MILKAR YAADEIN BANENGE HUM-MG OS-EPI UPDT PG9-19/3

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MILKAR YAADEIN BANENGE HUM!!!

hi guys...m AG here ...though i have commented a lot more times in Ghsp forum...tis is my first topic...here...i have already written a FF and SS which are ongoing...not in IF but in FB...i wanted to post those here..but before that i wanted to post my OS as a start...pls read it and gimme feedbacks...keeping my fingers crossed!!!


MILKAR YAADEIN BANENGE HUM!!! part 1,,,,,,,



New York city...
Morning 8am busy hour...
Maan was standing near the end of the road...waiting for the signal to cross the road..
Seriously checking his i-phone for some mails and texts...
Today is gonna be a tough day...
Sighed the CEO of Khurana construction...New York branch and one and only male heir of the Khuranas...
His phone buzzed...he took it in one ring!!!
Maan: what the hell is wrong with u Mr.robinson...how much time i should tell u i need the blue prints to be sent at time...is it me who is paying u or u to me??? He spat!!!
Robinson: sir please understand , there were some flaws in the designs in the last minute and the project analyser of our client has pointed it out...so that we need time to redo...
Maan: who the heck is he to find flaws in my designs n blue prints...
Robinson: sorry sir...but i suppose its a lady!!!
Maan: what?? He made a very serious face...and found that the signal had been released...he started walking across the road...still shouting at robinson on the phone...
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A cute gal on the other side of the road...with a black tight fitting jean and a grey loose top..with a scarf tied around her neck...n heels clicking the road was running towards the road to cross the signal...
She stopped seeing the signal...and waited impatiently...
The signal was about to open...when all heard an alarm...like the sound of the cops cars...
They are chasing a car...which went past by them...
But then She saw a man..not caring about anything talking on the phone and passing the road...
She immedietly went and pushed him aside the road path and her head hit hard on the pavement..
She closed her eyes and winced in pain...while he rolled over her avoiding to get her hurt more...
Maan moved his head above and saw her face...
She looked angelic...beautiful...milky white...but her face is red because of the exhaustion...he just got lost in her beauty...
Maan: hey...u ok??? He asked her in concern..seeing the pain reflecting in her face...
Geet just flattered and opened her eyes...she looked at his worried face...
He looks handsome was the first thought that came in her mind...
She just kept on looking at him...while...he started getting more worried...seeing her face going redder...
Maan kept his hands on her cheeks...
Maan: u...ok??? he just shook his head asking her again...
She broke away from her trance...
Geet: mm...mm..am ok...are u ok??? She again asked him..
He smiled...
Maan:and if we keep asking about each other...ppl around us will start to expect something more...u know tis is new York...he smiled naughtily at her...
She twitched her eye brows and saw around...
He was fully on her..his one hand was holding her face...another her cheeks...while her hands were clutching his shirt..like she is about to rip it apart!!!
Her face turned crimson in embarrassment...and struggled to get up...
Maan: hey..chill..wait...lemme get up first...am the one who is on the top...he said and got up...and gave her a hand to get up...
She shyly gave her hand and got up from the place..n dusted her clothes...
They both went to the pavement...
He turned to her and saw her eyes saying...
Thanking u for saving my life...he smiled genuinely tis time...
She again smiled back in return...dont worry...not a problem...but i think u should consider..taking calls after crossing the road...as u know..always i cant come to save u...she giggled mockingly...
He chukled at her...sure Ms.Saviour...he bowed his head in response..for which she giggled more...
He then thought..are u an Indian???
Sure...am a pure Indian...just working here...u??? i know are definitely an Indian...
He smiled and asked...How do u know???
Hmm...jus like that...ur face n mannerisms tells me..
Oh...ok..ok...it means u have been checking me out...he asked flirtily...
She just got embarrassed...no way...i just predicted...she said n blushed...
Maan Singh Khurana...he extended his hands to hers...
She giggled...Geet handa...she shook the hands warmly...
Hmm...friends??? he asked expecting like a little boy...
Sure she replied yes...with sparkling eyes...
And It was their first meet..and an immemorable one...
Maan and Geet who were trade marked by their colleagues as workaholics...have become close friends...
Though it is named friendship...they always shared an invisible bond...which they feared to let it out!!!
They meet almost everyday...as their office is opposite to each other's...
