PART-8
so guys im back with update iss week mei mera 3rd update...but the worst thing is i get les cmnts and likes...pm list badh rahi hai par no increase in cmnts and like...and thanks to those all who cmnt regularly on mah updates and to all those who cmnted till now...guys bade nai toh sahi chota toh cmnt karo...i will be happy ki bohut log padh rahe hai...and anyways update toh last tak padhoge na so wahi pe neeche like button dabado...i think it takes max of 1 sec...
kk now cmng to the update... chalo iss baar reharsals ki style mai shuru karte hai...kk ready guys ...warm p ...take ur positions...kk ready...5 6 78... go
morning...
kriya felt a tap on her shoulder...without opening eyes she spoke...
K: rey sonedijiyena...she nudged herself more into him...and in return her hugged her even more tight...
again a tap...
K: pushed him hard with her left hand moved away and stretched her arms...still eyes closed...
rey woke up saw his love and quickly gave a peck on her cheek...she turned irritatedly and gave a disgusting look...
R: confused...kya hua???
K: kya hua??meri itni achi neendh kharab kardi aur pooch rahe ho ki kya hua??
R: ,meri sapne dekh rahi thi.??( dreamily)
K: irritted...nai mai apni boyfrnd ki sapna dekh rahi thi...
R: arrey!!!!! tumne meri neendh kharab kardi aur upar se chillarahi ho??
K: maine aapki neendh kharab ki???? rey aap kitne jhoote ho???
R: mai jhoota hun...??????? toh mujhe dhakka kisne di??
voice 1: kriya ne...
K: aur mujhe tap kisne kiya??
voice 2: maine...
R&K: dekha...they froze...they were sleeping in each others arms when two others are watching them...they first didnt dare to look at them but slowly lifted their faces...in front of them swayam and sharon were standing with arms folded and taping their legs...shit!!!!!! this was the THE MOST awkward moment in the world!!!!!!!!!
kriya just stood jumped and ran to her room and shut the door leaned on it eyes closed...
K: bachgayi,...
sh: but u could be a little faster kriya...
she skipped a beat...opened her eyes ...sharon was standing with her biggest smile...kriya looked down...
sh: hey kriya dnt feel awkward kk...chalo lets sit first...i think u accept me as ur frnd atleast...
K: frnd nai sharon...may be best frnd...i dnt know y i feel very connected to u...they sat kriya still looking down...sharon lifted her chin...
sh: den dnt feel awkward,...kk...so tell me...first kiss???
kriya blushed to core...
sh: oohh cmon kriya tell me na...plzz/...
she just nodded her head...
sh: WOHOO!!!!!!! kriya ek baat batau...im very happy 4r u both ,...but strangely rey mera sabse best frnd hai...mai usse jyaada tere liye khush hoon anyway leave it...ab blush karna chodo and get ready...
K: kahan??
sh: arey kahin nai...bas fresh hojao...tum jao mai tereliye dress leke aati hun...kk???
k: kk...she rushed into bathroom blushing...
sh: smiling...cutie...
they went down and joined the boys had breakfast ,...kriya and rey didnt even try atleast once to look at each other...called the whole gang home...( no one told abt kriyaansh) ...vijay and smriti were back...
jst think guys they were having grt days so all boys stayed with rey and girls with kriya ...next morning...
( guys ab se khahani mei bohut saare twists so plzz go with me i want the story comfortable 4r me..so im moulding it in the way i want...i thnk some of u have not even thought abt it...so ...ab kya??? just go with me)
sharon:
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kriya:
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all met down in living room
V: aunty bhook lagi hai...
sw: vicky chup...
smriti: chalo beto thodi der ruko mai garma garam paratha banathi hun...
V: PARATHA!!!!!!!! yummy!!!!!!!
all laughed...
( guys i know sm would be wondering...where is reys mom so here goes her entry,...let me remind u once again guys...reys mom loves rey vry much but more consious abt status and parties...and she was one member of smritis gang...)
all were sitting on the couches...chalo guys now im not focusing on the interior just imagine very beautiful one in blue and white...reys mom entered... PREETI SINGHANIA!! if it doesnt sound good suggest names...
mom: hello beta,...
rey: he wanted to go and hug his mom...but he thinks she doesnt love him so he casually says...hey mom!!!! without moving a bit...
kriya on seeing reys reaction got cnfused as she doesnt know anything...
reys mom found all similar faces of dazzzlers...but the rest???
she asked.
mom: beta ye baaki 6 log koun hai...
vijay: mai batata hun...ye rey ke naye frnds ...swayam ,vishaka,amar,bharat ,neha and,...and KRIYA!!!!!
