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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you so much guys I hope u all happy with my FF😊
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will there be a update 2day?
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really nice ff wasnt there one before this i loved that one too pls complete it
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Part – 5

At Mandir filled with deevotees waiting for aarti shastriji waiting for Radhika, Just then Radhika, Amma, vrinda comes, Radhika little depressed and says sorry to shastriji for being late.

Shastriji : Koi Baat nahi beta aarti shuru karein ( No problem shall we start aarti) Radhika nods her head and starts singing aarti. After while Aarti completes

Shastriji feeling something wrong with Radhika he discuss with Vrinda and Amma

Shastriji : Vrindaji, Amma aapne kuch kahaa Radhika se ?

Amma : aisen kyun pooch rahe ho lalla ? (why u asking like that?) Asks worriedly

Shastriji : Dekh rahe ho Amma radhika ko kaise koi koi si chup chaap khadi hai wahaan bilkul is duniya mein nahi hai woh ( Watch her Amma she is in her own world )

Vrinda : Haan ji baath tho sahi keh rahi hai aap kal jab hum log mandir se ghar jaa rahe the tab se who aise hai ( Yes ur right yesterday when we are leaving from mandir from there she's very upset)

Amma : Shayaad kal uss maheswari devi thore baare mein ulta seeda kehdiya na usi ki vajey se ( may be she is feeling bad on yesterday's incident)

Shastriji adjusting his shawl: Patha nahi amma kis baath se woh itni udaas, chalo ab ghar chalthe ek ayojan ke liye mujhe vrindavan jaana hain ( I don't know what bothering her, shall we move I have to attend pooja in vrindavan ) .moves towards Radhika.

Radhika losts in her thoughts , shastriji goes near her

Shastriji : kya hua kuch pareshaan dikh rahi ho kisi ne kuch kaha kya ( Whats wrong with u Radhika is there anything bothering you, anyone say something to you)

Radhika acts normally and says

Radhika : nahin babuji aise kuch nahi kal kuch kaam jyada ho gaya haina bus isliye( Nothing like that babuji, iam little tired yesterday I had lot of work that's why) giving little smile

Shastriji and family leaves from mandir

At Purohit Bhavan:

Servant comes and informs Dadima

Servant : Dadima Muttadeesh aaya hai aapse milne ( Dadima, muttadesh waiting for you)

Dadima : Haan mein aarahi ho unke liye chai nastha leke aana,( Ya iam coming, offer some snacks to muttadeesh ji)says closing Bhagavat geetha andgoes to meet Muttadeesh ji

Muttadeesh ji: Radhe Radhe Maaji

Dadima: Radhe Radhe Muttadeesh ji batayiye kaise aana hua kuch khaas bhaat karna hai kya ( Anything important matter Muttadeesh ji )

Muttadeesh ji : Haan maaji darasal baath ye hai ki ab Dev babu aagaye haina isliye mutt ke log chahthe hain ke agle raj purohit ko goshith kare ( Yes maaji actually Dev is back so all mutt people wants their next raj purohit)

Dadima : Baat to teek hain Muttadeesh ji lekin Dev abi tak shaadi shudha nahin hain. Humne tho ladki dekna bhi shuru nahin kiya ? ( You right but he's not yet married andeven we didn't think about his marriage tillnow)

Muttadeesh ji: mein jaan tha hu maaji lekin humein ye bhi yaad rakhna hai ki agle hafthe tak humein agle rajpurohit ko goshith karna hai warna raj purohithi ki dharahor humari haath se nikaljaayegi. ( I know that maaji but we have to remember that with in one week we have to announce next rajpurohit for the sake of rajpurohit , we don't want to loose this right from our hands) muttadeesh ji leaves Purohit bhavan

Dadima in thinking

Here in Dev's Room:

Dev freshend up and he's sitting in the couch looking at Radhika's picture in his laptop and remembering their sweet memories Mohini slowly stands behind Dev and shocked seeing radhika Photo in his Laptop Dev senses some one standing and looks at mohini and closes his laptop in hurry Mohini seeing his in tension smiles and says

Mohini : I Know everything stop acting Dev lowers his gaze and puts his hand over his head