They talk for hours...have dinner together..before retiring home..sometimes he evn would drive her home...their bond got thicker day by day!!!!
It was one fine morning...Maan got a call from India..saying tat his Dadima and His little sissy is visiting New York...
He was so excited and went to shopping with Geet...
Geet made him bye everything for dadima n annie...while he just got lost in her sweet gesture...
Maan: Geet yeh tumhariliye..he took a white anarkali suit and showed her...
Geet: nahi Maan..its ok...dont forget that we came here to shop for dadi n annie not for me...
Maan: so u wont accept if i gift u something also??? He asked pouting like a child...
She just stood there not saying anything...he immedietly pulled her and placed a wet kiss on her cheeks...n said...
Trust me ...u look more beautiful in this...i want to c u in Indian clothes!!! He said in a husky voice making her to shiver down the spine...
Her eyes just plopped out on realising his kiss...she looked at him in amazement...while her cheeks became more red..
He again came closer and kissed her two cheeks softly and said...
If u blush like this...then i think u r inviting me...he said naughtily and winked at her...
Maan was always flirtilicious wit Geet...but today she saw somthing more in his eyes...
He was looking at her adorably...with a lot of love...!!!
The word love broke her trance and looked at him questioningly...
Maan...she whispered his name..when she felt him hugging her from sideways n selecting dresses...
She breathed hard to hold her feelings...she was so much afraid to let her feelings out knowing about her family...the restrictions...her darji n her brother...she cant give in...so she just acted normally and accepted the gift by Maan...
In all these days...Maan was damn sure that geet has the same feeling for him...the same feeling he has for her...but he is too confused y she is not letting it out...!!!
He went home after heavy shopping...only to get welcomed by his sweet dadi n cute sissy!!! He gave all the gifts selected by Geet and went on saying everything about her...
Dadi n annie smiled at him going gaga over a gal...
Dadi: so Maan do u love her?? She asked directly...
Maan stumbled..: wo..dadi...
Dadi: so it means u didn propose her...she looked at him deadly...
Maan: but am afraid...what if she rejects me??? Am scared...he accepted...
Dadi n annie giggled:MSK and scared...manna padega...us ladki ko...Maan i want u to propose her immedietly ...
Maan: but dadi i need some time...
Dadi: hm...ok..atleast bring her to meet us...
Maan hugged dadi and nodded...n went to have a peaceful sleep...
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The next day..Maan told Geet that dadi and annie wanna meet her..though she was apprehensive she finally agreed..
She went back home and changed into the anarkali that Maan gifted her..she was so afraid how they are going to like her or not...she felt a slight pain behind her head...but she just brushed it off..thinks its for tension!!!
Maan took her to the mansion and it happend...
They just cliked instantly...Geet loved Maan's dadi and Annie...and Dadi was somuch interested by her bahu...she used to say her inside mind...whenever she sees her...
Days went by...Maan was so much wanted to propose her...but not getting any opportunity...
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It was asusual one day...when Maan was about to drop Geet in her flat...
It was too late n the streets looked deserted...
Their car halted with a stop...and Maan found tat the tyres are flat..
He sighed and looked at Geet.
Geet: Maan kya hua??
Maan: the tyre is flat...we cant move...
Geet: but what do we do now...its too long to walk to...she looked tensed...
Maan: if anyone is there to walk with u all the while...then we wont get tired while walking even millions of miles..he smiled..she shook her head in negative..
Geet: Maan u have become so dramatic...she diverted him...
Maan: so what...i said the truth...n they both started their walk...
Their hands were brushing frequently..creating the heat between the hearts...
She was blushing...but was afraid to loose her sanity...
Maan saw her n slowly clasped his fingers with hers n squeezed her hand...
Geet looked at him suspiciously..not knowing he is doing...
He smiled and asked: Geet can i hold tis hand forever..??he asked just looking into her eyes straightly...
She looked at him anxiously not knowing how to react...the next of his moment shook her the whole self...
He gently bent on his knees taking her hand in his...in the middle of the road...the only light of street lights...few cars were passing bye...hooting for him to continue...
I LOVE U GEET!!! He said and pecked her hand...
She shivered with his touch and closed her eyes...overwhelmed by his love...
He stood up seeing her closed eyes..he lifter her chin asking her to look up to him..
He was surprised to see the same love in her eyes...with no more thinking...he kept his lips on her...
