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Posted: 13 years ago


thanks tammy dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058



thank u so much dear for this lovely comment..
loved it so much..
hmm geet ki practice jaari hai..
u want to see maan's smoking hot chest..aww u naughty..
hahaha maan vampire nahi hai...
thanks dear glad that u liked movie's scene...
love u too dear...huggs back to u...



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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update.
I loved it.
Precap is interesting.
Continue soon.
Neha want to write proper comment bt busy wid study coz of exam so short comment se kaam chalale
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SONU_29

Superb update.
I loved it.
Precap is interesting.
Continue soon.
Neha want to write proper comment bt busy wid study coz of exam so short comment se kaam chalale



thanks dear...
it's okay..whenever u get time then comment here...
and keep concentrtae on ur studies n exams..
all the best...
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Posted: 13 years ago





part-35


Maan-what a pleasant surprise…tum yaha kaise?

Girl-I came here for the job..

Maan-really..congratulations… when you came here?

Girl-before two days…


maan-really...what are you doing here?

girl-ohh maan actually my car ditched me in mid way...and i am alone here..driver is also not with me...i want to go home but how?

maan-it's okay i'll drop you at your home..

girl-thanks maan...you are really sweet as before...

maan-no formalilites between us...girl smiled and maan smiled back..they forget that geet is also there...geet didn't know what to do? she can't see him hugging an another girl...but what can she do now...she is so helpless...

geet-maan , i am getting late... now maan realize that geet is also there...and he didn't introduce her to geet...

maan-ohh sorry geet...i forgot to introduce with her...meet she is pari..pari khanna...and pari she is geet my friend... geet felt a lump in her heart when she introduce her as a only friend... but geet smiled weakly...

geet-hi...

pari-hii geet..she raise her hand for hand-shake... geet felt little awkward but she did...




maan-you know geet she is my one & only friend in london... waise mai kisi se jayada baat nahi karta tha...but she was very intelligent..

pari-excuse me...mai abhi bhi intelligent hu...

maan-i know i know... but you have changed a lot... last time i saw you was wearing glasses and two plates and now look at you...

pari-oh common maan... stop this...i am feeling awkward listening all this from you...

maan-why?

pari-you didn't give any compliment to anyone...and now oh my god...

geet thought both are very good no no best friends no no chaddy buddy wale friends..haan...

but she is feeling little jealous seeing maan near very close to her...his hand rested on her shoulder...oh god that sight is burning geet inside but she stood there calm...both are not giving her attention...this is puting the fuel in the fire...she looked aside because can't see them so close...she didn't know herself why she is becoming so possessive about him…why she can't see any other girl near to him…

geet-maan , i am getting late...

maan-oh sorry geet..chalo...pari tum bhi chalo..i'll drop you too.... maan told his driver to take care pari's car..

maan-pari. tell your address to driver...he will drop your car at your home after repairing...

pari told the address to driver...

pari-oh maan..you are such a saviour...and kissed on his cheek... this scene burned geet's heart..don't know why..why she is feeling jealous...but yes she can't see him with any onther girl...maan's eyes popped when pari kissed him...he looked at geet..what she will think about him? he immeditaely get backed but geet didn't realize it...all headed to maan's car...maan sat on the driver seat..and geet was about to sit on the side seat of maan...but pari sat there immediately...geet stood there staring her and then maan...maan looked at pari then geet..he knew geet is feeling bad..no one sit here beside him and today pari sat there..maan looked at pari with pleading eyes but geet ignored them...geet can't tolerate this much more... she bend down little and said to maan

geet-maan , i am going in my car..i am geeting late aur aapko pari ko bhi drop karna hai...

maan-geet , wait..i'll drop you first..

geet-no maan..i have my car...you guyss enjoy..seems you both met after a long time...

maan-ye to hai..we met after whole 5 years...

geet-okkay..bye...

geet was acting in-front of him that she has no problem with pari but she has...she tapped her feet on land and sat in her car and went to her home..first time she didn't give him good night hug & good night kiss just because of pari...first time maan didn't drop her home just because of pari but nothing tell her because she is maan's so called bichhdi huyi friend...

in maan's car

maan-so how are you pari..sorry asking late

pari-don't be formal maan..i am good and you?

maan-i am fit...in-front of you...

pari-you didn't talked to anyone in college and now you have a friend and that too girl...what's the matter dude?

maan blushed thinking about geet...

pari-breaking news...maan singh khurana is blushing...wow it's a miracle...

maan-stop this pari...she is my friend...

pari-oh really..friend or girl friend?

maan-kuch bhi samjh lo..jo bhi hai bas yahi hai..

pari-really...means she is your girl-friend...

maan-for me she is everything...my friend, my girlfriend...

pari-and what about her?

maan-she took me as a friend...

pari-why?

maan-she is so naive..she didn't knew her feelings...

geet reached at her home...rano is waiting for her.

rano-geet puttar..aaj bahut der kard..chal mai dinner lagati hu..

geet-no mama...mujhe bhukh nahi hai...

rano-ki hoya puttar..teri tabiyat to theek hai na..?

geet-yes mama..i am absolutely fine...mann nahi hai khana khane ka..