( yeah reys mom knew coz vijay would never hide anything 4rm her...)
mom: kya??? she went and cupped kriyas face...bohut sundar hai...
smriti: meri beti hai sundar toh hogi...
preeti turned back and shocked...
preeti: SMRITI!!!!!! at top of her voice...they hugged each other and went into kitchen chatting...
rey was full upset dat his mom never hugged him with that much love...he was watching tv but kriya found it out she went and sat beside him...
K: rey kya hua??
r: kuch nai...
k: mujhse bhi chupoge???
all the gang are seriously listening to them...
cut to kitchen...
they talked all the stuff...sorry cut the all un necessary stuff...
smriti: preeti ek baat poochun toh bura nai manogina???
preeti: arey pagal mai kyun bura manoongi...
smriti: tumhe rey pasand nai hai kya??
preeti: shocked ...ye kaisa sawal hai??? wo mera beta hai...ekhi beta hai...how can i not love him...
smriti: par mujhe aise nai lagta...agar aisa hai toh rey ko kush honachahiye tumhe dekhke...par mujhe aise nai lagta...
preeti: par wo shayad mujhe pasand nai karta...
smriti: kya ??? pagal...tab se leke ab tak waise hi ho ...budhu...woh tumse bohut pyaar karta hai par tum ho ki apni parties ki chakkar mei usse dyaan nai deti,...preeti bachon ko tym dena padta hai...agar tumhe sach mei aisa hi lagta hai ki rey tumhe pasand nai karta then cm with me...she took her to living room...they were back of the couch...
K: rey aap aunty ko pasand nai karte ho kkya??
r: hugged her ...mujhe wo bohut pasand hai par unhe mai pasand nai hun...
preeti: sorry beta...
rey looked back...infact all looked back...
preeti: sorry beta ...status ki baare mei itna conscious thi ki aapko tym dena hi bhool gayi...rey went and hugged her,...they cried...( sorry guys jaldi patch up kardi...mai utna senti banna nai chahti...kk so go easily) beta chalo sab haath moh dholo hum khana lagate hai...
rey: shocked...mom aap khana lagayegi/...
preeti.: haa...aaj se mai preeti singhania kam aur rey ki maa jyaada banna chati hun...waise bhi mera beta toh kuch hi dinon keliye mere paas rahega na...
r: mom aap aise kyu kehrahi ho??
preeti: showing fake anger...haan shaadi ke baad toh tum kriya ke aage peeche ghoomoge na...
both were blushing hard...it was first tym that their parents spoke abt their shaadi in front of them...
V: arey preeti ye toh ab bhi vahi karta hai din bar uske peeche...hugging her 4rm back...( yes vicky calls her preeti...he is very close to her..)
r: abey chup...
all laughed...
V: preeti jaldi khana lagao na bhook lagi hai ...pehli baar tere haatse khana khana hai...
preeti: haan haan macho chalo...
all ate...( so guys get ready 4r a mini leap and then u would get a big leap.)
after 2 hrs...
smriti and preeti in kitchen prparing sm thing 4r the gang...
kriya was arranging the flowervase and sharon went in as preeti called her...
all were cracking jokes and it was a beautiful atmosphere there...suddenly someone closed kriyas eyes...all were silent...some shocked...some confused...kriya felt the touch very familiar but no it was not rey,...then who it might be she touched the hand...
gautam: arey papa ko itni jaldi bhool gayi??? pata hai kitna miss kiya maine tumhe...he turned her but she was bending down so count see her face as her hair covered and hugged her and kissed her on forehead...then sharon came out and screamed...
sh: PAPA!!!!!!! aap wapas aagaye...!!!!!!!!! i missed u a lot...
gautum was taken back he pulled kriya...saw her moved smback and
gautum...: sorry beta woh...
K: theek hai uncle ...
sharon hugged him...smriti came out calling swayam and rey...
sh: rey .swayam...
sw&r: ji...
went to her ...she didnt see gautum...but he saw her and went numb...preeti and vijay came and frozed and were tensed on wat was gng to happen...
sm: beta ye papers bank mei dena hai dedoge???
