Little OS- from me...pls comment :D

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Little OS from me... I couldn't make it romantic... As i don't know much about there chemistry...
Pls do say if you like it or not :D it will mean allot :>)







The dream charm hang above the entrance of the door. The melody almost took my breath way. I have never experienced or found a dream charm this attractive in this extent, nor i had any plan to buy such mere object that obviously will be a distraction in the near future, but what can i do? A order is a order, let that come from your children or your beautiful, loving wife...

I looked at the far distance, my wife along with our two daughter was becoming more visible as they ran towards me. I could watch them all day... All night ... All my life... Laughing... Giggling... Telling me how much they love me... And how they will never leave me... Never ... Ever...

"yaaasss..."

...

Yash jumped up from the sweating bed. Heavy breathing the pounding heart. The dream, a fairy tail now. It was true until yash's wife have passed way. Very much real. A small tear crawled down his eyes, leaving a faint line. The color of the skin have changed where the tears have rolled down endlessly. He looked at the wind charm hanging above him. He smiled sadly, then left the bed to look at his two daughters. They were slipping peacefully. Like the princess. His princess.

Yash slowly left the house without breakfast again. He looked at his hand for a moment, what he became? A depressed man, who was on his way to have emotional break down over and over again. The small heart is hidden inside would not hesitate to explode its poisons emotion that would tear each cell. The burning pain that have been there, every second, every moment after his wife passed way. The pain... Its just a word now. A mere word that could never be explained with words to create an understanding in others people that how it kills him within.

"wish i knew arpith... How to ease this pain... Please come back... Please come back! I need you" yash whispered to him self. The M shape lips shivered with the compress pain, to scream out, to yuall, to shout, to scream for his wife.

"sir..." the driver stood beside yash, rather scared to call him out from his long deep meditation. Its rare to see him this form, however when he is in the long meditation every one easily becomes warned about his situation.

"yes... Lets go" yash closed his eyes, then widens to let the fresh air to touch the tiring eyes to wake him up. The redness along the black bag underneath the eyes clearly suggested about his sleepless night. "take me to the new wedding location."

"yes sir" the driver replied in a fearful manner.

The driver pressed the break gently as they arrived to the location. Yash was lost again. Driver hesitated for a moment to call up. It was indeed his lucky day as yash looked up and then outside. A odd figure caught his attention. A lady with no decoration on her forehead or any around her neck, with a little boy. Yash slowly stepped out. Observing her. Not that he had any interest but his eyes had those weird urge to look at them. The lady giggled then picked the boy up. Placing a soft kiss on his cheek. It reminded of his wife, just the way she used to kiss him. Another pain ran from his body to the heart like a needles. He almost tried to avoid by closing his eyes but in vain the pain won again.

"mama... Please can i play here" the small boy spoke with little muffle...
"na baba... Its didis wedding today. You will mess everything up"

Yash bluntly looked at the mother and the son for fraction of second before taking his mobile out and walked to the other direction.

It wasn't long before yash bumped in to the same lady again and this time, she was without her son.

"are you the head?" arti angrily wondered.

Yash looked at her bluntly again. Where did that sweet voice disappeared?
"yes" he replied back in a plight manner, yet a hard look.
"can you tell them to remove those sharp object soon as possible. Children will be playing here, and they are not far way. Its dangerous." her worry was clearly visible on the face. Yash looked at her son who was standing at the far corner. Hiding behind the pillar.
"i will tell them straight way" yash didn't hesitate to answer back. He knew well the worry about a mother or a father, specially when it concerns there children.

Arti half smiled at the man. She was expecting more aggression, and more carless answer then this, so she prepared her self, but here completely opposite. She starred at the Man who instantly walked up to one of his worker and ordered them to clean up the area.

Yash looked back at arthi who was heading towards him.

"thank you" she bluntly looked at the worker then at him.
"its ok. I should have been little careful, specially knowing kids would be around."
Arti smiled.
"is that your son?"
Arti nodes.
"very sweet. I have two daughters to... But they are no where near quit as your son."
Arti almost laughed.
"you should come and see him at home..."

Yash couldn't help him self to give out a smile... Atlas something that was making his day.

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BadGirlKiss thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Super that's what we were waiting for
Thank you
Love yash description
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: BadGirlKiss

Super that's what we were waiting for
Thank you
Love yash description


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Posted: 13 years ago
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love it...make some more FF pleaseee😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey dear
Nice start ...
Write som more as the story proceed...
Its a pleasure reading your fiction
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sunshineee ... how are u hun ...hows college?

lovely OS ... very sweet


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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww... sweet os... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice nice start!!!
It was very sweet conservation between Yash & Aarti
Keep up the great work!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start keyama !!! would love if u continue this Os to an SS or FF ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow wow wow!!! amazing!!! plz PM me whenever u update further!

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