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Posted: 13 years ago
epi was too good,,,,, nice portrayel,,,,,
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outstanding update!!!jealous navya is gd 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updates yar. Enjoyed reading please continue the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow neetha... Awesum updates... sry fr the later reply... Fabulous... Ur FF rocking... Just loved it... Waiting fr nxt update dear... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...superb writing..loved ur style of writing👏...continue soon dear
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EPISODE 14

navya is just staring at ananth..ananth suddenly luks at her..she is still starin at him..he is a little shocked n wondering abt y she is lukin at him tat way..he
isharon mein asks her wats wrong..k now she realises tat she is starin at him n
he noticed tat..she nodds her head indicatin nothin..
ritz:navya ,appy chalo archana mam bula rahi hai..fresher's party ki tayariyo
mein unhe humari madad chahiye..abhi abhi unka call aya..
ranbir:haan mujhe bhi unka cal aya..chalo ananth,harry jaldi karo..
ananth:haan teek hai..ab juniors ke liye itna toh karna padega na..nd luks at sonia n smiles..arrgghh!!!navya ka bp bad gaya..she again stares at sonia n ananth..ahhaa!!again ananth notices tat..he narrows his eyebrows..with a smirk
lukin at her..
navya:chalo ritz,appy chalthe hai..yahan apna waqt kyun barbaad kare..
n gives atough luk at sonia..k this tym even harry,ranbir,sonia,appy n ritz along wit ananth also noticed her anger..n leaves the place..
ranbir:isse kya hua??accha jaane do ..chalo guys hum bhi jaathe hai..then the both the gang leaves to the college auditorium..
Ms.Archana is waitin in the collge auditorium..the gals trio n boys gang arrives ther wit other collge members..
Ms.Archana:welcum guys..as u all knw..fresher's day kal hai guys..so its necessary ke jald se jald saari tayariya jaldi hona chahiye guys..so i mein ek ek team karungi wit two members each..aur uss team ko unka kaam somp dungi..so get ready wit all the work alloted..k??
all the members:k mam..
Ms.Archana:k..then ranbir n harry one tean..aur tum log caterin samhal loge ..
ranbir n harry nodd their heads..sayin k mam..
Ms.Archana:ritz aur appy..tum dono cultural programs ka list banaoge..n guide all
the contestants..k??
rits n appy:k mam..done..
Ms.Archana:ananth n navya...tum dono decorations department samhaloge..k??
ananth n navya..sure mam..
Ms.Archana:now yeh sab in depts ke head hai..so jo koi bhi inhe join karna chahtha hai..woh kar saktha hai..
everyone rushes to the required dept..
Ms.Archana:k..k..guys..listen yeh saare zimmedariyan acche se nibhao guys..
all the members:yes mam..dont worry..
Ms.Archana smiles n she leaves the auditorium..all the temas get into their work..saara auditorium luks so much happy n enthusiastic..background mein bekaboo
song is played..all r running idhar se udhar..
navya:ananth maine yeh list banaya hai jin cheezon ki zaroorath hai..
ananth:teek hai..(takes the list from her)ek kaam karthe hai dono saath mein chalke le aathe hai..ladkiyon ke in sab cheezon ka zyada idea hota hai..(n smiles)
navya:k..k..teek hai...chalo abhi chalthe hai..
then anya leave together in ananth's car..they reach a mall..(woow both anta together...)they enter a shop..
ananth n navya start lukin for the things they want..
ananth:pics up a thing required for decoration..yeh kaisa hai??
navya:nahi yeh nahi..
ananth:pics up another thing..yeh kaisa hai??
navya:nahi teek nahi hai..
this way she keeps rejecting all the items wic ananth selects..ohhh!!he is really gettin pissed now..
ananth:(gusse mein)teek hai..tum khud he select karlo..
navya:tum chilla kyun rahe ho??
ananth:aur nahi toh kya..mein jo bhi select karo tumhe pasand nahi aatha..
