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Posted: 13 years ago
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really liked it a lo. Nice start/ and glad to see u back

Please m me when u update so that ca cac it easily
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great start.Pls continue.Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you Guys Now Part 2 is Ready

Part 2

After hearing the voice all the people moves aside

Dadima eagerly waiting to know who's that voice

Slowly people moves aside Our princess Radhika comes and she's looking gorgeous in beautiful lehenga Dadima shocked and praising Radhika in her mind

Dadima: kitni sundar aur susheel lag rahi hai bilkul Radha rani jaisa

(How beautiful she is and looking very innocent just like Radha rani )

Radhika comes and stands facing maheswari devi

Maheswari Devi: Kaun ho thum (Who are you?)

Radhika: mein kaun hun ye aap ko baadmein pata chalega lekin aap ye bataye ek bramhan ho kar Doosre bramhan ko neecha dikha raha hein mana ki ye mandir ki poojari hain aap ki diye hui paisonse unki ghar chalthe lekin iski bhi ek baath humein bhi yaad rakhna ki Kanha ko hamari Sukh Dukh yehi poojari ki wajah se patha chalthe hain isiliye woh hum sabse ucch sthan par rahenge. (Who am i, I'll tell you later but tell me one thing u also belongs to bramhins so how can u insult another bramhan we agree that because of u only they survive their lives but how can we forget that through poojari only God knows our problems and etc so they are great )

Maheswari devi: Toh kya hua humein inke ghar ke khana khana chahiye kya?

(So you mean that we should eat their food)

Radhika: Maaf kijiye Auntyji lekin aap ek baath bhool rahe hain ke ye Inki ghar ka khana nahi Kanha ki Prasad hain jo sab ke liye ek hain aur woh chahe kisiki ghar ka ho Prasad Prasad hotha hain .(Iam Sorry Aunty But this is not Shastriji's home made food This is Kanha's Prasad and Prasad belongs to whose house is not the matter Prasad is Prasad always)

And Maheswari Devi trying to extend the Matter then Dadima interrupts

Dadima: Maheswari ye theek keh rahi hain ab iss baath ko yehi kathm karo aur maafi mango Shastriji (Maheswari she is right say sorry to shastriji)

Maheswari devi with disgusting tone Says Sorry to Shastriji

Shastriji: Nahi nahi maaji aap inse kahiye ki iski Zaroorat nahi ( No Maaji there's no need to say Sorry)

Dadima: Waise thu hain kaun beta mein tumhe kabhi yahaan nahin Dekha.( By the way who are u I didn't see you before here) excitingly asks Radhika

Radhika: Jee Main Radhika, Radhika Shastri ( Iam Radhika Shastri)

Shastriji: Meri Beti Radhika Maaji, Radhika Ye Swargiya Raj purohit ki Maa, aur yeh Padma ji Swargiya Raj purohit ki Patni, aur ye unki rishtedaar Gopal Das aur unki Patni Maheswari Devi ( She is my Daughter and Radhika she is late Rajpurohits Mother, Padmaji Late Rajpurohits Wife, They are Purohits Relatives Gopal Das and Maheswari Devi)

Radhika takes blessings from Dadima and asks for sorry

Radhika : Maaf kijiye Dadima agar aapko bura laga tho ( Sorry Dadima if you hurt with my behavior)

Dadima: nahi Beta aisi koi baath nahi hain mein tho bahut khush hoon aaj thune Mandir ko itna accha sajayi aur Radha rani toh bahut sundar hein aur tumhari gaana bhi mann prasann ho gaya beta ( No Radhika theres nothing like that but iam very happy with your arrangements especially Radharani decoration and your aarti song iam very happy)

Padma: Wasie aaj tumhari bhi janam din haina Janamdin Mubarak

Radhika takes blessings from Padma by touching her feet

Padma : Isi tarah hamesha kush raho ( Be happy)

Amma Calling Radhika, Radhika hears that and excuses herself

Amma: Radhika.. Radhika ?

