ff:NAVYA..a love saga..:)EPI33 updated:)page 109 - Page 28

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..<3 thanks dear... eagrly waitng 4 nxt u kno na weeknd again :( plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
jst lovd it!!!waiting fr d next
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow👏 superb dear, Navya safe n secure in anants arms...😳 lovd d update😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
EPISODE 16

navya in her room...standin near her favorite window..flashbacks of the moments spent today wit ananth ryt from the mall till the last moment in his car..she is lukin at t moon..she is blushin..she loved every bit of the day..n every moments spent wit ananth..suddenly her mobile starts ringing...yes its ananth's call..navya shocked..an unknown number se call..woh bhi raat ke 11:00 baje..she receives the call..
navya:hello..kaun bol raha hai..
voice:haan navya mein ananth bol raha hu..
navya:she is totally surprised..excited..full of mixed emotions..huh...aa..ananth..tum..tumhe mera no kaha se mila??
ananth:woh mainr ritz se tumhara number le liya tha..tum teek toh ho na?/
navya:haan teek hu..
ananth:mummy papa ko koi doubt nahi hua na..ki tumhe ghar maine drop kiya tha..
navya:nahi..unhe kuch pata nahi chala...tum ghar teek se pohunchgaye na?
ananth:haan..
navya:accha teek hai..main phone rakhthi hu..
ananth:ek min...
navya:(confused)haan bolo..
ananth:woh ritz ne party ka theme select kiya hai..
navya:theme..haa..accha kya hai??
ananth:men in black n ladies in white..
navya:wooww..accha hai..
ananth:tumhe pasand aaya..??
navya:haan itna accha toh hai..
ananth:haan accha hai..
actually ananth is findin ways not to cut the cal..n continue speakin wit navya..he just wants to hear her voice..speak to her..be wit her..
navya:kal collge mein milthe hai..abhi phone rakthi hu..kafi der ho gayi hai na..
ananth:(face turned pale)accha teek hai..gud nyt..sweet dreamz..
navya:gud nyt..aur swt dreamz..
then they cut the cal..navya is supe duper happy..actually woh bhi nahi chahthi thi ki unka baat karna band ho jaye..ananth is feelin great ..he hugs the pillow tightly...n sleeps..
next mornin:
all are in the auditorium..saari tayariyan ho chuki thi..aur fresher's party shaam ke 6:00 baje shuru honewali thi..so all are in the normal dresses n not in the party theme..usual classes chal rahi thi..some students in the class...some in the library..some in the canteen..some college se bahar..matlab malls mein..etc..etc..navya college nahi aa pathi hai due to sardi zukham..yes..she is not keepin well..she calls ritz n informs her abt it..
navya:ritz..kafi sardi hai yaar..nahi aa paungi..
ritz:navya kya hai yaar..come on kitna maza aata..
navya:haan mein shaam ko aajungi..dont worry..aur mera dress bhi stichi ke liye diya hai..toh woh lekar seedhe college aa jaungi..phir collge mein change kar lethi hu..
ritz:haan teek hai..aisa hi kar..waise hum bhi toh shaam ko alag dress pehenenge na..teek hai..mein cal rakhthi hu..tu rest kar..
ritz cuts the call ki ananth waha aa jatha hai..
ananth:hi ritz..
ritz:hi ananth..
ananth:navya kaha hai..(in excitement)
ritz:(wondering abt his excitement)tum itna excited kyun ho rahe ho navya ko lekar..
ananth:woooh...hmm..nahi bas aise hi..arrangements ek baar phir chek karne hai na..isiliye..
ritz:ohhh(she knows he is lyin)woh aaj collge nahi ayi..
ananth:kya???kyun???(in shock)
ritz:haan uski tabiyat teeek nahi hai..
ananth:kya hua usse??
ritz:sardi aur zukham..lekin shaam ko party mein aa jayegi..
ananth:(happy to knw she is comin in the evenin but sad tat he has to wait too long to c her..)accha teeek hai..
then finally its evenin 5:30..navya reaches college..she meets ritz n appy..ritz n appy are ready for the fresher's party wit their beatiful white luk..ritz is wearin a white gown...n appy is wearin a white long skirt n a white sleeveless top..