Dev asks her curiously : Iam sure that RaDhika told you everything Mohini nods her head saying No Dev frowns his eye brows and asks " Then how could you know about me and Radhika "

Mohini holding his ear says " Devarji hum bhi Pyaar kar ke hi shaadi ki hain " He Screaming and asks her to leave

Dev: Bhabhi bahut dard ho raha hain please leave Mohini leaves his ear, agar radhika nahin batayi ho tho kisna bathaya aapko Bhabhi

Mohini :" Kal jab radhika tumhe dekha na tab mein uski aakhon ek spark dekha tha, aur aap devar ji jab aap radhika ko dekha tha tab aapki chehar par itni khushi mein kabhi nahin dekha tha and last but not least jab tune hum sab se kahaan ki bacchon ko tum lekar aaogi tab mujhe yakeen ho gaya kit um dono ke beech kuch chal raha hain "( Yesterday I noticed that when radhika looking at you she has a spark in her eyes,and your face lightened up when you looking at radhika, and u told us that u want get kids with you) she sits beside dev and asks

" Now tell me Whats cooking, whats going on between you and Radhika "

Dev: Kya batao Bhabhi one small misunderstanding we both separated ,meri pyaar ki kahaani shuru hone par bhi katham ho gaya

Mohini : Hello stop poetry tell me clearly what happened, When u both met and all story

Dev: Bhabhi we know each other when we are doing our graduation , actually two years back in a youth festival I met her, love at first sight but she is not interested becoz as you now she is work minded so I started following her and by my friends help I got her total information where she studying and etc., I joined her college, We came became good friends and we enjoyed a lot companying each other atlast one day I want to propose her and she also but.. Dev stops there having tears in his eyes

Mohini consoles him by putting her hand on his shoulder and asks " What happened ?"

Dev: Bhabhi mein ye soch kar kush ho raha tha aaj ka din hum dono ke liye khaas banjayega lekin kya paatha tha ussi din mera saath kya hone wala

Mohini : Arey bhai suspense thoda batao actually kya hua looking at him seriously

Dev: Ok BHabhi chill, Radhika mujhse milne ke liye aa rahi thi raasthe ek bewakoof ne usse aisi baath bathai woh usi din se mujhse doorr jaa rahi thi

Mohini : Dev saaaf saaf batha kya hua warna I will again pull your ear I cant bare this tension she holds her head

Dev : Bhabhi iam sorry, Briju naam ka ek ladka hai ek loose, bewaakuf, stupid Mohini interrupts stop it dev what next

Dev : Bhabhi uss bewaakuf ne radhika ko ye bataya ki mein kisi aur ladki se pyaar karthi hu aur aaj usse propose karne jaa raha hoon

Mohini : Kya Radhika uss briju ke baath ko sach maan liya

Dev: Kya kahoon bhabhi Sone pe suhaag kya hai patha uss din mein Radhika ko Propose karne ke practice kisi aur ladki ke saath kar raha tha wahi pe aagayi Radhika aur woh ye samaj kar wahaan se rothe huye chali gayi aur agle din se woh mujhe kahi nahi mila poora delhi chaan maara koi fayada nahin, ab itni saalon ki baad aaj mili lekin meri baath sunne ki tayyar hi nahin yehi sab hua mere aur radhika ke beech ab tao bhabhi kya karoon mein.

Mohini : Hmm… Waah bhai kaisi ajab pyaar kahani Suddenly they hear Dadima Calling every one both Dev & Mohini runs towards Dadima

Dev : Kya hua Kya hua Dadima aap teek tho hain kneels down near Dadima

Dadima : Arey gabrane ke koi baath nahi mujhe aap sab se kuch jaroori baath karna tha Muttadeesh ji aaye the ghar par ye bathane ke liye agle hafthe thak humein agla rajpurohit goshith karna hai warna saari property Govt hand over karenge

Maheswari Devi: Uss mein gabrane wali kya baat hain maaji

Padma : Maheswari maaji gabranahi hai bus chinta kar rahi hai ek hafthe mein Dulhan kahaan doonde hum Dev ke liye aur Tayyari bhi karni hai

Maheswari : Dulhan doondh ne ki kya jaroorat hain Barkha haina hearing this Dev in tension