Radhika: Jee Amma Aayi? (Yes Amma Coming)

Amma: Kahaan Reh gayi radhika tho subah se mori nain taras gayi hain tore dekhne keliye (Where are u Radhika from morning iam searching for u)

Radhika: Amma mein yahaan hun aap mujhe aashirwad nahi diya aaj( Iam here Amma and you didn't gave blessings to me)

Amma: Radhika agar tum moko Dikhega navi toh kaise do Aashirwaad Kahan Chaligayi thi tori amma ko bina batake ( Radhika I Didn't see u how can I give blessings and u didn't tell me where r u from Morning)

Radhika: Achha Teek hain ab tho aagayi hoon na Ab tho dedo aashirvad( Ok Amma now iam here then give blessings)

Amma: Jug Jug Jiyo

Dadima and padma watching how Radhika and Amma attached to each other

Padma: Maa ji kitni acchi sanskaari ladki haina Radhika ( Maaji she is so good)

Dadima: Who tho hain bahu Radhika tho mera mann jeeth liya ( Yes U R right )

Hearing Dadima and Padma's Conversation Maheswari Devi Feeling very furious on Radhika She just watching Radhika with angry

While Shastriji Comes to invite Purohit Family For Prasad

Shastriji : Maaji Prasad Tayyar hain Kripa Karke aap log aajayeyi ( Maaji Prasad Ready Please Come)

Dadima: Ji Shastriji, Chalo Padma , Maheswari, Gopal Das aap log bhi Chalo ( Yes Shastriji, Come Padma, Maheswari, Gopal Das you too also Come)

Dadima : Shastriji Waise aapne bataya nahin Radhika kya karti hain aur hum tho use aaj ke pehle kabhi yahaan dekha nahin ( Shastriji What about Radhika we Didn't see her before here)

Shastriji: Jee Maaji woh Delhi mein apni padaayi kar rahi hain iss saal uski Padaayi poori hogayi tho yahaan aagayi ( She stays in Delhi, studying there and she completed her studies )

Padma : Accha Kya Padrahi Hain woh ( Good what she is studying)

Shastriji: Jee MBA kar rahi hain ( She studying MBA)

Dadima: Lekin Shastriji woh tho aise dikthe hi nahin varna aaj kal ki ladkiyaan pooch math.

Someone closes Dadima eyes from backside.

Precap: Dev Coming Back

Edited by joemahika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
thanku so much 4r ur update😃waiting 4r devs entry 😛if u get time please do continue soon also pm me please thanku👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful update waiting for next part dev entry
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful update. Finally Dev has come back. Waiting for Dev & Radhika interaction. Pls update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waiting for the next part eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waiting for dev's entry pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3

Dadima Confusedly frowns her eyebrows and asks

Dadima: Kaun hain aap and Dadima removes hands from her eyes and says Mohini

Mohini:Radhe Radhe Dadima Kaise hain aap (How r U) asks her and takes blessings

Dadima : Mein tho theek hun lekin aap log yahaan maheswari tho mujhe bataya nahin ki aaplog aa rahe hain ( Iam fine but how u all here Maheswari didn't tell anything that u r coming)

Just then Maheswari comes there telling

Maheswari Devi: Maaji mujhe bhi nahi patha ki yeh log aa raha hein ( Even I don't Know that they are coming)

Dadima: chalo Koi Baat nahin aaplog aagaye humein bahut accha laga aur Bacche aur virat kahaan hain ( Nope U all Here feeling good by the way wheres Children and Viraat)

Mohini: Dadima Woh Viraat ji wahan muttadeesh ji se kuch baat kar raha hain woh Do din baad Janmashtami haina ( Dadima Viraat ji discussing with muttadeesh ji about Janmasthami celebs)

Dadima: Ye Viraat aathe hein Kaam pe lag gaya chodo Bacche Kahan ? ( Viraat always on Work leave him where children)

Mohini : Dadima ab un dono wahaan honge jahaan unki Radhika didi hein ( they went to meet their Radhika Sis)

Dadima confusedly asks Radhika ke paas

Mohini: Jee Dadima aaj agar hum yahan aaya tho uski wajah Radhika, aaj uski b'day haina tho yeh dono zidd karne laga ki Didi si mina hain toh hum ( Yes Dadima we are here becoz of her today her b'day and children want to meet her so. . . )

Padma comes there holding aarti plate and sees Mohini

Padma: Mohini kaise ho tum ( Mohini how are u)

Mohini takes blessings from Padma and says

Mohini: Mein theek hun choti maa aap batayeye aap kaise hein ( Iam Fine how r u Choti maa)