navya:agar accha nahi hai toh...mana karna bantha hai na..?
ananth:haan haan..tumhe toh mein hi pasand nahi hu..mere select kari hui cheezein tumhe kyun pasand ayegi..??
navya:maine kab kaha..ki tum mujhe pasand nahi..??
ananth:aur..(he pauses)he realises wat she said..
ohh..oh..navya is caught..
ananth:wait a min..tumne abhi abhi kya kaha..??
navya:(actin jaise kuch ata nahi)nahi..maine kuch nahi kaha..
ananth:nahi abhi tumne kuch kaha..mere baare mein..
navya:nahi..she walks off..he holds her hand..comes close to her..(he has forgotten tat he is in the mall..)mein tumhe pasand hu??
navya:(she is nervous)woh..main yeh keh rahi thi ki..tumse mujhe kya prob ho sakthi hai..n she goes away from him..
ananth smiles..teek hai abhi saare items jaldi le lo..then navya takes all the required item..ananth helps her in holdin those items..he keeps lukin at her every moment..n ya..she knws it now..then again they leave back to college..in the auditorium:
all r havin the lunch..
navya:(she hugs ritz )mujhe bhi bohot bhook lagi hai..
ritz:ho..agaye tum dono..kaise rahi shoppin??
ananth:haan kafi acchi thi(lukin at navya n a naughty smile on his face)
appy:hmm..matlab(in a naughty luk)
navya:(scared)matlab...saari cheeze mili jinki zaroorath thi..
navya luks at ananth..he smiles..
ritz:accha teek hai..abhi yeh lo..noodles..tum dono ka favorite..
ananth n navya grabs the noodle mug soon..n start hoggin like pigs..then everyone finishes their lunch..thn they start decorating the auditorium..
navya will climb up a ladder n will be decorating the pillars of the auditorium..no one's holdin the ladder so guys its obvious na..😉
ritz:navya neeche uthro..pagal ho gayi ho kya..(actually ritz is busy wit her wrk so door se she tells it to her)
navya:mein teek hu ritz...ananth is doin his own wrk..but somewer he knws tat its dangerous..so he keeps lukin at her evry now n then...
some frend of her comes near her to giv her the lightings needed to decorate on the pillar..she takes it..she tries to handle it herself..ananth cums ther..
ananth:navya..tum neeche uthro..mein kar dunga..
navya:nahi ananth mein sanhalungi..tum apna kaam karo..
ananth:navya meri baat suno...
navya:nahi ananth mein karlungi naaa...she looses her balance n she falls...ananth holds her in his arms..whole auditorium is silent..pin drop silent..navya is safe in ananth's arms..but she is closing her eyes out of
fear...ohh!!navya is scared...ananth keeps lukin at her..whole auditorium is lukin at them...
background music:lalalalaaa..
ananth is lost..he keeps lukin at her face as if its for the first tym he is lukin at her...n may be t last tym..wit soo much of love..n care..
background voice:pyaar ke phool khil rahe hai..abhi yeh dosti hai ya pyaar???

~~~~EPISODE 14 END~~~~
Edited by neetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome re... loved it😍
Edited by samrutha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow neetha di...luved ur update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
ananth:haan haan..tumhe toh mein hi pasand nahi hu..mere select kari hui cheezein tumhe kyun pasand ayegi..??
navya:maine kab kaha..ki tum mujhe pasand nahi..??
ananth:aur..(he pauses)he realises wat she said..
ohh..oh..navya is caught..
ananth:wait a min..tumne abhi abhi kya kaha..??
Oh my god this lines were sooo amazing god i could imagine how anant will react when navya said .god u r superb dear loved the part please update next part soon pls with longgg update :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow neetha awesum update... short nd cute... Loved it... just love d way ur writing... waiting fr nxt update dear... :)
Edited by binucse12 - 13 years ago

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