New ff DO PREM DEEWANE Now I Cant Update Pg11

hi guys my new FF "DO PREM DEEWANE " actually last time my Ff "love birds" i cant complete that because of my marriage and etc.now i want to start my new ff DO PREM DEEWANE and i promise i will regularly update it and i will complete it with out failure and this is my New FF Posture

thanks for the new ff and waiting for this ff

Waiting for your FF.It looks promising.

Dev - our handsome lover boy who studying in abroad with his childhood friend
Bharka - Dev's childhood friend and also family friend
Dadima - Dev's grand mother she loves dev so much she calls him as her krishn kanhaiya
Padma - Dev's mother, widow
Maheswari devi - Bharka's mom who has evil plans to get marry dev & bharka for gaining rpship
Gopal das - Bharka's dad who follows his wife he dont have own thoughts
Radhika - our beautiful princess with lovable heart innocent divine soul she knows only giving and she is unique


GUYS THESE ARE THE CHARACTERS

waiting for ur ff pls continue soon and pls pm me when u update

Waiting for the FF continuation.

Part – 1

Hi guys here story begins from purohit bhavan

At mid night Phone bell Rings one old lady picks call and she is our Dev's dadima

Dadima: Hello

Dev: Dadi (Hearing Dev's Voice Dadima Frowns her eyebrows in confusion)

Dadi: Dev tu itna raat ko kyun Kiya waha tu teek hain

(Are u alright is there any problem there)

Dev: Dadi mein yahan bilkul teek hu Mein aapko ye batane ke liye Phone kiya ki aaj Radhastami aur mein ye poochne ke liye phone kiya ki aap log kaise mana rahe hai radhastami Mutt mein

Dadima: Dev tujhe kaise patha aaj radhasthami aur tu tho America mein rehthe ho

Dev: Dadi ye sab chodo mein aapko ek aur baat bathane wala hun aap ekdum choukoge

Dadima: Dev tu itni subah neend se ut gaya aur tujhe aaj ka mehatva patha chala isse zyada kya choukauge bhai

Dev: Dadi aap mera majak uda rahi ho aise tho mein nahi kehne wala ?

Dadima: Naraaz math ho meri Krishna kanhaiaya ab bathao kya bathana hain

Dev: Mein yahaan ki Radha Krishna temple jaane wala ho aur mein Radha rani ke liye chunari bhi leli Radha rani ko chadane ke liya

Dadima :" Wah bhai Kya Kamaal hain iss badlav ke karna jaan sakthi hu kya " asks him teasingly.

Dev: Kya Dadi aap bhi accha dadi mein raktha hu mujhe mandir jaane ke liye der ho rahi hain aur Dadi mujhe batao ki aap ne kaise manaya Radhastami I' ll catch u later

Dadima: arey suno woh barkha kaha hain

Dev: Mujhe nahin patha Dadi mujhe der ho rahi hain Bye Dadi Love You. Hangs up the phone Dadi aaj kisi aur ka b'day hain ek din aap ko jaroor bataungi

Here Dadima holding the phone says

Dadima: Kanhaji meri dev ko aise hi uss par aapki krupa banaye rakhiye

At the Morning Purohit bhavan :

Padma comes to dadi and takes blessings and asks

Padma : maaji aap thayyar hain

Dadima: Haan padma mein tho kab ki thayyar jab sab aajayenge tho humein mutt keliye nikalna hain

Maheswari devi comes from the stairs scolding a servant

Dadima: Arey maheswari kya hua subah subah us bechara par kyun chilla rahi hu

Maheswari: Kya bataon maaji ye nakur bhi na humein jaldi mutt pahunchana hein aur ek kaam nahi hua saare saaman yehi ki yehi hain

Gopal das interrupts

Gopal das: Ab bas karo derr ho rahi hain chale aap sab thayyar hain

Dadima: Haan hum sab aa rahe hain tum jaakar ghadi nikalo

Ab chalthe hain Radhika ke ghar mathura waise mein aap ko Radhika ke bhare mein kuch nahi bathaya I'm sorry