Padma making serious face : Mein toh bahut naaraj hun itne din hogaye aap logon ko dekh kar aur bacche kahan ( iam very angry on u after so many days we are meeting u and where's children)

Mohini shows Kids playing with Radhika

Dadima: Waise yeh batao, Radhika ko kaise jaanthi ho tum aur bacche uske saath itne acche se khel rahe hein ( By the way how u know radhika and children are very mingled with her)

Mohini : Dadima Radhika Hamari Delhi ki Mutt ki Paathshala mein bacchon ko padane keliye aathe rehthi hai aur rahi baath meri bacchon ki woh dono bahut pyar karte hain Radhika se, Radhika ke bina inn dono ko sambhalna mere bus ki baath nahin hain ( Dadima Radhika teaches lessons for children in our mutt and children loves her very much with out her I can't tackle them)

Padma: Lekin Mohini Radhika tho wahan MBA kar rahi haina tho woh mutt mein kaise ? ( But Mohini Radhika studying there right?)

Viraat comes in between these conversation and takes blessings from Dadima, Padma, Maheswari devi, Gopal Das

Viraat: Jee Chotima woh wahaan MBA kar rahi hain saath hi woh Humaari Mutt Mein Bachon Ko Padathi hai aur Humaari Call Center mein bhi Kaam Karthi hain She's very talented dadima bahut acchi ladki hain ( Yes Chotima she' sdoing not only MBA but also teaches Mutt children and she works in our Call center also)

Meanwhile Radhika playing with Mohini Kids , Shastriji comes there with Prasad Plate in his hands and asks

Shastriji: Radhika beta Prasad lo aur bachhe,kitni pyaari lag rahi hain ( Radhika take the Prasad and who' children are they how cute both)

Radhika: Babuji Yeh Swasti aur yeh Ranchod,aur yeh Mohini didi ke bacche jiske call center mein Kaam karthi ho, Chalo baccho babuji ka aashirwad lo ( Babuji She is Swasti, he is ranchod, these kids are Mohini Didi's kids where iam staying in Delhi, Come on kids take blessings)

Shastriji: Sada Khush raho (God Bless you)

Radhika: Swasti Mummy, Daddy Kahaan hain there comes mohini

Mohini: Yahaan hain

Radhika: Mohini Didi kaise hain aap aur Viraat bhaiyya kahaan hain

Viraat : aap ne naam liye hum ne Haajir

Viraat &Mohini: Happy Birthday Radhika and all the best for ur future

Purohit Family Comes there to leave from mandir

Dadima: Accha Shastriji ab hum chalthe hain chalo Mohini Radhika interrupts confusedly asks Mohini

Radhika: Didi aap Dadima ko jaanthe ho?

Mohini: Haan Radhika Jab se Viraat ji se shaadi hui tabse jaantha hoon Woh kya hain Viraat ji ki Dadi jo hain

Vrinda: Is ka Matlab

Gopal Das: Iss Ka matlab hain Viraat mera Beta aur Mohini meri bahu aur yeh dono shaitaan humari potha aur pothi

Ranchod and Swasti touches Dadima Feet and takes Blessings

Dadima in Shock

Radhika asks Concerdly Dadima

Radhika: Dadima Kya hua aap ko Paani laavo aap keliye

Dadima : Nahi nahi mujhe kuch nahin hua mein tho heyraan ho

Maheswari devi: Lekin Kyun Maa ji

Dadima: Tumhe dekha nahin ranchod mere Paair chua aur ashirwad liya lagtha hain Delhi ki asar hua hain inn par

Padma Comes there with some mutt Servants

Padma: Maa ji Derr ho rahi hain baaki ki baatein ghar par karein Woh Muttadeesh ji thodi der baad Ghar aa raha hain aap se kuch baath karna chahtha hain.

