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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: deetha

aadaha karliya ab thodi der mein poora kar dungi...

yeh aadha update tha??????? but i still luved it...eagerly waiting for the next half

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CHOCOLATEKRIYA

@CHOCOLATEKRIYA

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: deetha
guys guys kis kis ko update chahiye yaha aajao...like and cmnt...agar jyaada honge then i will update...if not then not...its fully based on u ppl...i want only one thing and thats cmnts...so gear up and strt cmnting if u want...i have the whole story prepared perfectly in mah mind...but im a bit lazy...if i get cmnts then i will force myself to type...last but not the least/...I HATE THIS KEYBOARD...and i hate typing...

ab update karo na yaar mein tho tumahere update ke liye marhi jarahi hu😔

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: CHOCOLATEKRIYA
ab update karo na yaar mein tho tumahere update ke liye marhi jarahi hu😔

she already update half on pg 62 ...go n read

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 13 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

she already update half on pg 62 ...go n read

wen will she update the remaining half???

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: lovely7010

wen will she update the remaining half???

chalo pura update kar liya sab padhlo...pms later...

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Kritika Julka

@kritzzz_ArSha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#426

Awesome update just loved it!!!!

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#427

dis 4 cntinuation

holly shit!!!!! i m dead
i cnt stop blushing dis tym 😳 😳 😳
deetha kya likha h meri jaan...its tooo freaking hawttt...pasine choot gye mere to...hehehehe

haye!!!! phele to kriya ka itna inocencely sharmana n all...n wid tee awww...she is soo cute

n after dat rey OMG he is such a naughty...hehehe 😉...bt i lyk him yaar...da way dey are romancing OMG i cn't stop blushing 😳

meri jaan abhi tu aisa likh ri h to first nyt ka kya haal kregi...mere to soch kr hi halat kharab ho ri h...i m gng to read whole part again...well don yar 👍🏼

luv uuu tons 4 dis n big HUG tooo...n lots of kissess tooo...luv uu ❤️

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#428

awesome part...loved it very much

i loved the way sharon was teasing kria and rey was drooling on her

and swaron following rey hahahha that was funny and kriyansh scenes were awesome...so romantic and hot ...loved it very much

continue soon waiting eagerly for next part

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha
dis 4 cntinuation

holly shit!!!!! i m dead
i cnt stop blushing dis tym 😳 😳 😳
deetha kya likha h meri jaan...its tooo freaking hawttt...pasine choot gye mere to...hehehehe

haye!!!! phele to kriya ka itna inocencely sharmana n all...n wid tee awww...she is soo cute

n after dat rey OMG he is such a naughty...hehehe 😉...bt i lyk him yaar...da way dey are romancing OMG i cn't stop blushing 😳

meri jaan abhi tu aisa likh ri h to first nyt ka kya haal kregi...mere to soch kr hi halat kharab ho ri h...i m gng to read whole part again...well don yar 👍🏼

luv uuu tons 4 dis n big HUG tooo...n lots of kissess tooo...luv uu ❤️

first ni8...?????? ab ye bhi likhna hai kya??? i mean mai yahi poochne wali thi...likhu ya nahi...kal note deke sabse poochna chahti thi...matlab agar firstni8 likhna ho toh i im expecting myself that it should be too hot 4r even me to handle that i should stop in middle to breath...par agar utna pakka aur kacha likhna forum pe allowed hai kya??? agar tum log kaho toh likh doongi...so tell me...

and and and thank u dear 4r ur lovely cmnt ...tumhi nahi mai khud blush kar rahi hun type karte waqt se ab tak☺️...mere roomies toh mujhe ye bhi poochrahe hai ki mai kisse chat kar rahi hun ki itna blush kar rahi hun,...poori keechayi horahihe meri yaha...😳

same to u luv u lot and tons of hugs and kisses...ummaahh!!!❤️