He started licking and sucking her lower lip...she tasted heaven...he was not sure...if she will respond or not...so he kept on pressing her lips n sucked her lower lips and upper lips passionately...patienlty waitng for her to react!!!
Geet was damn shocked when she found his lips against hers...she didn know how to react...but after that some time her feelings were destructed by his over whelming love...and she did it...she reacted by opening her mouth letting him to explore her hidden treasure...
He was on the 9th cloud when he felt her responding and opening her mouth...
He jotted his tongue inside and explored her every sweet things..she tasted honey...
she also responded to him with equal passion..by sucking , nibbling his lips...soon their kiss became wild n they were lost out of breath...
A zooming vehicle made them to stop..they both looked at eachother panting!!!
He smiled and said: u taste amazing...while she blushed so much...
Their long romantic session was cut by a call from India...
Geet took her mobile n spoke...
She was little worried y her mom calls her at tis time...then attented it..
Geet: ji mama....(ONLY ONE SIDED CONVERSATION)
Kya??? Her eyes widened in fear...yeh aap kya kehrahi ho???
Aisa nahi hoga ma...aap shant hojaye...now she had tears in her eyes...
Mama please..kuch nahi hoga..meri papa ko...mein kal aarahi hoon..aap please rona band kijiye!!!
She kept her mobile n closed her eyes..tears flowing continuosly ...
She felt a touch on her shoulders...
Maan:kya hua Geet?? Y r u crying???
Geet chocked...and immediately hugged Maan...
Maan...papa ko heart attack hain...she sobbed hugging him tight...he eased her by rubbing her back...
She looked at him painfully and said...mujhe India jaana hain...abhi...she whispered...not able to get distance from her..it pricked her..to leave him!!!
Maan simply consoled her back understanding her situation...
With that Maan took her to the airport after packing...he arranged for her tickets...he actually booked an open ticket for her...
Geet couldn't control her tears...she felt something bad is gonna happend...she also felt the same pain on the back of her head...but she doesn wanna break Maan by her misconceptions...she hugged him and said adieu...
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Though Maan was too shocked with her sudden departure...that too after his proposal...he maintained a cool face...just for her...he knew how much her father needed her at this time...so he consoled her sent her to India with half heart...
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Geet was surely agitated...she couldn't understand , but more she felt bad for leaving Maan without replying to his confession...she was missing him badly...but yet..she was damn afraid about her family...as they were completely against love marriages...
Thoughts filled her...she didn know when she reached India...and from there she reached Hoshiarpur...to get the shock of her life...
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Her house looked decorated..like some ceremony is gonna happen...
Ppl were running from here and there...
Her thaiji saw her and congratulated her...
She didn understand...she wanted to see her papa..tats it...
She rushed inside the hall..to see a familiar man ordering the servants...
She went and touched his back..
He is her papaji...she got shocked..
Geet: papa...aap...aapki tabayat..kaisi hain??
Papa hugged Geet ,,,,mein bahot kush hoon Geet...tumhariliye...he said happily..
Par...she was totally confused...when she heard Brij..
Zyaada sochna mat...jao...ready hojao...aaj tumhari sagai hain...ladke wale aaten hongi...
She was too shocked to react...tats when she understood she has been cheated by her parents and is now being forced into a marriage...
She felt her heart break into pieces...but she held on..
Cos she understood this heart belong to her Maan...yes her Maan and she wont let any one break it...!!!
Rano took her to her room...
Geet tried a lot to stop tis engagement...instead she got slap by slap...and was locked inside the room..!!!
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She was feeling helpless...she realised tat she irrevocably in love with Maan singh khurana...
She cant let any one touch her...and she is just his...
The statement gave her a new strength...
She immdietly checked the online serives and found that she had a flight in the late evening..
She thanked Maan thousand times for booking her a open ticket...
She packed her bag and looked from her window to see anyone around...
She inhaled in happiness...as she found nobody in the backyard...
She took a pen and paper and wrote...
Dear..Ma..paa...darji and bhaiyya...,
From my childhood u ppl decided everything about me...i nvr complained...
I thought u were doing good to me...but today i feel cheated...u all tricked me to get married using my love as weaknes...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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contnd...

