4S-Arnav ji's Birthday *completed* - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Khushi: Why? this particular decision was yours and I am just doing what you have asked me to do…then why are you asking me this question?

Arnav: keeping his index on her lips…shhh looking in her eyes…mujhe birthday gift nahi dogi? (will you not give me my birthday present?) 😍


Khushi is totally surprised with such a behavior from Arnav...


Arnav: grabs the container which was lying on the table. He open it and get it...He then comes and sits beside khushi.


Aranv: Yeh kya hai? What is this?

Khushi: Jaalebi (still lost) sweets

Arnav: Tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe aise dene ki?

Khushi feeling very very sad now...she tells herself...ek to banake diya uparse haath bhi jalaya isike karan (firstly i have made it for him...secondly my hand got burnt due to this) look at him...how can one be so rude?

Arnav: takes out one jalebi and feeds to khushi...

Khushi: not understanding anything feeds back the left over from her mouth...

Arnav: mitha nahi hai (its not sweet) do you realize that?

Khushi: after listening to this khushi walks out to the pool side...

Arnav: lefts behind her...

Arnav: Kys hua khushi?

Khushi: kuch nahi aap jaake so jaiye bohot raat ho gaya hai...

Arnav: Yeh to mera sawal ka jawab nahi hua...

Khushi: Kaisa sawal?

Arnav: Jalebi mein mitha kam hai...

Khushi: Aap ko mitha lagbhi kaise sakta hai aapki zabaan itni karw...

Arnav: Oh really and starts walking towards her.

Khushi: starts moving back as usual...and was about to fall on the pool...

Arnab grabs her from the waist and saves her from falling...and pulls her towards him...his nose touches hers. lost in each others eyes...this time they could hear each others heart beat not their own...arnav slow moves his hand on her waist to grab her more closer...khushi coming back in her senses tries to escape but arnav catch hold of her pallu (saree)...


Khushi is shocked...it reminded both of them about their first kiss...khushi slowly turn and sees arnav holding her pallu (saree)...


Khushi: Arnav ji...chodiye humme...(please leave me)


Arnav: Mera (my) Birthday gift?


Khushi: Hum aapko kya de...


Arnav: Pulls her pallu...and she slips towards him...arnav staring at khushi


Khushi: Aap (You are) Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada hai...hum aapko kya de sakte hai (what gift can i give you)?


Arnav: Aur tum (And you are) Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada ho.

Khushi looking at arnav and the thinking about what he has just said "Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada"


Arnav comes closer to her...he holds her waist...khushi grabing his shirt tightly on his shoulder...Arnav holds her neck with the other hand...khushi could feel his warm breadth on her face...she opens her eyes and see there is no gap left between the both...


Khushi: aaap...

Arnav: Shhh...

Their breadth became same...they was breathing at the same time...

Khushi: (remembering what he said on their suhag raat) kyu aapko to mere saath saas lena gawara hai tha to aaj (you didnt wanted to breadth together with me then what has happened today...

Arnav: coming more close to her...asks her to close her eyes...he whispers I AM SORRY KHUSHI...and kisses her ears...

Khushi: She holds him with two hands...

Arnav: then kiss her on her cheeks...then both the eyes...then he comes near her lips holding her face...I am sure this is going to be my best birthday gift ever...he slowly kisses her lips...and continues kissing her...khushi starts reciprocating him feeling each other it lasted for 5 mins...Arnav slowly stops and says...ab jalebiyan mithi lagegi...khushi looking at him...tears run down...


Arnav: Hugs her tightly...


Guys hope you liked my OS. Please do write your comments and do like it. thanks





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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
awesome dear..

very well written..

loved all the parts..especially the last part...that was really nice..

thanks for the pm..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
it is aesome...so cuute yaar...
loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
That was nice! Arnav finally sees her wound. Thanks for the PM.

Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
loved it that was so cute thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
read the last two parts just now.. awesome!👏
spoorthi thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
superb update👏
loved all ur parts,very well written
do continue,waiting for ur next part,update soon
thanks for the pm
Koeli thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Due to its demand i am continuing this stroy a little bit more hope you guys will like it...


Arnav: then kiss her on her cheeks...then both the eyes...then he comes near her lips holding her face...I am sure this is going to be my best birthday gift ever...he slowly kisses her lips...and continues kissing her...khushi starts reciprocating him feeling each other it lasted for 5 mins...Arnav slowly stops and says...ab jalebiyan mithi lagegi...khushi looking at him...tears run down...


Arnav: Hugs her tightly...

Khushi: Arnav ji...mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai (i want to tell you something)

Arnav: Looking in khushi's eyes...bolo...(say)

Khushi: Arnav ji woh baat yeh hai ki (the thing is that). Shyam ji...

Arnav: Suddenly the softness in his eyes just vanished...he took 3 steps back and turned back...he was about to go khushi grabbed his hand

Khushi: arnav ji please listen to me...please...i really want to talk to you. i have tried to tell you quite a number of times but couldnt...for you may be this marriage is just a samjhota but for me its eternal...

Arnav looking at khushi bluntly without any emotions...

Khushi: Shyam ji wohi hai jiske saath meri sagai hui thi (the person with whom i was engaged was Shyam)

Arnav was shocked...he felt like hitting khushi...but controled himself.

Khushi: I met shyam ji in lucknow and then he came to stay with us in delhi as a paying guest. Initially he behaved very nicely with us...he helped us a lot...my bua and all forced me to get engaged with him and looking at the circumstances i agreed with them. nobody from my family know about him and anjali di...and if you remember we havent met in RM as he very smartly managed to escape every time...until the havan which took place...i was shocked to see him as di's husband...Di who worshipped him...Di who loves him so much...Di who is so obssessed about him how can he do such a thing with di...i felt disgusted and while i was coming i met you at the poolside. i wanted to tell you at that very moment when u had asked...but then i remembered how you love your Di and Di her husband...so i decided not to tell anybody...but inside i was shattered...

Khushi: started weeping very badly...
Arnav: khushi khushi...relax...he holds her and make him sit on the bed...arnav turns to get some tissues for her...
Khushi again grabs his hand...Arnav ji...during di'd marriage when you said that you wanted to talk to me i saw a note on the mirrior where it was written meet me on the terrece i want to talk to you...i thought its you and i went there...but i was shocked to see shyam ji...i tried to go from there at that very moment but he didnt let me go...he started uttering that he loves me and all...i lost it completely and i insulted him a lot...he is such a disgusting man that he doesnt deserve Di. I told me to leave her.

Khushi totally broke apart while telling all these to arnav...

Khushi: Arnav ji i always wanted to tell this truth to my husband whoever it is as i feel a relationship can only be mentained on the basis of trust. But our marriage was so accidental that i couldnt manage to tell you before it.

Khushi: Arnav ji please forgive me for this...

Arnav: Looking the tears in his eyes...Do you love me?

Khushi: Stunned by his question didnt know how to react...

Arnav: Comes closer...whispering on her face...Do you Love me?

Khushi: Bohot (a lot)

Arnav: Holding her face I LOVE YOU Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada...Iss Pyaar Ko Isse Behetar Aur Kya Naam Doon.





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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
very nice update👏
loved the ending
do continue,waiting for ur next update

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
WoW...!!!!!
simly awesome...
i love it...👏

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