(upset)
navya:arre yeh kya baath hui ritz..agar hum nahi chal rahe..to tum kyun apna plan kharabh kar rahe ho..tum log jao..plss..mereliye..
ananth:haan guys tum log enjoy karo..plss..mereliye bhi
ranbir:k guys hum charo jaathe hai...aur ananth navya ko kisi aur din saath mein lejayenge..n points towards anya n says..teek hai na?
anya smiles n says haan bilkul..(woh bhi saath mein..)all surprised n luk at them..then all start smilin..
ranbir:teek hai bhai ananth..chal tere saath gate tak toh aa hi sakthe hai..
then the boys trio walk in the front..nd the gals trio follow them..
while walkin towards the gate..
harry;oye ananth..ek baath sach sach bata?
ananth:haan bol na..kya?
harry:tujhe navya kaisi lagi?
ananth:yeh kaisa sawal hai?
harry:arre yaar..seedha seedha ek sawal poocha..navya tujhe kaisi lagi?
ananth:haan teek hai..
ranbir:sirf teek?
ananth:acchi hai..
harry:mujhe aisa kyun kag raha hai..ki tum dono ke beech kuch pak raha hai...hmm ya..pak saktha hai..(n smiles at ananth)
ananth:oh mere bhai..aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...aur nahi kuch aisa ho saktha hai..
ranbir:oye yeh mat keh ki kkuch nahi ho saktha..pyaar kisi ko bhi khali haath jaane nahi detha mere yaar...
ananth:wah..wah..tujhe bada patha hai pyaar ke baare mein??
ranbir:nahi aisa kuch nahi hai..
harry:ritzzz..(teasin)
ranbir:chupkar..aisa kuch nahi hai...woh sirf meri dosth hai..
ananth n harry luk at each other..then luk at ranbir n start laughin..
the gals trio:
ritz:(lukin at navya)appy ananth kafi cute sa hai na?
appy:(ritz ka ishara samajh gayi)haan yaar kitna cute hai...aur toh aur uski ankhein my god...itna sexy hai..hayyyee..jis kisi par bhi woh nazar pad jayena..uss ladki ki zindagi toh hit hai...
ritz:haan yaar appy..but har koi itna lucky thodi na ho sakthi hai..
navya quitely listenin to their discussion..
appy:par apni navya ki toh life bangayi yaar...
navya:kya??ab ananth aur tum donon ke beech mein mujhe kyun kheench rahi ho huh??
appy:tujhe kheench kaha rahe hai..tu toh already hai..
navya:aisa kuch nahi hai meri ma..
ritz:navya..tu mane ya na mane..ananth jis tarah se tujhe dekh raha tha na..woh dekhkar koi bhi keh saktha hai..ki kuch toh hai tum donon ke beech..nd appy n ritz tap her back softly n start laughin..
scene shifts to ananth n gang
ranbir:tu jis tarah se usse dekh raha tha na..usse toh kuch aur hi lag raha tha..
ananth:arre mein usse kaha dekh raha tha??
harry:(laughin)oye..jhoot matbol..Shri shankar dayal bajpaiji ka pota hokar jhoot boltha hai..sharam nahi athi..
ananth:mein kaha usse dekh raha tha..??
ranbir:jab tune usse pehli baar dekha apne gaane ke baad..tum dono toh ek doosre ki ankhon mein kho gaye the..
harry:kya chemistry thi tum dono ke beech..wah..
ranbir:aur class mein message likhne ke bahane bhi usse itna dekh raha tha..
harry:agar mein kisi ladki koh itna dekh raha hota na..toh mujhe usse pyaar hogaya hota..
ranbir laughs..
ananth:pya...pyaaar..ek nazar mein pyaar..wah harry tera funda bhi alag hai..dekho tum dono maine tumhe pehle hi kaha tha..pyaar vyaar mere bas ki baath nahi..aur mere aur navya ke beech aisi koi chemistry ka mixture nahi ho raha..
scene shifts to navya n gang
navya :tum dono paagal hogayi ho..
appy:hum nahi...jaldi tum pagal ho jaogi...(romantically)ananth ke pyaar mein..
navya:aisa kuch nahi hai appy..(she is irritated)
ritz:toh phir woh tumhe iss tarah se ghoor ghoor kar kyun dekh raha tha??
navya:message likhthe waqt woh sirf janna chahtha tha ki main kaisi hu..sirf isliye..
appy:tujhe bada pata hai..
navya:aur koi baath nahi hai yaar..aur pehli din tum dono shuru hogayi..
navya is angry now..so ritz n appy decide to stop the matter..
rits n appy:accha baba sorry..
navya smiles..they hug each other..n navya leaves..
ananth n gang
ananth:mein navya ko sirf isliye dekh raha tha thaki message mein uske baare mein kuch likh sakoon aur kuch nahi..
harry:wah...tu toh antaryami hai na..dekh kar logon ko samajh jaatha hai.
ananth:tumhe yaad nahi mam ne kya kaha..kabhie kabhie ek mulakath...
ranbir n harry joins him in continuin this line..kafi hoti hai kisi ko samajhne ke liye..
all the three giv hi-fi n start laughin..
background voice:Dosth hi toh hai..jo hume zindagi ke khoobsurath palon se waqif karathe hai..
~~~~EPISODE 4 END~~~~
Edited by neetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello all..m really overwhelmed with such a gud response guys...m happy all r lovin ma work..thanx a lot..n do pm ur frenz about my post..this is all for our anya n their rankin..love u all...
thankuu..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wooow, awesome post dear, epi after epi ur writin skill's r increasin tremendously,,,,,,😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am speechless dear πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Edited by ssbnnavya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome yaar neetha..πŸ‘
Dear but wat did navya write about anant.. I was eagerly finishin off the story to find it..πŸ˜ƒ
But thu nayi lika es episode mein..πŸ˜•
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsome yaar πŸ‘πŸΌ plz update soon. πŸ˜›

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