SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
surprise guys!!!!!!!! i cmpltd mah work so thought of giving the update...i dnt know abt u but im soo excited...so here goes...
the first step for togetherness
**tumse banti hai meri zindagi**
***tujhko jo paya...toh jeena aaya...**
a beautiful hand lifted the phone...hope u got it...
...: hello...
r: goodmorning baatcutter...
her sleep flew away on hearing his voice...blushed...
k: gudmrng rey...
r: missing me????
k: bohut,,,,...
r: acha ye batao...ache se neendh aayi kya??? sapna kaisa tha???
k: kounsi sapna...???
r: wahi ...jisme mai tumhari ghar aaya tha...balcony se...aur hum ek saath bed pe...
k: kya???
she checked her zipper...
r: arrey..tumhe yaad nahi hai kya ki kal sapne me mai jaate waqt zipper close kardiya...???
k: matlab aap sach me...
she heard his chuckle...
r: arey...pehle apni forehead pe paseena pochlo ...
she touched her forehead...yes she is sweating...her heartbeat increased...she scanned the whole room...
r: arrey baba...heart ko race pe mat bhejo...mai apni ghar mei hun...waha nai aasakta..tight security u know...toh batao sapna kaisa tha???
she was hyper now...
k: mai...mai aapse baad mei baat karti hun...bye,...she cut the call...
r: arrey arrey baat to...hmm...kaatdiya,...he smiled...
she was actually breathing heavily...so she rushed to washroom and took a shower...
she wore a normal grey frock and went down...as soon as she stepped down the last step she was crushed in a group hug...
all: congrts...
sh: shona aaj teri shaadi ki pehli din...engagement guys!!!!!!!! its gonna be fun...
all: yeah...
kriya blushed...
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dulha
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rey smiled and excitedly went and took a bath and rushed down 4r brakfast...
he sat on the dining table...all boys were already present...
sw: aaj koi bohut excited lag rahe hai na vicky.??
vic: haan yaar...kuye mai khudne ke pehle aise hi khush hote hai...
r: abey matlab kya hai tera...neha ko batau kya????? tab sach me experience karega kuye mai girneka...wo bhi bina shaadi ke...
vicky: bhai ...mai toh bas mazak kar raha tha dil pe kyu leta hai???
sw: wo sab chodo...kya itni badi smile ...wo bhi subah subah...??
r: blushing...usse baat hua...
all: ooo...!!!!!!! and srtd teasing...
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scene shift...dulhan
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k: arrey sweetu mujhe chodo plzz...mujhe ye sab nai chahiye...
sh: chup...bilkul chup...aaj tera kuch nai chalega...sirf meri chalegi...
kriya looked at her frnds with pleading face...all girls ran to sharons side...
all: we are with her,...
k: huh?? showed fake anger...
sh: apni ye nautanki bas kar aur chalo...
all sat in chairs and beautician applied some facial ...all were sitting and slowly chatting...
**tujhko jo paya...toh jeena aaya****
sh: arrey ab kiska phone hai shona...chalo mai laati hun...
she bought the cell ...smiled at the caller id...
sh: ooho...rey!!!!!!!!!
kriya turned quickly and tried to pull...
sh: aha...itni jaldi????
k: sweetu plzz...
sh: dekho agar loudspeaker mei rah ke baat karegi tabhi doongi...wat say girls???
all: haan...!!!!!!!!!!!!
k: KYA???!!!!!!! nai nai...
sh: toh teek hai kaat doongi aur wo gussa hojayega...
k: *baby face* theek hai...
sharon kept in loudspeaker...all girls kept quite...
r: baatcutter jitni der lagadi uthane mei...u know im missing u badly...
k: wo...rey wo...
r: arrey itna tensed kyun ho???kuch hua...
sharon signalled her to act normal...kriya tried her best...
k: kuch nai rey...mai theek hun,,,,,,..aap batayiye call kyun kiya??
r: arrey ye kaisa sawal hai...mai apne...he was cut in the middle...
k: rey agar kuch nai toh baad mei baatkarte hai na...
r: wat??? par kriya...
k: par war kuch nai baad mei baat karte hai...
r: sshh!!!!!!!! chup...u r such a baatcutter...kya hai kriya...na toh theek se romance karne deti ho...na toh theek se baat...
all girls looked at kriya raising their eyebrow...
k: rey wo sab ab kyun???