Dadima says Barkha frowning her eye brows and looks at Dev

Dev replies nahin Dadima mein Barkha se shaadi nahin kar saktha

Gopal Das: Lekin Kyun Dev tum dono saath hi pale bade ho ek doosre se acchi tarah jaanthe ho

Dev : lekin uncle mere liye Barkha meri Behen jaisa hain aur tho aur mein shaadi ke baare mein so cha hi nahi mujhe abhi shaadi nahi karna hai he leaves place angrily

All family members in tension, all leaves except mohini nad Dadima Mohini consoles Dadima : Dadima Dev ko shaadi ke liye mein manaunga lekin meri ek condition hain

Dadima : Kya Mohini batao

Mohini : Dadima Ladki meri pasand ki honi hai mere khayalon mein ek ladki hainperfect match for Dev and perfect choti bahu hamare ghar ke liye

Dadima : Kaun batao Mohini

Mohini : Radhika, Radhika Shastri, Shastriji ki beti

Dadima Smile widens : Sach lekin Radhika maanegi kya Shaadi ke liye

Mohini : Woh mujh par chod di jiye Dev aur Radhika ko samjhana mera Kaam aap bus ghar walon ko lekar Shastriji se baath agey bada dijiye Dadima thanks kanha ji by doing Namaste.

Mohini goes to Dev, Dev standing near window looking outside

Mohini : Dev Tumhari shaadi final ho gayi hai

Dev furiously looks mohini and says What the hell going bhabhi mein abhi jaake Dadima se baath kartha hoon Dev starts towards Door Mohini calls back

Mohini : Dev ek minute meri baath poori suno phir decide karo kya karna hai

Dev : Kya Bhabhi

Mohini : Dadima aur baaki ghar wale ladki ke ghar gaye hai baaki baathein poori karne keliye ab koi fayida nahin hearing this Dev kneels down putting his hands over head he is in tears Mohini feels bad and try to console him saying

Mohini : Dev ab koi raastha nahin hain jis ladki ko dadima ne pasand kiya hain usse shaadi karo Dadima ke liye, Rajpurohiti ke liye please Dev try to understand patha nahin Radhika tumhari baath ko maanegi ya nahin and we don't know how much time take to sort out all these Dev in tears totally collapsed just nods his head mohini leaves dev room

Mohini feels bad and looks at dev and says herself " Sorry Dev kya karoon aur koi raastha bhi nahin hain jab tumhe patha chalega tumhari dulhan kaun hai, I want to see your expression Dev

Purohit family at shastriji house:

Shastriji : ab toh kahiye maaji kya kaam hain humein bahut gabrahat ho rahi hain

Padma holding a plate goes towards Radhika and says

Padma : Radhika yeh tumhare liye , Shastriji hum yahaan hamari Dev ke liye Radhika ka haath maagne aaye hain agar aap ko koi itraaz nahin ho tho , Radhika tensed tears rolling in her eyes but she is controlling

Shastriji : mein tho acharyachakith ho gaya hoon Maaji aap achanak aisi vivaah hi prasthav rakhenge ye mein socha nahi tha

Dadima : Toh kya hum aap ki taraf se bhi rishta pakka samjhoo

Amma comes out holding Sweet plate and says " aise nahin sambdhan ji mooh meetha kar lijiye" and every one feeds sweets each other only maheswari fuming on Radhika

Maheswari : waise aapne Radhika se poocha hi nahin usko iss shaadi karna manjoor hain ya nahin

Vrinda : Jee poochna ki koi jaroorat nahin Usko isse accha parivaar aur Dev babu jaisa patha hum kahin nahin doondh paayenge ye ussko bhi patha hain Radhika just gives a smile to all and goes to take blessings from everyone

Dadima : Bahut hum tumhe lene aayenge choti bahu and kisses on her fore head Radhika goes inside.