Shastriji: Radhika ki Babuji

Vrinda: Radhika ki Maa

Amma: Shastriji ki maa aur Radhika ki Dadi

Here in my story Radhika is not orphan She's Shastriji's own one and only daughter

Shastriji comes with adjusting his shawl shouting on vrinda

Shastriji: Vrinda ji aap thayyar hain kya humein jaana hain Vrinda ji kahaan hain aap

Vrinda: Jee aarahi hu aap pehle paani peekar shanth ho jaayiye hum sab thayyar hain

Shastriji: arey vrindaji aap naaraaj math hoiye aaj radhastami hain aur meri radhika ka janam din bhi hain aur tho Prasad bhi chadana hain aur ek baat vrindaji aaj mandir mein purohit parivaar bhi aa raha hain isiliye humein unse pehle mandir jaakar unki swagat thi thayyari karni hain aur Radhika kaha hain dekha nahin(Vrinda interrupts. . .)

Vrinda: Aap yeh sab chinta chodiye sab acche se ho jayenge aur rahi baat aap ki beti ki toh Radhika ki woh tho subah hi mandir chali gayi

Amma ji adjusting her saree pallu

Ammaji: Lalla aaj Radhastami hein aur aaj ke din Radhika ko sambhalna bahut muskhil hain woh tho ek hafthe se Radharani ki Kapde tayyar kar rahi hain aaj uska janam din se zyada usko Radharani ki Janam din hain kyunki Radha rani Kanha preet hain aur hamari Radhika ka Preet hain Kanha Ji samjhi gayo lalla

Shastriji: Jee Amma Ab hum Nikalthe

All proceeds towards Mandir

At Mandir:

Mandir filled with devotees chanting Banke bihari ki Jai Shastriji announces that aarti starting just then Purohit Family enters

When Purohit Family entering in to the Mandir small children dressed in Radha Krishna attire and welcomes them with flowers. Purohits impressed

Dadima: Radhe Radhe Shastriji

Shastriji: Radhe Radhe Maaji aarti shuru kare maaji

Dadima: Jee Shastriji

Slowly curtains goes up and all see the Radha Krishna Idols beautifully Decorated all stunned especially Dadima aarti starts

Shastriji: Vrindaji yeh Radhika hain kaha Aarti shuru karni hain

Radhika starts singing " O re Kanha" but no one can see her shastriji face lits up and starts aarti and aarti completes

Shastriji gives aarti to all

Dadima: Shastriji aap ne toh kamaal kardiya hume aaj Radha rani kitni sundar lag rahi hain naazar hattane ka mann hi nahi kar raha hain aur mandir ki sajawat aur ek baat Aarti kisni gayi bahut sundar surili man prasann ho gaya

Shastriji: Jee maaji mujhe bhi accha laga maine socha nahi tha iss tarah saja hongi mandir

Padma confusedly asks: Kya yeh sab aapne nahi kiya shastriji

Shastriji: Nahi maaji mein nahi meri beti ne kiya yeh sab aaj mandir mein uski kanha bakthi saaf dekhaaye de rahi hai mujhe aur aarti bhi meri beti radhika ne hi gaaya hain aur maaji aap se ek prarthana hain aaj meri radhika ki janam din hain aur humein Radha Krishna ko Prasad chadaya hein agar aap bura na maano tho aap thoda khana grahan kiya tho mein samjhungi ki usko aapki aashirwad bhi milgaya

Before Dadima say something Maheswari Devi interrupts

Maheswari Devi: Kaise baatein kar rahi hain aap aap jaise logon ki ghar ki khana Raj purohit Parivaar walon ko khilana chehthe ho thum Maaji ne taareef kya kardi aap bhool rahe hain ki aap is mandir mein poojari hamari di hui paisonse aap logo ki ghar chalathe hain tumhari itni himmat Just then some one stops her woh hain humari radhika

Ruk jaayiye aunty ji.

Precap: Radhika's Introduction

I know guys Part 1 is very boring story starts now from now onwards story revolves around only Radhika and Dev If any mistakes please forgive if you like please click on the like button😊

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