I don't have any grudges against u...but i cant get married to someone..whom i don't even love...and yes...i love someone immensely from my heart!!!...he is my man...Maan Singh Khurana...a man who does anything to keep me smiling...so im leaving happily to become his...am sorry for hurting u!!!
From
Geet...
She took her belongings and elapsed..from her home...
She got the flight and sat in relief...
She cried in pain how her parents cheated her...but was too excited to meet Maan and say about her feelings for him..
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Geet reached New York at morning 8am...
She had keys to Maan's apartment always...as sometimes she comes to cook him..
She reached his floor panting and opened the door with her key...
She found that he has gone to Gym...and dadi and Annie were still sleeping...
She waited nervously in his room for his arrival!!!
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Maan was too agitated and restless for Geet..he didn sleep the before night after sending her...
He took his exhaustion by doing excercise all the night...
After getting so tired..he went to his apartment...
He opend his flat...he found something more familiar...
He walked towards his room in a daze...and then he saw the sight...his angel was sitting in the cornor f his bed...knotting her duppatta...he first thought she is an illusion..but later when he heard her cribbing to Babaji..he confirmed she is really here...he walked towards her in a trance and silently whispered..
Geet!!!!
The moment she saw him...she jumped in excitement and hugged him tightly...and cried aloud!!!
I LOVE U MAAN...I LOVE U...MEIN AAPKE BINA NAHI REH SAKTHA...
She shuddred and cried hugging him tight...
Maan first couldn understand her sudden outburst...but was tooo happy...after hearing her confession...
He missed her like hell...
He slowly shifter her face to look at him..
I missed u sooo much!!! She said cutely...
He smiled at her cuteness and kissed her tears away...
I too missed u a lot jaan...he hugged her...both felt their heart would just burst with their emotions...
He pulled her back and took her lips into his...she first was shocked but sweetly gave in...
They kissed for eternity like there is no tomorrow!!!
This time she responded to him immedietly...
They took breath in intervals and kissed again madly...finally they got interrupted by giggling sound...
Nahi...humein kuch nahi dekha!!! Dadi and annie..turned their faces aways...
Maaneet was too shocked and embarrassed to the core...they just wanted the floor under them engulf them..
They both put their head down n replied..
Wo..dadi ma...
Dadi: bus ...bus...bus...ab humein kuch nahi sunna hain...ab tum dono jaldse shaadi karlo...she winked at Maan...
Maan smiled at her n replied no ways dadima...
Geet, annie and dadi looked at him shocked...!!!
Maan: now i want to live all phases of my life with Geet...i lived already as her friend...now for some days as Lover...after somedays as her Husband...Geet blushed at the word hubby...and life long as the father of her children...he bent down to his knees and held Geet's hands..will u be with me to show the importance of all these roles in my life???
Geets eyes got watered...she couldn utter a word...she was jus floored by his thinking and cuteness...she nooded to him silently...and smiled heartily..
Dadi and Annie's eyes also watered looking at the confession...Dadima blessed them both for their life ahead!!!
Thought after that Maan asked her the reason for her immediate return...she just said that she missed him badly and diverted the topic...she didn say him about her family's betrayal...knowing Maan his anger needs no bounds so she kept quiet!!!
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Love was in the air for the two..!!!
They wouldn leave a chance to kiss or hug!! Or share their moments together...
Life was never perfect for both...
It has been more than six months...Dadima and Annie went to India...as Annie had college to attend...
Everything was going smoothly...they had their breakfast...lunch and dinner together...went every places in newyork...
He always surprised her with some or other things...
He once even proposed her...asking her to Marry him in a very crowded street...which was illuminated by lights...she felt like a princess...!!! safe and secure in his hands...
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It was Maan's 26th birthday...she decided to surprise him for once..as she has nver surprised him...
She went to his apartment early and decorated it fully...she knows he will be late today..as he had a meeting...!!!!
She wore a red and golden net sari gifted by Maan...she looked perfect...as Maan ki Geet...she smiled at the thought...
She baked him cake with her hands and arranged all everything...after everything is ready...she switched off the light and waited for him...
Maan entered the house too tired exactly at 11.45...he straight away went to his room...he thankfully..didn switch on the light of the terrace..where Geet had arranged everything..she sighed in relief...
He came out after dressing at 11.58 and crashed on bed...
Its 12.00 now...he felt something soft on his lips...he smiled and opened his eyes...to see his Geet pecking his lips...
He was so surprised...
HAPPY BDAY MANNU!!! She called him sweetly...its Geet's way of calling him Mannu...he loved her calling that...
He smiled at her gesture and hugged her tightly...and she gave him a tight lip lock...!!!!
Maan replied...
I LOVE U SOOO MUCH GEET!!! In her mouth...
Geet: Maan...please lift me now??
Maan: kyun??? He asked confusingly...
Geet: Maan please...she pleaded making a cute baby face...he smiled and nodded and lifted her...
She asked him to move towards the terrace...he carried her there...
It looked dark...by then Geet pulled something and then the whole area got illuminated brightly...
He was stunned by the decorations...