r: chup...maine kaha na...tum bas meri baat suno...baatcutter ...
no response...
r: baatcutter??? ho kya??
k: haan ...
r: baatcutter wo kya hai na...mujhe tumse abhi milke hug karne ka mann kar raha hai...
k: rey aap kaisi baat kar rahe ho...
r: arrey?? kaisi baat ??? maine toh hug hi kaha tha na...kiss thodi kaha...aur agar chaho toh wo bhi de sakti ho...mujhe koi problem nai...
k: rey...she was cut in the middle...
r: dnt worry baby ...my pleasure...thanks ki zaroorat nai hai...
all are looking at kriya with open mouth...kriya was not able to face them...
k: rey...aap...aap chup rahiye...aur mai aapse baad mai baatkarti hun ...bye /...
she pulled 4rm sharons hand and cut the call...
r: arey suno...phir se kaat diya...??? arey ek kiss hi toh poocha maine aise kaat kyun diya...
god rey jaldi delete kar nai toh ye log teri bajadenge...( gang was entering)
sh: uh.uh..uh...ye kya tha kriya.????
k: blushing...wo .wo...
simmi: romance mei disturb karti ho???? kitne baar romance ki???haa...bata bata...
kriya's eyes widened...
n: arrey simmi wo chodo na...kitne baar kiss kiya ye poochona...
rinny: arrey kitni baar kiss kiya ye count karna padta hai kya??
vishaka: ohh...shut up dumbo...
all this while kriya was watching with mouth hanging...
sh: kriya batana kitni baar kiya rey ne tumhe kiss??? bata bata...
kriya blushed deeply and was abt to run but caught by vishakha and sharon...
all: batao na kriya...
sh: chalo ye batao...is rey a good kisser???(raising her eyebrows...) tum logon ki first kab aur kaisa hua???
kriya widened her eyes...looked down and blushed...
vishaka: batao na kriya...rey kitna romantic hai...???(teasingly)
all girls winked at each other...neha and simmi stood up...neha srtd running and simmi caught her hands 4rm back...neha blushing and trying to free herself...
neha: rey chodiye na...
simmi: chodne keliye thodi pakda hai meri jaan...
kriya looked at them with wide mouth...
simmi pulled neha towards her...
neha: rey plzz...koi dekhlega toh...
simmi forcely turned neha towards her...
simmi: dekhe toh dekhne do...ek baar toh kiss kardo...
neha pushed simmi...simmi caught neha against her with neha's wrist pinning to her back...
simmi: kya hai kriya...humesha romance ke beech mei disturb karti ho...
neha: rey...
simmi leaned in and acted as if kissing...
kriya blushed to core and looking down...all strtd laughing loud ...and making kriya blush more...
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next scene
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sh: kriya jaldi chalo...8:00 ko engagement hai...yahi pe 5: 00 bajgaye...jaldi rey ke ghar jaana hai...aur toh aur tumhe tayyar bhi karna hai...jaldi washroom se bahar nikhlo...
k: haan aa rahi hun baba...
kriya came out running ...wore the same white dress she wore on new yr...and all strt to rey's house...
smriti: sharon beta kriya ki dress jewelary sab ache se leliya na...
sh: nai ma...
sm: kya???
sh: maa actually rey ne apne paison se kriya keliye aaj sab kuch khareed ke rakha hai...so maine sab chod diya...sorry mom aap ko batana bhool gyi...
sm: chalo beta koi baat nai... theek hai kriya ko dyaan se leke aana...
sh: mom mai hun na;...
sm: isiliya befikar jaa rahi hun beta...
all went in one car and all the girls in one car...vishaka driving...
both rey and kriya were eagerly waiting to see each other...as soon as the horn was blown rey ran to the window to see her...all got down ...kriya kept her foot out ...and swayam closed reys eyes and all lifted him...
the whole gang planned they ont let them see each other...so they fixed that till kriya enters into her room rey will be in his room along wid the boys...
kriya searched 4r rey...but dissapointed...there rey struggled but his frnds didnt let him out of the room...finally he sighed and sat...
as soon as kriya enterd the room she found many big big thali's covered with cloth...all girls were surprised...kriya took the first cloth and was dumb struck on seeing the dress,,,,,...girls took of the rest clothes...all were filled with jewellary,makeup kit,paayal,bangals,, a simple necklace with matching earrings.,heels ...and every thing neede to her make over tonight...
