SS- A Surprise Updated- Part 7

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First off, Hi! (ASR shtyle) 😉 😳 I hope you're all still alive after watching Monday's precap! This is my first shot at a short story and yes, I know the title is extremely cliche. This part of the story is more of the introduction and extremely short as well but please do comment and like if you want me to continue. 😊

PART 1:
One Month Ago:

"Khushiji, come downstairs! There's someone who wants to see you!" Anjali had called up to her sister-in-law

"Coming!" Khushi had replied, elated yet curious at the same time. Someone had come to see her? Could it be her family? Had they finally forgiven her? Descending the stairs, Khushi saw a tall man standing in the middle of the living room talking to Anjaliji, wearing a suit and a tie and with his eyes completely covered with huge sunglasses. Upon seeing Khushi he had removed his sunglasses to reveal soft brown eyes and smiled so big that even Khushi couldn't help but smile back at him. Then, in mere seconds, he had crossed the length of the living room and pulled Khushi into a bone-crushing embrace. Khushi, due to Shyam's constant pounces on her in the past month, had developed the ability to shove a full-grown man away from her and this is exactly what she did to this man. "Who are you?" she had shrieked then, desperately trying to compose herself.

"I'm Amar Chopra, Khushi." He had responded in a deep yet gentle voice, adding "Your brother." Not knowing how to respond, Khushi had then done what any sensible person would do; she fainted.
Should I continue? Please let me know! 😊
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Part two: Page 2
Part Three: Page 2
Part Four: Page 6
Part Five: Page 8
Part Six: Page 12
Part Seven: Click Here - Page 17
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is awesome! 😆 Do continue sweetie! 🤗
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Yes pls do write the nxt part
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great start cant wait to read more continue soon
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Oh pls continue Hun..waiting for ur nxt update. &pm me pls .thanx .. 😊
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great start, Do continue😃
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Great prologue! Pls continue and do add me to ur pm list! Thanks :)
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Great start! Please do continue and PM me the update! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is the first story i have read with her brother coimg in. please do continue. :D
xxx
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OMG sensible ppl go faint ..hahahhahaha u r tooo much... intresting twist ..damnnn why dun CVs think like tht. plz continue soon...

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