Dadima : Shastriji ek aur baath kehni hai aapse

Shastriji : Jee maaji kahiye kya kehna hain

Dadima : Shastriji Dev aur radhika ki shaadi agle do din mein ho jaani chahiye isliye hum Pandit ji se muhurat bhi nikalkar aagaye hain

Shastriji, Vrinda looks each other and says

Shastriji : Lekin maaji itni jaldi itni saare kaam, saare rasmein kaise ho jayenge

Vrinda : Maaji sagai, haldi, mehendi, sangeet saare hoga kaise humari toh ek hi beti hain uski shaadi aise jaldi jaldi kaise kar sakthe hein hum

Padma : Yeh sab hoga Vrinda ji aap fikar mat kijiye sagai nahi ho gi , Kal subah Haldi, Kal shyaam Mehendi aur sangeet saath mein ho jayenge aur Parsou Shaadi

Dadima : Haan Shastriji aur Shaadi ke baad Dev ka Raj tilak mahotsav aur Mutt mein kuch Pooja rakhe huye hain bus sagai nahin ho paayegi

Amma : Lekin sambdhanji itni jaldi kyun hain

Gopaldas : Woh kya hain iss hafthe poori hone se pehle humein agla rajpurohit goshith karna hain Rajpurohit ke saath Rajpurohithain hona jaroori hain isliye Dev ki shaadi inn do dino mein ho jaana chahiye

Shastriji : Maaji jaise aap ki iccha, mein poori koshish karungi ki shaadi meinkoi kami nahi mehsoos hongi

Dadima : Teek hain shastriji ab hum chalthe hain shaam ko viraat aur mohini aa kar Radha rani ki chunari Radhika ko Dene keliye aayengi Radhe Radhe

Shastriji : Radhe Radhe.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OH RADEV BOND WITHOUT ANY TALK BEFORE ,lets see what happens after that bond or may be before in these two days...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful update waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mohini helping Dev & Radhika.That's cute. Waiting for the next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful update waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part loved it pls continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Iam sorry guys i cant update due to my bad health conditions

Part 6

At last without knowing Dev who his better half he gets married to Radhika and all marriage rituals completed and then time for Raj tilak Dev very sad, Radhika totally distracted Dadima comes to take dulha, dulhan Dev and Radhika both walking lifeless

Muttadeesh puts tilak to Dev and asks for Radhika

Muttadeesh : aap ki patni ko aap ke saath baitna hoga, ab samay aagaya hain ki aap dono Rajpurohit aur Rajpurohitain goshit karne ka

Dev just nods his head and gets her Dev senses that radhika presence he talks in his mind " Kanha ye kya ho raha hain is ladki ko paas aathe hi mujhe aise kyun lagtha ki mein apni radhika ke saath hoon "

Muttadeesh ji : aaj se aap dono hamari Rajpurohit aur Rajpurohitain all hails to Rajpurohit and Rajpurohitain

Muttadeesh ji : Maaji Shaadi , Raj tilak sab kuch achhe se sampann ho gayi hain aap dulha dulhan ko ghar le jaa sakthe hain aur kal ka din dulhan ki mooh dikhayi ke liye bahut shubh hain

Dadima : Dhanyawaad Muttadeesh ji ab hum chalthe hain Choti bahu bidaai ke liye der ho rahi hain

Dadima does namaste saying bye to all mutt people all purohits goes to shastrijee house for Radhika bidaai all leaves except Dev

Padma informs about Dev to Dadima

Dadima : Koi baath nahin Padma shayad woh mujhse naraaj hain isi liye chale gaye honge koi baath nahin

Padma : Lekin maaji Dev ke bina hum Choti bahu ki Bidaai kaise kar sakthe hain kya jawaab denge hum Shastriji parivaar walon ko Just then mohini comes

Mohini : Woh mujh par chod di jiye choti maa mein sambhalungi abhi deer ho rahi hain ab hum nikalthe hain

Radhika bidaai completes with out Dev , Radhika journey starts to her in laws

Atlast they reach Purohit Bhavan Radhika in tears thinking about Dev's behaviour, he even noticed once at her,Dadima signals to mohini

Dadima: Mohini Dev ko lekar aao gruhapravesh karna hain, they hear Car sound all look back side and its Dev

Padma : Dev kahaan reh gaya tha thu hum kab se tera intezaar kar raha tha aur tu kahaan se aa raha hain thu Dev tries to explain but maheswari interrupts

Maheswari : Padma ye sab baatein baad mein bhi ho saktha hain pehle gruhapravesh ho jaane do sab intezaar kar raha hain

