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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey every1 I have started a new ff, its starts from the time when arnav and khushi slowly start falling for each other. Let me know what u guys think gud or bad? I am doing a quick update now so please ignore the spelling mistakes. If it's bad i will stop so here goes...

Arnav is in his room trying to work when his sister comes in and tells him to quickly get ready for the sangeet as payals family will be here shortly. Arnav glances at the bed to notice a nice blue sherwani with silver embroidery. Di why have you put NK's clothes in my room?? Chotey yeh aapke liye hain jaldi pehne ki nechey aye. Yeah right di like I am going to wear that. Teek hain toh phir NK yeh pehne ga, aur woh aur khushi ji dono match karenge kyun ki khushi ji blue saree pehne wali hain. Kya jodi hain? Right chotey? Arnav gets angry at the thought of khushi and NK. Actually di I will wear this sherwani. Nahin nahin chotey mujhe bura nahin laga. Nahin di mein apki baath na manu aisa kabhi ho sakta hain. Anjali starts laughing and is about to leave, vaisey chotey agar aap humarey har baath hamesha mantey hain toh pehley apney mana kyun kiya?? lagta hain ab aap kisi aur ki liye maan gayey ;p

All payal's family arives and nani greets them and takes them to the lounge. Khushi is still outside RM as she has loads of gifts in her hand which she drops as soon as she gets into RM. Whilst she reaches out to get the gifts together her sari dor opens from the back leaving all her back showing. Khushi gets worried as she doesnt know what to do as all her family are in the sangeet she asks HP where anjali ji is and he tells her that she is in her room. Khushi runs upstairs into anjali's room but anjali is nowhere to be found. She waits nervously for anjali.

Arnav has just come out of the shower with a towel around his waist he is fixing his hair in the mirror where he just sees flashbacks of khushi and how she affects him. A sweet smile comes on his face when anjali enters his room and asks him why he is smiling and he says he isn't. He turns around to find the sherwani missing. Di mere sherwani kahan hain. Arey chotey woh mere kamrey mein hain kyun ki laxmi tumharey kamrey mein aye thi is liye. Tum mere kamrey mein change kar lo ab upar koyi nahin hain aur meh bi neechey ja rahein hoon. Change kar ki jaldi neechey ana mein akash koh dekh loon. Teek hain di.

Arnav goes into anjali's room and shuts the door. Khushi thinking its anjali asks her to please fix her sari as she can't go into the sangeet like that. Arnav comes close to khushi and touches her shoulder. mein di toh nahin hoon per mein tumharey sari teek kar sakta hoon. Khushi is shocked she turns around to see arnav in a towel and starts breathing really heavy. She cant take her eyes off him ;P Kya hua khushi?? kuucchh bhi toh nahhinn as she stutters. Aap ne kya pehna hain?? mein change karne ki liye aya tha. Agar tum kaho mein asey he neechey jahon ;) Arnav is just mesmerised by khushi in her blue sari and cannot take his eyes off her. Arnav ji aap jayi aur anjali ji ko bhulayi. Khushi u want me to go downstairs like this??? He tells khushi to be quiet and he slowly turns her around and fixes the dor to her sari. He unclips her hair and whispers in her ear perfect. They both have a rabba ve moment and khushi pushes him away and goes out. Arnav smiles to himself and quickly gets ready.

Khushi goes down to the sangeet and meets every1. Bua asks khushi where she has been she doesn't know what to say when anjali comes and says arey khushi ji aapki performance ka waqt agey hain. Khushi performs to hava havey and ek do teen. For khushi's final act khushi's partner doesnt come and NK offers to be her partner. Just then arnav comes and says NO only im her partner.They both dance to tere mere and are slowly realising that they are falling for each other but none of them can say it :)

END OF PART ONE :)


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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice. please continue. if possible without shyam...
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Originally posted by: devsum

nice. please continue. if possible without shyam...


Thank you but I don't think im going to carry on.

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