navya:woow...yaar tum dono bohot hi beautiful lag rahi ho..
ritz n appy:thanx yaar..abhi tu bhi jaldi tayar ho ja..
and tat tym they see a notice in the notice board..Ms.Archana has cald for a meeting for all the team members workin for this event..notice regardin this was put up in the notice board..
ritz:(to navya n appy)arre yeh dekho..notice..abhi ek meeting hai..
appy:teek hai yaar toh chalthe hai na..
navya:lekin ananth ko cal karke inform to kar dethi hu..n takes her cel fom her bag..
ritz n appy starin at navya..navya luks at them..
navya:kya hua??
appy:tumhe ananth ko phone karne ki badi jaldi hai..
ritz:haan kal woh mujhse tumhara no. maang raha tha aur aaj tum usse cal..
navya:aisi koi baat nahi hai..woh mera team member hai..sirf isiliye..
appy:haan haan..sirf team member..n they start laughin..navya blushes a bit..
ritz:haan teek hai teek hai..cal karle..hum chalthe hai..
then navya calls ananth..ananth is soo happy ki navya ne cal kiya..he receives the cal..
ananth:navya tum kaho ho??tabiyath toh teek hai na??
navya:haan..haan..main teek hu..ab tabiyat behetar hai,..main college mein hu..archana mam ne bulaya hai..meeting hai..
ananth:(super excited)tum college main ho..haan main abhi auditorium aatha hu..
navya:haan teek hai..(his voice sounded really excited n she knows it)
navya cuts the call..n they all meet in the auditorium..ananth sabse pehle waha pahunch gaya tha..he is waitin to c her..auditorium is filled wit all the members..he tries to find her..uski ankhein idhar udhar ghoom rahi thi..woh tadap raha tha uski ek jhalak ke liye..blur vision..he sees her..ya she is ther..he can see her..but just her glimpse..u knw the auditorium is totally filled..woh kaise bhi karke navya ko dekhtha hai..he starts walkin towards her..she sees him..ohh!!here he is..with total formal luk..black pant..black blazers..black shirt in brief black suit..he is lukin super hottt in black..aww!!she cant remover her eyes off him ..butnow her heart takes control over her eyes..its almost a day she dint see him..after the previous night.. her heart feels light...she also walks towards him..they reach each other nd abt to spk ki...archana mam makes an announcement...
Ms.Archana:hello all...i m feelin really proud of u guys..wat an fantastic arrangement in such a short duration..a huge applause to u all..
poora audi taliyon ke awaaz se ghoonj utha hai..all are happy tat their work has been appreciated..
Mr.Varun(remember the chem lecturer)really students a splendid job i must say..saare ke saare arrangements kaafi acche hai..very gud..
poora audi:thank u sir..
Ms.Archana:k..students sab log party ke liye tayar hai na..hope tumhare juniors ko pasand aaya..aur tum log bhi khoob enjoy karo..
n then she n varun sir leaves the auditorium...all the handsome guys in black..n gorgeous ladies in white..but navya is yet to get ready..all in the auditorium are excited n waitin for the party to begin..ananth again walks towards navya..she too starts walkin towards him..they again reach other..about to spk ki..ritz unhe rok lethi hai..
ritz:navya tu yaha kya kar rahi hai..jaldi tayar ho ja na..kaafi der ho gayi hai..
navya:(upset ki ananth se baat nahi ho payi)haan teek hai..main tayar ho jaathi hai..(luks at ananth)
ananth also luks at her with a sad face..then appy holds navya's hands n take her away...ananth lachar bebas hokar sirf navya ko dektha rehta hai..navya enters the ladies lounge to get ready..
navya:appy ritz..already 6:00 baj gaye hai..tum dono jao auditorium..main aa jathi hu..
appy:lekin tum akele tayar hogi toh late ho jayegi..
navya:nahi yaar..main tayar ho jaungi jaldi..dont worry..
ritz:accha teek hai..tum jaldi aa jao..