kriya took her dress frm the thali...a letter fell down...simmi ran and took it...and strtd reading...
k: simmi personal letter koi nai padta hai...manner nahi hai...mujhe do...
simmi took 4r her...
simmi: u know i dnt have manners...
all: mee too...
simmi read out loud...
dear baatcutter,
yahi dekh rahi hona ki yeh sab kya hai???
kk so let me tell u...
i know ki mai abhi koi job nahi kar raha hun...abhi humari studies khatam hua hai...
actually shaadi ke baad tumhari poori jimmedari meri hai par jab tak mai ache se settle nai hojata tab tak mujhe papa ki help leni padegi...mai chahta hun ki tumhari poori responsibility sirf mai hi loon ...par ab agar bina settle hue kiya toh i cannot give u the whole happiness...mai nai chahta ki tumhe kisi bhi cheez se problem ho...so mujhe papa ki help zaroor leni padegi...isiliye maine socha ki kamse kam aaj ka teri poori zimmedari mai khud apne kamaye hue paison se loon...isiliye maine ye sab khareeda...agar tumhe pasand aaya toh pehno...agar nahi aaya toh bas bagal mei rkhdo...par apni pasand ki hi pehannna...i cnt see u regretting anything...hope u like it...
ur love...
a tear escaped kriyas eye...all were looking at her,...sharon went frward and caressed her cheek...
sh: tum bohut lucky ho kriya ...
kriya jst nodded and hugged her...sharon broke it and all strtd kriya's makeup...kriya didnt wear the dress coz she is supposed to wear after her make up...
all boys strtd dressing rey...rey really looked handsome...
kriyaansh were supposed to cm down by 7: 30 and ring exchange would be at sharp 8:00...
it was 7:00...
kriya's make up was cmpltd...rey got ready and pacing to and fro...all the boys were supposed to go out 4r the work and recieve guests...along with girls...sharon stayed with kriya...swayam locked the door and went down...rey was fuming with swayam's action...he wanted to meet her...the whole living room was filled with guests...but it was silent upstairs,...rey layed on bed frustrated...suddenly he heard sharon shouting...he ran to balcony and peeped into kriya's room...the door was open he could see inside...yes!!!! ab use dekh paunga...kriya was in washroom ..she is changing into the dress...
sh: kriya aur kitna der lagegi...mujhe jaana hai...bohut kaam hai...papa bula rahe hai...
k: ( 4rm inside) arey abhi aarahi hun baba...bas hogaya...
sh: acha hogaya toh theek hai bahar aake aaram kar i will cm and take u ..kk i m gng now...
she rushed out of the room ...kriya came out running...
k: arrey sharon rukho meri baat suno...
rey got a chance to meet her ...he rushed and locked his room and jumped into her room...
kriya locked the door and stood in front of mirror mumbling...
k: hey universe ji!!!!!! kaha fasa diya mujhe...sharon bhag gayi...mujhe khud se dori baandh na nahi aata...ab sharon ke aane tak kaise wait krungi,...
r:mai help karoon???
she turned back in an alarm...
he stood there shocked...she absolutely looked beautiful...
kriya:
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k: rey aap yahan???
r: kyun acha nai laga...mai tumhara help karsakta hun...
.he moved towards her...she stood there dumbstruck...he looked absolutely stunning in his sherwani of the same shade of her dress with a deep neck exposing his broad chest slightly...her legs backed of 4rm moving back and glue to the same place...
he came to her stood behind her and moved her hair aside...she closed her eyes...he slowly caressed her bare back with his fingers...she strtd breathing hard...he planted wet kisses on her back...she cluthed the bottom of his shewani with her left hand...he slowly bit her on her ri8 shoulder...she pulled his shewani down cluthing it more tight...he again planted wet kisses all over her back and dug his head in her hair and bit her nape...she fell back taking support on his strong chest,...he slowly passed his ri8 hand on her waist to the left and tightened his grip on her waist...she arched her body and with her both hands cluthed his collar of the respective side...he slowly played with his fingers on her waist making some random designs...she let out a sigh...then he slowly took back his hand and placed his both hands on her back of her waist and slowly slid them up...her grip on collar tightened...he interwined the dori with his fingers and slowly tied them up...and moved back catching her shoulder t give her support,...she stood there eyes closed and breathing hard...he slowly kissed in btw her dori...she clutched her fingers into a fist...he came forward holding her shoulders as she swayed on leaving...he stood before her looking into her eyes...caressed her cheek and gave a long kiss on her cheeks such that his edge of lips touched hers...she caught her lehnga tight ...after sometime he pulled back and looked at her face whose eyes were closed...