The whole terrace was decorated with red and white balloons...and colourful lights...it was illuminated by scented candles...and in the middle there lied a heart shaped cake...evn it was in red and white...to the left...there was a huge portrait kept!!!
It was their portrait taken at Paris...while they were kissing...!!!
Everything seemed so perfect...
By the time Geet got down from his arms and looked at him lovingly...
His eyes got moistened and he saw his angel decorated herself...looking ravishing in a red sari gifted by him...
He immedietly went and hugged her...and whispered thanks...
She frowned...will someone say..thanks to themselves...Maan..we are not two individuals Maan...we are one...u are my soul..dont ever distinguish me by saying stupid thank u...she turned away...
He was overwhelmed by her confession...he went and hugged her from back...keeping his hand on her bare waist...she gasped..
Lets cut the cake..or else i may eat u!!! He said huskily making her turn red!!!
Both neared the table , as he lifted her and walked...
He blowed the candles lighted by her..still keeping her in his arms...
She cut the cake for him and fed lovingly...Maan too fed her by taking her mouth in his with the piece of cake already in his mouth...
Both smiled and they threw the cake at each other...
Maan carried her to the bedroom...
She looked at him suspiciously...
Hmm..dont look at me like that because u look more edible than the cake...u knw...he smiled naughtily and kept her on the bed...
She looked him making a big "O" shaped mouth...
He pounced over her and kissed her madly..
She smiled and let him do anything...
Yeh hain...mera birthday gift!!! Saying he nuzzled her neck and placed kiss all over her..neck and nape...
She moaned his name...repeatedly...it gave him new urge...
He trailed continuos kisses over her jaws down her neck again...
She held on to his vest tightly and arched herself back...to give him more space...
He got disturbed by her pally on the way while kissing...
Without much difficulty...
He just threw it away and started sucking and biting her cleavage...
She was moaning and crying in pleasure...she dug her nails into his skin , while it increased his passion...
He bit her waist going down...marking her as his own...today he couldn control himself anymore...
He again reached her face and took her lips kissing it aggressively...while his hand went to her back...
He then with a sudden act..pulled the dori of her blouse..making Geet snap into reality...
She opened her eyes in shock realising what they were about to do...
She saw him..kissing her cleavage senselessly...she smiled looking at his restlessness...even she wanna give in..but not now...
She called...
Maan...maan...
Ummm...he was too lost in her soft skin...
Maan..please...i think we need to stop here...
Nooo...he groaned desperately...
She sighed..maan...look at ur Geet..please...she pleaded...
He raised his face...realising what they were doing...he sat up away from her...n rubbed his temple...feeling cheap of himself...
Geet understood his turmoil...
He placed her hand on his shoulder...he immediately said..
Im..sorry Geet...i got carried away...he couldn't look into her face...
She cupped his face n kissed his lips..
Maan...i know...even i wanted it to happen..
He looked at her in disbelief...
She smiled looking at his reaction...
But not like this...specially...i want to be a Virgin in my suhag raat Maan...!!! i want to give myself to u on that auspicious day...thats y i stopped u...please don't dare blamed urslf...
His eyes got moistened with her unbelivalble trust on him and he hugged he tightly...
Later he took her pallu and put it on her...and they both slept hugging each other...not knowing about the torment that is gonna hit their lives...
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The next three months went like that with their love fully showering all over...
But they never crossed the limits...
But something was more wrong with Geet...she constantly got severe head ache...
Last four days had been more worse...the pain in her head was maddening...and she started throwing up all the food she ate..she started loosing her hair...
But she completely concealed it to Maan and decided to meet the doctor...
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It was Thursday...
She made an appointment with a doctor and was waiting impatiently outside his cabin alone...she lied to Maan..saying she had an important meeting...!!!
The doctor checked her completely and took MRI scan and many tests..
She was more confused...her heart said something bad is gonna happen...
The doctor asked her to wait for the results..
It was evening...when she went to his cabin...to meet the doc..!!
Geet:hi doctor..she smiled...
Doc: hi miss.Geet...hmm...ur reports have come...he said hesitatinlgly and asked again...Miss.Geet...have anybody..i mean any realtives have come with u ??? can i have a word with them...
Geet sensed something bad definitely going on...
Geet: no..sir..!!! whatever it is u can say me..i think i can handle...
Doc: but..miss.Geet...he hesitated!!!
Geet: she took a long breath...u can say me...please...she said sterly..
Doc: look miss.Geet...it seems to be a big problem...cos u have a blood clot in ur brain..and that need immediate attention...
Geet felt herself crashed...her heart stopped a moment...she felt her tears pricking her eyes...she looked him still maintaining a brave face..and said...
So...what can we do further..???
Doc: hmm..u need to undergo a surgery...
She sighed in belief...but soon it was broken...by doctors next words...
Doc: but there is a problem...
She looked at him questioningly...
Doc: hmm..after the surgery...u will loose ur completle memory..as the clot is there in the brain nerve...
She just got shocked to the core...her head was spinning...
The first thing she got in her mind was Maan...how can she forget him ever in her life...
Just few months before they started their life...she was too happy..evrything looked perfect...but now...she felt everything get crashed under her feet...
She silently took her report and went home!!!