then appy n ritz leave the ladies lounge..navya will start gettin raedy..auditorium party start ho jaathi hai..MC's saare juniors ko welcome kar rahe hai..cultural programs also have started..ananth is waitin for navya..waitin to c her in white..ritz n appy are in the auditorium..he sees them n asks them abt navya..they inform him tat she is gettin ready..even ranbir n harry are with them..
ranbir:ritika..u r lukin beautiful..
ritz:thank u..(blushin)
appy luks at her n starts smilin..she is happy for her..
ananth n harry also smile lukin at ranbir..
party joro shoro se chal rahi hai..
ladies lounge:
navya is gettin ready..suddenly power goes off in the lounge area only..navya wonders abt wat has happened..there are no candles..no match sticks in the lounge..she decides to call ritz..ritz cell is ringing..but she is not receivin the call..her cel is in silent..navya cals appy too..uska bhi phone uske bag main hai..so even she doesn't receive her call...navya is tensed ..so she decides to call ananth..ananth is surprised to c navya's call..he receives it..
ananth:haan bolo navya..kya hua?/
navya:ananth waha par current hai kya?
ananth:haan hai..kyun ??
navya:yaha ladies lounge mein current nahi hai..maine ritz aur appy ko call kiya..lekin woh dono phone nahi uta rahi hai..
ananth:(starts lukin for ritz n appy..but he doesn't find them..)aa..nahi navya woh log dikh nahi rahe hai..main aa jatha hu..
navya:teek hai..
n they cut the call..navya is ready..but waitin for ananth to cum..she cant see anythin in the darkness..annath reaches ladies lounge..he opens the door of ladies lounge..
ananth:navya..tum kaha ho??
navya:ananth tum aa gaye..jaldi candle on karo..
ananth:haan ..hanan..ek min..
he lits the candle..n there she is ryt in front of him..she is wearin a beautiful white thin sleeved salwar..witha beautidul white long pair of earings..her lng beautiful hai is left open..she is lukin ravishin in white like an angel..he is stunned..woh ankhein phaad phaad kar navya ko dekh raha hai..she gets a little
nervous..she knows he is admirin her deeply..she cums n stands ryt in front of him..he is not able to take his eyes off her..
navya:chale..
ananth:still stunned..doesn't utter a word..
navya:ananth..chale..
ananth:huh..??haa..hmm..emm..haan chalthe hai..
the candle in his hands are totally bent n tat hot melted wax falls on his hands..he screams a bit..ouu..
navya:kya hua??(she holds his hands)
ananth:(luks at her..keeps lukin at her)kuch nahi..
navya:(lost in his eyes)dard ho raha hai??
ananth:(even he is lost in her eyes)ab teek hai..
he comes one step forward..she walks one step backward..agagin he wals one step forward..she moves on step backward..aise hi chaltha rehta hai..n she hits the wall..but still her eyes are into his eyes..he knows now tat she is trapped n cant move further back..he gives a naughty smile..comes close to her she breaks the eye lock n blushes ..he whispers in her ears..
ananth:(in a husky tone..awww..i love his husky tone..SR..)tum aaj bohot hi khoobsurath lag rahi ho navya..
navya:again she luks into his eyes..she is lost..she is as usual caught in his eyes n she doesn't want to b rescued..she keeps lukin into his eyes..he loves her eyes..he is deeply lost..her eyes are like an ocean..a vast n a beautiful place..its pleasin n temptin..callin him to swim in tat beautiful ocean..waitin to make him a part of the ocean..its magical..he is hypnotised..
background voice:in brief.."ACTIONS SPEAK LOUDER THAN WORDS.."

~~~~EPISODE 16 END~~~~
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Posted: 13 years ago
Neethu... very well written..👏
Superb..👏

It was actully a very borin week end.. But this episode made my day...🤗
Wonderful😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow dear super-b...😊...carry on..:)))
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum update dr!! I was w8n 4rm yestrda 4 ur update.plz write da nxt chap 2mrw dnt mke it l8. story is goin vry intrstng.plz update 2mrw plz!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb awesome neetha loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful...loved it n cud visualize😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome part Neetha...beautifully written...loved it...

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