r: i said na...mai tumhari madat kar sakta hun...
she slowly opened her eyes...saw him...and LLHH with our kriyaansh background...he took her to the bed made her sit on it...made her comfortable...
r: chalo ab yahi baito jab tak sharon aayegi...kk...by d way u look soo beautiful ...thanks ...meri choice pasand karne keliye...she hugged him at waist...
k: mujhe sirf aapki pasand pasand aati hai...kabhi aisa mat sochiyega ki mujhe aapke diye hua cheez acha nahi laga...aur mai aapse kitni bhi mushkil samay mei khush rahoongi...poori man se...mujhe kuch nai chahiye...bas aapka pyaar chahiye...
he understood she was talking abt the letter...he slowly bent and kissed her forehead as she looked up at him...
r: chalo ab tym horaha hai...mujhe jaana hai...theek hai...he went to his room leaving behind a wide beaming kriya...he peeped back and gave a flying kiss...she blushed and looked down... as soon as he entered his room swayam knocked...bachgaya...nice timing rey...patted himself...and opened the door ...
sw: rey chalo tym hogaya...
r: theek hai i will be in 2 mins...
sw: kk jaldi aana...
swayam went down to the guests...rey came out as sharon came there...
r: arrey meri saali toh bohut khoobsoorat lag rahi hai...
sh: aww sach jiju...?? (dreamingly)
sharon:
r: much...
she punched him slightly...
sh: mujhse hi flirt kar rahe ho rey...
r: kya karoon ...saali itni hot hai toh karna padega na...
she rolled her eyes...
sh: kk mister flirt ab khatam hogayi toh mai jaun kriya ko neeche leke jaana hai...
r: mai lekar aaun???
she raised her eyebrow...
r: i promised sirf lekar aaunga...
he looked lyk a small kid ...she smiled ...nodded her head and went down to the guests...
rey knocked the door and kriya opened as soon as she saw him her eyes widened...
he smiled
r: chalein ...hume abhi neecha jaana hai...
she nodded and walked out of the room...
all the gang strtd chatting...the hall was perfect ...filled with guests...noise every where stating that it as a most perfect and a precious day...
suddenly all went silent...the gang turned to see whats the reason...the saw all the guests starring at something...dey looked in the direction...on seeing everyone's jaw dropped...all said at their top of voice...
all: O...M...GGG!!!!!!!!!!!
nil fell down and neha fainted...swayam and amar made nil straight hen vicky sprinkled cooldrink and woke neha up ...all stood toghether and staring at it...
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rey and kriya strtd walking...but rey found kriya unusual...
r: kriya kya hua???
k: rey mujhe bohut dar lag raha hai...
r: arrey isme darne wali kounsi baat hai??
k: rey wo yeh mereliye sab pehli baar hai na...
r: toh kya mereliye 50th tym hai...and chuckled...
she hit him slightly...he forwarded his ri8 hand...
r: u will feel better...
she slid her ri8 palm into his palm he caught it securely...tightly yet softly...pulled her to his side placed his left hand on her waist ...she caught her lehanga with left hand...they moved 4rward and stood at the top of the stairs...as soon as they reached there the crowd went silent and their team turned to see them and shocked...they smiled at each other at this and looked back at the gang...
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all the parents were numb...they never expected their children as dulha and dulhan...they smiled wide...kriyaansh slowly came down as the gang moved with open mouth to the stairs...as soon as they stepped down the last step they were crushed in a group hug...after few secs everyone pulled back...preeti and smriti came 4rward and
preeti: kitni pyaare dikh rahe ho dono ...kisiki nazar na lage...
smriti kept a kaajal tikka to rey and preeti to kriya...kriyaansh took aashirwaad 4r dem...moved 4rward and took all their parents blessings...then the whole gang came to them...girls went to rey's side and boys towards kriya and lifted them making them sit on their arms...rey and kriya strtd shouting...arey chodo...neeche chodo...but they took them to dias and made them sit on the two chair specially arranged 4r them...after dat the whole gang hooted...parents stood back leaving their children enjoy to their best...
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abhi keliye itna hi guys,...hope u like it...and engagement ka baaki part in next update...plzz like and cmnt guys...pmzz later...
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Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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