Dadima : accha shastriji ab hum chalthe hain aur Radhika aaj tumhe milkar bahut accha laga Radhika touches dadima feet and takes blessings

Swasti and Ranchod are looking sad towards Radhika

Dadima: Chalo bacchon chalthe hain aur aap log aise moo phula kar kyun hain

Swasti: Dadima humein Radhika didi ke saath rehna hain

Viraat: Swasti aise zid nahin karthe

Ranchod: Nahin Dad hum nahin chalne waale, Mohini Shouts on them

Mohini: Zyada Ho gayi Ranchod chalo ab ghar chalthe warn eek doongi, she lifts her palm to hit then Radhika confronts her she will manage signaling with her eyes

Radhika : Kya didi koi aisa gussa karthe hain kya bacchon par aur tum logo Mummy ko kyun satha rahe ho waise bhi aap log yahaan 2 months rehne waale ho tho mein phir miloonga

Swasti: Promise didi

Radhika : Haan Promise, hum phir milenge, khelenge aur janmastami aa rahi hain khoob masthi karenge. while talking she takes them towards car and settles them

Dadima all seeing this towards whole way and loves how radhika tackles children

Shastriji , Vrinda, Ammaji and Radhika all together say Namaste and leaves Mandir

Purohit Family leaves to Purohit Bhavan

In the Car:

Dadima: Viraat kya Radhika jo kahin hain kya woh sach hain ?

Viraat : Jee Dadima hum yahaan 2 months rukhenge

Maheswari Devi: Par kyun Viraat , Mohini and Viraat stares each other and smiles

Viraat : Woh aap ko mein baad mein bathaongi philhaal Ghar aagayi hain chalo sab undar chalthe . removes his seat belt and goes to help dadima to get down from Car.

Days Passed atlast Janmasthami day has come Dadima, Padma and all Purohit family welcomed to mutt for Janmasthami celebrations but Dadima Little depressed, Seeing Dadima like this Padma asks

Padma: Kya hua Maaji aaj aap kuch bechein lag rahi hain

Dadima: Kuch nahi bahu Dev yaad aa rahi hain aaj uski janam din hain aur subah se uski phone nahin lag rahi hain Barkha ka phone nahin lag rahi hain Mohini hears the convo between Dadima and Padma and comes there

Mohini: Dadima aap ke liye aaj ek surprise hain chalo aap dono mere saath mein abhi aathi hun and she searching for Viraat asks some mutt people about him they points out him

Mohini goes there and suddenly pulls viraat aside

Mohini : Ghar mein sab tayyari hua ki nahin aur Woh Kahaan hai kuch Patha chala

Viraat: He is very near to Mutt andU Don't worry Darling every thing will goes well according to Plan and tries to kiss her just then Swasti comes there and stands like headmaster and asks

Swasti : Aap dono yahaan kya kar rahi hoon?

Mohini escapes from there saying she need to go and reaches where whole purohit family sits

Mohini: Chalo Dadima aapse milne koi Intezaar kar raha hain

Dadima with Upset voice says : Unse kaho abhi mera Mann nahin Hain baad milne ke kaho

Mohini Insists : Nahin Dadima aap ko abhi jaana hoga she takes dadima forcely, Padma, Maheswari Devi and all follows them

Mohini takes Dadima to a guy whose facing his back towards Dadima

Dadima: Kaun hain aap aur mujhse kya kaam hain aur aap ka Naam asks several times, He remains Silent

Dadima losts her patience and decides to leave just then guy hugs her from backside Dadima with anger looks at him all get tensed seeing dadima like that after a while she is in tears with wide smile on her face

All Looks at the Guy , Guy Says Mein Dev Purohit

Dadima in tears : Mera Dev, Mera Kishan Kanhaiyya kisses on his fore head and he takes blessings suddenly she turns back from his face

Dev: Uffo Dadi ab kya hua ?

Dadima: Thune bataaya kyun nahi ki thum aaj aa rahi ho aur subah se mujhe phone bhi nahin kiya

Dev: Dadima yeh Sab Planning Viraat bhayya ka tha mera nahin mein tho kaha unse ki aap Viraat looks at him seriously But Dadima catches his ear and says

Dadima: Kyun re Viraat thum sab milkar yeh sab kiya haina

Viraat : Dadima yeh Jhoot bol Rahi hain Dadi Yeh sab Dev aur Mohini ka planning tha mein tho bus Chodo naa Dadima bahut dard ho Raha hain Dadima leaves his ear

Maheswari Devi, Padma, Gopal Das all comes there and Dev takes Blessings from them

Padma hugs Dev some tears fall from her eyes.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderfull story and lovely dev entry ...
soon Radev meeting ,waiting for it ...

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