Padma nods her head and starts gruhapravesh

Mohini keeps the rice kalash at the entrance Radhika tries to kick the kalash but she looses her balance and she's going to fall but Dev helps her , by touching Radhika Dev feels something and smiles afterwhile he's confused why he's so much happy she's not the girl who he loves but Dadima pats on his shoulder and tells

Dadima : Dev agey ki rasam shuru kare atlast gruhapravesh completes all settles in Hall including Radhika and Dev Radhika watching Dev through Ghunghat and Dev also looking at her

A Servant comes and tells dev

Servant : Dev bhaiyya aap se milne mutt se koi aaya hain Dev comes back to reality

Dev: Haan usse keh do ki mein abhi tayyar ho ke aa raha hoon he starts leaving the place

Padma : Kahaan jaa raha hain tho kuch batayega ki nahin, aur thu kahaan rehgaya tha Rajtilak ke baad asks in stern voice

Dev : Sorry maa who kya haina Raj tilak ke baad Barsana ke kuch log aaye kuch samasya hain wahan par isiliye mein aap ke saath nahin aa paayi aur ab bhi mujhe ussi samasya ka hall nikalne ke liye mujhe abhi barsana jaana bahut jaroori hain hearing this Radhika gets upset and also Dadima

Dadima sadly goes to Dev: Dev kya yeh kaam kal nahi kar sakthe thu who kya haina aaj hi tumhari shaadi hui hain aur tumhari shaadi bhi itni jaldi ho gayi hain ki tum dono ko ek doosre se baath karne ke liye samaya hi nahin mila Dev holds Dadima hands

Dev : Dadima aap hi kehthe hain pehle kaam , agar aaj nahin gaya haina mein toh bahut badi problem ho sakthi hain waise hum dono ke liye saari zindagi padi hain aur mein ye bhi jaanthi hun ki tumhari choti bahu mujhe samajh sakthi hain looking at radhika

Mohini : Waah kya baat hain Dev lagtha hain tumhe choti bahu ke baare mein bahut kuch patha hain.

Dev : Bhabhi jitna ched na hain baad mein ched lijiye abhi ke liye chod do mujhe jaana hain Derr ho rahi hain and goes towards Padma

Dev : Maa Iam sorry I will be back in one week

Padma : Dev one week kyun shaadi ke baad bahut saara Rasmein hein jot um dono ko nibhana hain its very bad Dev

Dev : Kya karoon maa abhi jaana jaroori hain

Maheswari : Don't worry dev go and do your packing and take choti bahu with you to your room

Mohini : Dev ye tu meri devrani ke saath theek nahi kar rahi hoon Suhaag raat chod kar kahin aur jaa rahi hoon Dev looks sadly towards mohini Virat pats on Mohini shoulder

Dev and Radhika in their Room :

Dev shows Radhika Room : aaj se ye room aap ka bhi hain aap ghunghat nikaal sakthi hoon

Radhika : Nahi wo.. wo.. Dev questions her

Dev : Wo.. woo.. Kya hain

Radhika : Wo Ghunghat aap ke haathon se uthana hain aur aap tho aaj. . stops saying

Dev irritates hearing this and controls himself : Dekhiye aap ko mohini bhabhi ne sab bata diya haina toh aap mujhse ye umeed math rakhiye Please, I want to leave now Radhika stands there silently crying

After a while Dev comes back from wash room and stunned to see his bag packed he feels happy but pretends not to and talks with radhika rudely, Radhika unpacking her bag

Dev : Suniye aapko ye sab karne ki jaroorat nahin

Radhika : Lekin ye meri patni dharm hain aapka khayal rakhna

Dev remains silent

Radhika : Ek baath poochni thi aap se

Dev in stern voice : Kya ?

Radhika : Aap mujhe mere naam se bhulasakthe haina aur mujhe aap keh kar math bhulayiye

Dev : I don't know ur name anyway I don't want to know rahi baath aap keh kar bhulane ka koshish karonga abhi mein mein nikaltha hoon starts leaving but stops at the doorway and tells apna khyal rakhna ?

Radhika Surprised hearing this and feels happy

Dev lost in his thoughts why he attracting towards this girl

Precap:

Dev knows the truth that radhika is the girl whom he married

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