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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part two: Link to Part 1: http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2825038

Part 2:

A sobbing Anjali had screamed as Khushi fainted in her brother's arms, triggering Arnav to come running down the stairs. The scene that greeted him was his sister, standing off to the side with tears in her eyes looking in horror at his wife in being carried by some man he didn't know. Rushing forward, Arnav had practically pulled the unconscious Khushi out of the man's arms, feeling a strong sense of jealousy and possessiveness. Who was this man and what was he doing with his wife?! Deciding to interrogate the stranger later, Arnav had carried Khushi to their room, called the doctor, and waited until she woke up. About a half hour later, Khushi had opened her eyes to see her husband's worried face looking down upon her, breaking into a relieved smile as she gained conscience. Looking around the room, Khushi had noticed the rest of the Raizada present in Arnav and her room along with the man who had quite recently given her the shock of his life. "Amar?" She had asked, not believing that this man could be her brother. He had smiled at her then, walking up to her and sitting down on the other side of the bed not occupied by Khushi's husband seething with jealousy.
Amar had gently taken Khushi's hand and looked at his little sister with such care and love. This was the last straw for Arnav and he had grabbed Amar's collar and pulled him away from Khushi in one swift movement, pinning him against the wall, and snarling, "I don't know who you are, but stay away from my wife."
Anjali came running then, to diffuse the situation and explained to Arnav that this was Khushi's elder brother, Amar. Shocked, Arnav's grip on Amar's collar had slackened and Amar moved away from him with a smirk on his face. Sitting down next to Khushi, he had explained everything to her. When Khushi had been very young, her brother had been sent off to boarding school due to his undisciplined ways and his parents giving up on him. Amar had been 19 years old when the news of his parent's death came to him. In one day, Amar had lost everything. His father's old-fashioned letters to him, his mother's constant packages of food sent to him practically every week, and his little sister's artwork. Even living thousands of miles away from his family, Amar had developed a strong bond with them and their loss had greatly troubled him. However, Amar did not know that his sister survived the crash and instead of returning to India, he left the job of burying the family to another family member and continued with life. This, he later admitted to Khushi, was one of his worst mistakes, for if he had returned, he would have found his sister sooner. Khushi also hadn't remembered her brother because when Amar got the hint that Khushi was still alive and sent a detective to find out about her, her medical history said that she suffered some amnesia due to the accident and only remembered a few events of her childhood along with the car accident. The Raizada family had welcomed Amar with open arms, allowing him to live with them to give Khushi the family support that she had recently lost.

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Edited by siddy9171 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow, this is the third update in one day, I'm exuasted!! And please don't forget to comment, like, or buddy me! 😊

Part Three:

One month later:

Khushi woke to her husband's stubble tickling her neck as he slept on, his arms embracing his wife. She watched his chest moving up and down, and sighed in content, wishing she could just spend the rest of her life in his safe arms. Smiling, she thought of the previous night's events. A cricket game had come on and Amar Bhaya, Nanheji, and Aakashji were sitting on the couch watching each move with great enthuisasm. Arnav had opted out of the festivites however, and sat in a corner with his laptop, working away and yet still sneaking glances at the game, much like a child told not to watch TV and do homework instead. Amar Bhaya had walked up to her husband then, pulling the laptop away from Arnav and dragging him to the sofa. At first, Arnav had felt shocked at this behavior and awkward but he too joined the pandemonium, roaring when India missed a ball and cheering with exubulation when the ball was hit. Khushi was so thankful for her brother for helping her unlock the child in Arnav. But getting to this point had not been easy Khushi thought with saddness. About a week after her brother's arrival, Khushi had found out the reason for Arnav's major marriage decision and come clean to him about everything. The lies, the engagement, and the hug. After that, Arnav's demeanor had completely changed towards his wife and he believed her completely. With the help of Amar Bhaya, Arnav had exposed Shyam for the lying scoundrel he was and Shyam was kicked out of RM and into police custody. However, that had been the least of their problems. Anjaliji suffered severe depression from the treachery of her husband but it did not affect her baby much and with the help of her family and Khushi's brother, who had found a good friend in Anjali, she too started moving on from her painful past.

Arnav looked at his wife as she stared into space, a small smile on her face. I love you, he whispered gently against her cheek making her blush. "I love you too Arnav" Khushi whispered back, her eyes closed committing the feel of his lips against her cheek to memory. He looked at her again, taking in her innocent face and feeling a heart- wrenching ache for her. How could he have doubted her? His Khushi? Despite Khushi forgiving him, Arnav always felt the need to constantly remind her of how truly sorry he was for doubting her and how much he loved her because he knew that his words had cut her and no matter how much love he gave her, they would only heal with time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Sounds great!

N LMFAO like always she fainted.

Cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG this is so amazing! 😃 Please do continue, I can't wait to read more! Please PM me when you update! : )
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice SS. Khushi has a brother. Well, nicely written

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just read both the 2 updates and i really loved them, Awww Amar rocks!😃 And Arhi and Anjamar (Anjali and Amar🤣) should be a couple na?😉 Im really interested in this, Its so cute,please update soon, I would love to read more! And PMMM : )
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: CHIKA784

Just read both the 2 updates and i really loved them, Awww Amar rocks!😃 And Arhi and Anjamar (Anjali and Amar🤣) should be a couple na?😉 Im really interested in this, Its so cute,please update soon, I would love to read more! And PMMM : )

Lol! Anjamar!ROFL Thats adorable! And thank you soo much! Honestly, I had no idea if this idea would work or if my writing was any good but thank you so much! I'll try to have the next part up by tomorrow 😊😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOOOVEDDD all 3 parts!!! Can't wait for more!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mollycoddle

fabulous updates...loved them

Thank you! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely SS :) please continue !

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