Precap: last part!!!


NOTE


guys this os has two parts and an epilogue...epilogue will be updated later...many didn know about the last part..so here is the link...epilogue a little later!!!

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Edited by alwayzzgurti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os dear...

its really amazing...

i really loved it...

but one request...plz end it on happy ending...no ronadhona...only want maaneet happy happy...plz...

thank u very much fr such a lovely os...

continue soon plz...

waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os dear...😛
emotional one...😭
cont. soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
i loved it ya ... pls dont give a sad ending ...
i remember seeing this in a tamil movie staring trisha and srikanth ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ... loved it .. 👏
when are we getting the next part 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry dear my like bttton not working in second part... count my liking ...

loved the story. plz no sad ending as ghsp is not there now a these days and we r really missing maaneet...

please add me to your buddy list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey AG how are you dear?
that was a very nice OS..
loved it..
loved their meeting then friendship and then love..
and specially loved the way he proposed geet...
ohh her parents cheated her.. that was very bad...
but good part was that she ran away from there to be in maan's arms..
ohh what a shock some clot in her mind... and she will lose her memory..
what will happen next?
i am very worried for her...
thanks dear for this OS...
have you read my OS?

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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
Oh god..!that was so heart touching..
I m worried for maneet..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Tht was awesome
Sooo much happened in 1 update
It was simply awesome..cnt wait 2 read d nxt part

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MG FF - Mujhse Shadhi Karoge? Updt pt 85 pg 95 April 19

Storyline... An interesting love story of Maneet where our hero and heroine are more or less the same as MSK and Geet in GHSP... The only...

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Posted by: ghsp2fan

1 years ago

New MG FF - Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam... Updated Part 2 May 14 pg 2

Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam…. A different love story of Maan Singh Khurana and Geet Handa with a few interesting twists and turns... The actual plot...

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