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Posted: 13 years ago
by mere bijli time mileage toh zor se garajna teek hai lolz
and oh meena all the best dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi yaar sorry got up with something so have to rush that time but now i am back
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hiii sorry guys had to rush that time but now i am back how r u all ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nyc part dear
wondering who will win dis round
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Chapter 13

"Not here at that spot..."

Maan directed Geet to where message his back...it was 1 am in the morning and still she has been giving him message for the past 1 hour...she was successful in cleaning the whole mess in half hour but still he wasn't satisfied it was as if he wanted her to fail. Maan laid on the bed thinking..."why isn't she saying anything? Can she really be this easy to handle?

She is still not saying anything of whatever he makes her do...he knew that she was able to clean the mess within the given time after all she doesn't know how to lose. He is Maan Singh Khruana after all...he will find out why she is not retaliating...until then he would make her do things she never did..make her suffer until she breaks down..." Maan smirks as he thought of something...

He turns over taking Geet with him...she was lying on top of him..she tried to get up but Maan was quick enough..he turns around so that she was under him...he caresses her face slowly fanning his breath over her lips..she just looks at him shocked...she tried to push him but he pinned her hands above her head...he kisses her neck while Geet squirmed underneath him...

Maan: So you are my puppet right? That means I can do whatever I want right? Well then lets have some fun...(he holds both of her hands with one hand above her head while his other hand roamed downwards toward her chest..she stops moving looking at Maan..he looks at her smirking) what happened?

Geet: Please Maan don't do that...

Maan: what? I thought you won't stop me from doing anything?

Geet (cries) no I won't but please not this...(she starts squirming again trying to loosen his grip...)

Maan (puts his hand right on top of her chest..he slightly puts pressure on her chest..) what happened now? (on purpose he loosens grip on her hands wanting to see what she will do...Geet felt her hands being loosen..she used the opportunity to push him away..she quickly gets up only to be pulled back by Maan...he smirks when he felt him pushing him..he was expecting this but that doesn't mean he would let her go...as soon as she was getting up he held her hand pulling her back down...) where do you think you are going? I did not tell you to go anywhere yet!

Geet: I...

Maan: No more I..its all about me now..and from now on..you will sleep here...on the floor! I might need something at night...I hope you don't expect me to get up and do everything by myself...(she looks at him shocked, he smirks)

OR you can sleep here on the bed but with a price...(he kisses her lips forcefully letting her know of his intentions...he stops kissing her when both were out of breath...) Well what is your decision? (his hands roams all over her body...she holds his hands pushing them away..she lies on the floor..Maan laughs out loud)

Geet lies on the floor looking at the ceiling with tears...her mind, her plan, her thoughts everything seemed so foggy now..she wondered if she will be able to win now...is she really as strong as she thought she is? She sits up looking at Maan who seemed to be sleeping..she slowly stands up to leave..she can't stay in the same room as him...it suffocates her to be with him..his mere presence is enough to make her suffocate...she looks at Maan as she walks toward the door...she slowly opens he door trying not to make much noise...

As soon as the door fully opened the lights in the room turned on...she looked back to see Maan walking toward her with anger...

"You disobey my orders?"

Geet's (back hits the wall as Maan walks toward her like a lion...) woh uhh I needed some water

Maan (looks back at the side table where full jug of water was placed and then looks back at her...Geet follows his eyes and realizes what he was looking at) water? (he looks at her with one raised eyebrow..Geet just stood there not knowing what to say or do..she was trapped like a sandwich between Maan and the wall...) Are you lying to me Geet?

Geet (looks at him) that water is hot...I wanted to get some cold water

Maan (moves back toward the side table picking up the water jug..he opens the jug putting his finger inside to feel the temperature of the water...) hmm you are right..this water is hot...(he hands her the water jug...she slowly brings her hands up to get the water jug when Maan spilled the whole water on her..Geet shirked as the cold water hits her face making her clothes wet..clinging to her like a second layer of skin..) was the water cold or hot Geet? (she looks at him with anger...she moves to the side toward the door to leave but Maan holds her in place putting his body pressure against her...he makes her look at him...) DO NOT LIE TO ME! NOW TELL ME THE TRUTH!

Geet: I hate you! I hate being in the same room as you! Is that the truth you wanted to hear? I can't stand being around you anymore!

Maan; That is the Geet I know...well anyways you are stuck with me no matter what...(he looks at her from to bottom..she was soaking wet..Geet felt uncomfortable by his gaze...she puts her hands up to cover herself making him angry..) What are you trying to hide? I already saw everything that I needed too...(he winks at her...she looks away disgustingly)

Geet: I need to change..

Maan; Go who is stopping you? (He moves back...Geet slides toward the door again...Maan just watches her in amuse as she leaves the room...)

Geet goes to the room right next to Maan's room locking the door...she sits on the floor crying...she could still feel his eyes roaming all around her body..she quickly goes to the bathroom to change...as soon as she opened the door she saw Maan standing there with a smirk...behind him was a door...she has never been in this room before since she wasn't allowed to be anywhere without letting Maan know.

Maan: connecting door...I was worried and wanted to help you

Geet: I don't need your help

Maan: hmmm seems like you do..I like to correct my mistake..I am the one that dropped water on you so I should be the one helping you

Geet: I don't need your help! (she says again)

Maan: I am NOT asking Geet...(he pulls her toward him..)

Geet: Let go of me! I...(she was stopped short when she felt his lips on her neck as his hands push the sleeve from her right shoulder downwards...he pushes her against the door that Geet came in from closing it...Geet struggled to get away from him but couldn't...) leave me...

Maan ignored her and continued to do his insult...he felt possessed..he hated it when she finds for an excuse to be away from him...he tries to be nice to her but she still pushes him off...he needed her in front of him all the time for some reason...he needed to touch her...her one touch makes him wild...her anger wants him to pursue her more and more until she has no other option but to make her want him...he didn't care that she hated him..all he cared about was her being with him...no matter what...

Geet tried to slap him again to push him away but Maan caught her hand..he puts it behind her back...

"NO MORE!" (he puts her over his shoulder...)

Geet: Let go...(she yells and screams)

Guys sorry for not talking to you guys properly but I am REALLYYY pissed off right now..so will talk to you guys tomorrow even though I will be online...
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Posted: 13 years ago
update poor geet every plan failed maan is full shaitan in this



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
just want to ask u why r u making maan more and more **********🤬
if this is what u want to show
then i dont wangt maaneet to be one at the end
it would be better if u kill maan at the end
because the things what he is doing is not at all acceptable
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update...

its really amazing to see hw maan is torturing geet...who is going to win whom...

really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
r
amazing update dear
i hope geet will find a way to change maan
and maan should fall for her he should no her feelings
and u don't worry we will talk tom yaar
take care
thanx for updating dear
Edited by zohafarheen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
yeh geet maan ko itna gussa kyun delati hai my poor babby

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