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Hey guys,
This is my new fan fic after Shetan Ka Ghar...it will be another dark story with a twist..so I hope that you guys like this story and like Maan in his new avatar as the Raja in this modern era...
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Few other things:
This concept was given to me by MuraadlovesDD and the title suggestion was from Ritzy09..so please if you guys like the concept then the credit should go to her...
Also, can anyone create a banner of Maan and Geet...where Maan is shown as the king? Please it would really mean a lot and the credit will go to the person...
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Chapter 8
Maan proceeded going toward Geet while she stepped back. Why did she try to run away? Why doesn't she like that she is the queen now? She has all the riches, all the money that every girl would dream of? Why? She looks at him with anger as he steps closer and closer..she holds her hand which was itching really badly for some reason..she hates him and his touch..she hates herself for being stuck with him..is there any escape from him? Will there be anyone that can help her?
All the money and gifts won't make her love him ever..he took the very thing that she loved...her house..the same house where she grew up in, the same house where her mom grew up in, the same house in which she had waited for her dad to return...there were so many memories attached to that house however bad they might be...it was still her house and HE the so called king took it away from her...why? because of love?
Ha love..and him...sounds so weird...there is no love in his eyes or even in his actions...only arrogance...was it then because of hatred? or revenge? She still doesn't know why he chose to marry her..a peasant? why? What does she have? He could have anyone in his life that is close to his status then why did he chose her?
Maan looks at Geet as he was walking toward her...she was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't notice her constant itching all over the place. It started off with her hand now she was scratching her arms and face...the areas were becoming red due to it..he holds both of her hands to make her stop itching...
Geet (struggles to free her hands) let go of me...
Maan: sshh you know this is not the best attractive side of you
Geet: I don't care..leave me...I am itchy
Maan (brings her in front of the mirror) look at yourself..you are becoming red with itching...you can't do that anymore
Geet: Don't tell me what to do..its my body
Maan: that is where you are wrong..its not your body..its mine...I have all the rights on it and right now you are not attractive at all
Geet: Then leave me
Maan (laughs out loud) good joke..but anyway lets check what is wrong with you
Geet: nothing is wrong with me..(he drags her toward the bed..Geet looks at the bed in fear...she kicks him on his leg to get away) Let go of me
Maan: CHUP! Let me take a look at your arms...(he holds her arms tightly in his hand as he examines it closely)
Geet: I am okay..let go
Maan: ohh really then I guess you don't have poison ivy..see these red patches? if you keep scratching them it will get bad and you will be left with scars
Geet: Poison ivy? How...(she looks at her arms closely and realizes he was right..he lets go of her hands..she was about to scratch it again when Maan held her hands..)
Maan: You cannot scratch..it will be worse
Geet: Why do you care
Maan: i don't but I don't like to have ugly items in my life...I do not want to see any scars on you understand...(he takes out his cell phone...) hello get a doctor here asap!
Geet: let go of my hands..I can take care of myself...
Maan: I didn't hold your hands to let them go this easily...(he caresses her hands slowly making her shiver...) you ruined our honeymoon
Geet (looks at him and smirks) good...I am happy
Maan: that happiness won't last for long..(he holds her hand tighter in anger making her scream in pain...)
Within half hour the doctor came and prescribed medication for Geet...she had to put on calamine lotion on twice a day on the affected areas...Geet stood in front of the mirror cursing Maan as she started to put the lotion on her rashes...this wouldn't have happened if Maan hadn't brought her here..honeymoon..did he really think that she will have honeymoon with him..she didn't give him any right yet as her husband nor she ever will be..she will run away from him sooner or later...
Maan watched her from behind as she was again lost in her thoughts...he wondered what she will be thinking of but somewhere deep inside he knew she is cursing at him...she was making any movements to put the lotion on her rashes..she just stood there dazed off thinking and lost in her thoughts..he wanted to know it bothered him..he usually knew the mask behind the people, their thoughts just by looking at them but Geet..she had them blocked..he is always unsuccessful in reading them...
Geet comes out of her thoughts when she felt two arms wrap around her waist...she looks at the mirror.she saw Maan lookign at her with a smirk..then within fraction of a second..he turned her around..he takes the lotion from her hands and dabs them on the cotton balls...he applies them on her arms, hands, face and neck...where ever he saw the marks..she just stood there looking at this new side of Maan...why was he so caring? His actions said something else to her while his eyes displayed dominance and arrogance...
"lift up your shirt"
"What!?"
Maan: Don't shout or raise your voice on me ever again..do what I say..life up your shirt..I want this stupid rash to be gone as soon as possible...now do it..
he picks her up in his arms and puts her on the bed..he makes her lay down trapping her body with his knowing she will try to get up to run away..he grabs the lotion bottle and the cotton balls in his one hand as he lifts her shirt with his other hand. He saw more rashes below her curves...he dabs them...Geet moves little bit because it was beginning to itch...
"It itches" She says..Maan stops and looks at her...
"where?" (She lifts her hand and points it toward her belly...Maan blows on the spot gently as he applies some lotion on that spot again..) "don't scratch it.." (after he was done..he moves to her legs...he takes out her pants.)
"What are you doing?"
"Putting lotion of course..." He winks with a smirk...he slowly moves his fingers along her thighs, moving down inch by inch toward her ankles and feet where the rash was..he kisses her legs making her shiver..she closes her eyes feeling his light touches for the first time.she was enjoying his touches..his gentleness...his care...she opens her eyes when she felt him bite her inner thighs bringing her out of her thoughts...she got angry at herself for thinking like this...
"its done..stop...leave me..."
"I will never leave you...but for tonight you are going to sleep by yourself...but don't get into any habit...we still have a week left for our honeymoon.." He pecks her on her lips before retiring to the couch right next to the bed..now Geet wished that her rashes never goes away...but at least for one night she is away from him...
Okay guys I know you think this is similar to Shetan Ka Ghar..the only thing that might be similar is Maan's character but little bit more darker than the actual Shetan..this story will not be like Shetan Ka Ghar..so I hope so far you guys are liking this
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