R: haan maa...hum abhi deke aate hai...chalo swayam ...dey went away...smriti turned back...froze...
gautum:& smriti: tum????
both were crying hugged each other but smriti soon pulled back...
smriti: ab wapas kyun aaye ho??? mai toh kaise bhi jee rahi thi na ??
gautum : smriti wo...
smriti: bas gautum mujhe kuch nai sunna...
sh: dad ye kya ho raha hai...both smriti and gautum went numb...
sh: dad matlad ye meri m...maa??????/ aur kriya...kriya meri...she broke off...( sharon knows...actually gautum and smriti breaks up coz gautum spent more concentrration on dance and thus they ended taking one daughter each who were fraternal twins...kriya jst 30 secs grter than sharon...after dhat smriti moved 4rm delhi and settled in dehradun ... after 2 yrs gautum realised his mistake and searched her in delhi but no result so ended and gave up...he shared every thing to sharon...) kriya was dumb...
vijay: haan beta kriya aur tum dono behne ho...
at this both looked at each other and dashed out...all the gang were numb they went blank they didnt know wat was happening stood in their places...smriti and gautum fought 4r sm tym ...patched up and were tensed abt their daughters...
smriti: gautum kahi ye donon kuch galat...
preeti: nai smriti...bache itne bewakoof nai hai...unhe sab digest karne keliye tym lagega but i think they need smone to share...pata nai kaha gaye honge...
voice: koun kaha gaye??
all turned...it was rey ...reyam were standing with confused expressions...vijay explained everything to them...
reyam were fully tensed abt their best frnd s and love of lives...
they looked at each other blinked and nodded once and dashed out... all were waiting coz they knew that reyam are gonna bring krisha back that too safe...
rey went to/...( do u remember urvashi sequense ...) he went 4rward he knew ...she would be there ...coz its the place she would cm when she was upset...
on the other hand swayam went to a beach side...he searched...yes ...she was ri8 there...he reached her,...she looked at him and hugged him with full strength he reciprocated...sat down on sand without breaking the hug...he didnt speak anything ...just kept quite let her cry...he jst consoled her rubbing her back...
rey went and sat beside her...she saw him and hugged him tight,...and he reciprocated...she cried 4r a long tym...rey ...i ...i got my family back...my sis back,...and u know...kriya is my sister...
r: haa jaanta hun sharon...
sh: rey mai ...mai bohut khush hun...jab bhi kriya se door jaati hun i feel smthing different...i got the reason today...im very happy...
r: smiling broad but still tensed abt his love...yeah i can see that...
sh: stood up quickly...rey!!! rey i wanna meet her now...ri8 now ...tell swayam to bring her to reharsal hall mai mom dad ke samne nai baath karna chahti...
rey: shocked... tumhe kaise pata hai ki swayam...
sh: rey agar mera bstfrnd mere saath ho to kriya ki bstfrnd bhi uske saath hoga ri8...and thanks tumne swayam ko nai bheja...
rey: ab ye thanks kaha se aagayi,...theek hai chalo...they went to reharsal hall...rey msged swayam...sharon driving...
K: thanks swayam ...still hugging and crying...
sw: paagal chup...he was smiling but tensed 4r his luv too... and hugged her even more tight...he got a msg ...read...
rey...swayam sharon is alri8...she wants to meet kriya in the reharsal hall ri8 now dnt tell parents,...bring her soon...and yeah takecare of her...
he smiled at lastline...
rey got a call ...
vijay: beta kaha ho kriya kaisi hai??
r: dad mai kriya ke saath nai sharon ke saath hun and she is all ri8 and kriya ki fikar mat kijiye swayam was there with her...and haan hum ab reharsal hall jaa rahe hai par plzz aap log mat aayiye sharon bas kriya se baat karna chahti hai...hope u ...
vijay: haan beta 4r sure par donon ka dhyaan rakhna...
r: ji...bye...
vijay: bye...turned to all ...strange maine socha ki rey kriya ke paas jayega
vivky : par wo sharon ke paas aur swayam kriya ke paas gaye...haina...vijay nodded...uncle mujhe pata tha ki woh yahi karenge ...kyunki ladkiyan apne pyaar ko dukhi nai dekhsakti woh bhi unke wajah se so they try to act normal ...puri gham bahar nai chodenge...but agar frnd ho toh they let thier grief out fully...par uncle ab wo kahan hai...
vijay: reharsal hall...par kisiko aanese mana kiya hai...sharon kriya se baath karna chahti hai,,,,,,,,,,,,
neha: wo tumlogon ko nai aan ekeliye kehrahithi uncle... hum chalte hai unke paas ...chale guys...
all : haaan ...and rushed to reharsal hall...
sw: kriya...dekho look me...he cupped her face...chalo mere saath...
K: kahan(still crying)
sw: dnt u trust me...
K: no i trust u a lot...
sw: toh chalo mere saath and they strtd to reharsal hal...
kk guys abhi keliye itna hi...hope u like...pms on their way...
Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