rano-chal theek hai..i'll give you milk...tu fresh hoja...mai milk lekar aati hu.. she nodded and went in her room...she is not tired too much but have a weird feeling after meeting pari...she flat on her bed without changeing...rano came with milk..

rano-ye lo..you didn't change till yet...chal uth puttar..change karle...

geet-mama mai kar lungi...aap glass table par rakh do...

rano-kya hua hai tujhe...jayada thak gayi hai kya?

geet-hmm

rano-mai kal hi tere papa se baat karti hu..koi jarurat nahi hai ye job karne ki..

geet immediately sat up on the bed...what mama? i am not tired that much...

rano-ok beta..chal have milk..and sleep..

geet-ok mama...she have milk and changed...rano went...geet took out her diary and write something in her diary about maan...about her unknown feelings...and slept thinking about maan...

on the other hand maan drop pari at her flat...both didn't know that pari is architect in his company and pari is also didn't know that khurana construction is maan's company...

next day in college

jai-geet what happened to you?

geet-nothing i am fine..

jai-no, you are not..you are not in herself...is something bothering you?

geet-nothing jai...i am fine...

jai-anything about maan that is bothering you?

geet-please jai don't start again...i am not in a mood to argue with you..

nt came and asked what happened...

jai-tu iski bahan hai aur tujhe nahi pata kya hua hai?

nt-nahi kya hua..

jai-kuch nahi…he looked other side..he knew something about maan which is bothering her…

nt-kya hua geet..tere boss se jhagda hua kya?

Geet-nahi….

Jai-fir?

Geet-you know kal raat maan met with his so called bichhdi huyi purani best friend…and she sat on my seat….how could she?

Jai-ohh…kaun hai wo friend?

Geet-pari

Nt-hmm..something is burning…

Jai-yeah somekind of jealousy…

Geet-I am not jealous vealous….samjhe tum dono…

jai-yeah yeah i can see that...

geet-don't think like that..

nt-i think you should take rest...

geet-i think so..i am not feeling good...

jai-then office?

geet-i'll take leave today..

nt-chal theek hai..mai bhi tere sath ghar chalti hu..

geet write a letter about her leave n told her drvier that give this letter to the reception of khurana construction...and she called to reception about her leave and called adi too...

jai-you send your driver there..chal i'll drop you both...

all went handa hawali in jai's car...

rano-kya hua? aaj itni jaldi aur geet tujhe office nahi jana kya?

jai-aunty..she is not feeling well so she cancel her office today...

rano-kya hua puttar tujhe?

geet-kuch nahi mama..feeling sleepy..can i go in my room?

rano-haa ja...take rest..i'll send your lunch in your room... geet nodded and went in her room...

jai and nt take their lunch...

khurana constructions

maan called to reception and ask about new architect and receptionist replied that she will be here in any moment...

and here she is...

pari-excuse me i am here for the post of architect...

receptionist-welcome mam..

pari-can i meet to mr. khurana?

R-yes mam..

pari-where is his cabin?

R-mam, his cabin is on 2nd floor, 3rd cabin

pari-ok thank you...

R-you are welcome mam..

pari went in lift and reached to maan's cabin...

pari took a deep breath and knocked the door of his cabin...

pari-may i come in sir?

maan-yes come in...

pari entered in his abin and maan is facing his back to her & checking a file...

pari-hello sir, i am here for the post of architect...

maan-you are late...

pari-i am sorry sir..actually i was stuck in traffic...

maan- i don't like those persons who give me excuses...

pari-okay sir..sorry sir... pari is shivering on maan's response..first day hi daant pad gaya...

maan-it's okay..next time be careful...

pari-yes sir.

maan-where is your appointment letter miss?

pari-here is my appointment letter sir and myself pari khanna...

maan immediately looked up from the file and turned...he got shock...

maan-pari tum..

pari-maan tum yaha...

maan-i am the M.D of this company..

pari-ohh you are the one who is scolding me from past 5 mins...

maan-i am not scolding you..i am scolding my new employee who is late on her first day...



precap

geet again jealous

and

maan reading her diary


tell me frnds hows it?
keep commenting,,ur comments motivate me for write more..
waiting for ur response..
love you all
neha

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow... awesome update neha dear...
loved it to the core...
wowww geet jealous...
n that parii.. she kissed maan's cheek that too in front of geet.. oh nooo...
meri geet kitni sad sad ho gayi uss pari ki wajah se...
maan ko tho pata chalna chahiye na... par nahi... awww geet didnt wish him good night... me so sad...
friends convo was good...
hmmm soo geet didnt go to office n pari in office..
bechari geet jab usko pata chalega tho kya karegi...
pari ki tho main... grrr.. but she is good...
hmm precap is interesting... geet again J...
wow maan read geet's diary... kya hoga ab...

continue soon dear...
muahhh... hugs to u... 🤗
Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet jealous pari ki pitayi hone waali hai please do next soon






Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb i just nw got the link of ur ff which u had posted in distance bring us closer because of that i come to know abt this ff n just read ur current part i this is good i will read whole on sunday continue soon dear n i m eagerly waiting ki maan jald se jald geet ki diary padhe taki use uski feelings ke baare main pata chal jaye
Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!awesum part..
So pari's entry s making jealous...
and she s new architect too..
so dey vl both form a team and make geet jealous even more after reading her diary...
But i m sad to c geet hurt..

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