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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 11



gazal - actually maan is right...
sam - god help abhay...
piya slapped his arm...
gazal - i think geet n sam should also spend sum time together...
...
dis time geet sam n MAAN chocked in deir ice-creams...
while piya n abhay giggled followed by gazal who burst into laughetr...
maan didn't like dat..not at all...
sam made baby face at geet..while geet wasn't confortable wid d talk...
geet excused herslef from dere and went to lonesum area...calming herself...
wats wrong wid gazal..
dis is not topic to make fun...
geet cnt loose her focus from studies..she wants to do sumthing for her mother...
she wants her mother to be proud of her...
but sumwhere she knew..its was just a joke...gazal didn't mean it...
she better not...
calming herself she want back...
piya - kya huva geet...relax..gazal was just kidding...
gazal - but i wasn't...
geet glared at gazal while gazal smirked...
sam - okk..enough of it...here we were talking abt piya n abhay...
piya rolled her eyes...
abhay taking his chance - vil u cum out wid me piya...
piya - it better be innovative...
abhay smiled - i vil try...
piya smiled - ohhk..
every1 clapped for dem...
maan looked at geet..trying to search her reaction...
he didn't want to accept defeat...maan singh khurana never defeats...
but at d same time..sam n geet going out..d thought made him confused..or restless sumwhere...
maan singh khurana gets wat he wants..n for now..he wants geet n he vil hav her...
he consoled himself..its nothing but his ego...
...
geet - we shud get going now..its quite time...
abhay - wats so hurry yaar...saturday n sunday coming..so we hav enough time to complete d project write up...
piya - dat remind me..how vil we complete d whole work..we all hav to gather at 1 place...
sam - dats seems fun...
maan was happy wid d idea...it vil give more chance for him to spend wid her..n trap her in his charm...he smirked at d thought...
but his happiness was short lived...as geet continued...
geet - no need of dat..i hav sorted all d topic in 6 parts n vil be completing our work according to dat...
gazal - dats a better idea..i guess...kyunki hum log sath me porject ka kaam karenge..to adha waqt to chit chat me hi chala jayega...
sam - alright dem...vil meet on monday...
maan - but..wat if we stuck sumwhere...we dnt hav even numbers of each other...
dat was a shot...
every1 exchanged deir numbers..n maan was climbing in his plan wid having geet's number..
piya - lets leave...
...
as dey came out ice-cream parlor...
sam instantly - geet..let me drop u n gazal...
maan rolled his eyes...dis sam never miss a single chance..grhh irritating...i hope geet say no...
but b4 geet could say...
gazal jumped in - thnx..sam..u r such a sweetheart...
sam giggled so did all...
geet rolled her eyes wid a cute smile - enough of ur drama now..lets go...
abhay - piya...vil pick u up tom at 7pm...
piya - dat vil be cool...
wid dat every1 left...

...
saturday and sunday were really boring as maan didn't find any prob n get a chance to call geet...
geet hav sorted everything so perfectly dat dere was no possibility of any prob...
but weekend went very very good for abhay n piya...
abhay had arranged a special candle light dinner for piya n piya loved his gesture a lot...
abhay had gifted her bookey and a pair of diamond earings as a gift...
both talked abt each other...started to know more of each other...
admiring good points abt each other...

...
finally it was monday...
actually maanday...as he had thought of taking d control in his hands now...
enough of d wait plan...as geet is such a duffer in gf-bf matter...
if he vil wait for her to move 1st...
she vil take atleast 4 yrs to cum to him...
lolll
n wid sone pe suhaga...morning was so good for maan...
as he entered class only to bump into d most beautifull face of d gal named geet...
d bump was so sudden..dat geet lost her balacne n fell into his strong arms...
b4 she could fall on ground...maan managed to grab her in his arms..wid his arms tight around her waist...
ohh my my my...god has created her taking his full time...
everything abt her is made to kill...
geet's heart beat were faster...n her whole body was shivering wid fear of falling...
she clutched to maan's collar tightly...wid her eyes tightly closed...
maan looked at her innocent face...
how can 1 person look so beautifull even in such state...
her scared face made her look even more beautifull...
maan gently carrased her cheek..lost in her beauty - r u ok...
geet gently opened her eyes only to find a handsome face of d guy named maan...
again same thing..
she looked into his eyes...
while his eyes hav dat magnetic feel..like it pulls her towrds him...
geet broke d eye-contact - yaah..m ok..thnxx...
maan made her stand...
geet didn't want to look at him - im wonderfull...thnx..
maan smiled - dnt mension...just relax..u r still shievring...
geet smiled at her own condition...
maan loved dat smile...
maan - did u really thought..i vil let u fall...
geet looked at im wid sum unknown feeling...
his words meant sumthing very different...sumhing she couldn't understand...
y he meant by..he vil never let me fall...
is it like he vil be dere for me..wenever i need him...or wenever i vil fall...
geet shut up..u r over reacting...
geet smiled at him - its not dat...i was scared...if i hurt...
maan wid his most charming smile - i vil never let u get hurt..
geet smiled weakly at him n went to out of d class...
maan looked at her disappearing form and smiled...
shooking his head..he went to his seat...

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dis whole scene was witnessed by a pair of eyes..which didn't like d scene at all...
its not dat he is jealous...
geet is great person...
n knowing maan...sam dnt want to let geet hurt by his stupid nature...
sam sighed...
he hav to kep geet away from maan...

...
as d lectures completed...
proff has given dem 4 assignments to complete in 1 week of time...
every1 sighed...write up..write up..write up...hell wid it..
d recess started...
every collected deir write up to proff for d final look..so dat dey can strt wid deir fair work...
gazal - we r already so much tired...
sam sighed - true ya..par abhi workshop...god..help us...
geet - we dnt hv option basically but to do it...
piya wid cheeky smile - cnt we bunk...
every1 looked at her shocked...
maan smirked - right..1st day of workshop..n u r already planning to bunk...
geet - 1st day or last day..forget it..im never gonna bunk..
simran (classmate) - but bunking is compulsary for teenagers...
every1 rolled deir eyes...while piya agreed...
abhay - enough of d balbak..lets see wats in store..

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Part 12



geet - 1st day or last day..forget it..im never gonna bunk..
simran (classmate) - but bunking is compulsary for teenagers...
every1 rolled deir eyes...while piya agreed...
abhay - enough of d balbak..lets see wats in store..

...
workshop was worse dan deir imagination...
boys were ok wid it..but for gals...i mean..gals cnt be doing welding n all...
oughhh ...
every1 was hell tired...
gals were standing and cribbing all d time...
d 1st year is actually tough..not just mentally but physically as well...
d gang dropped demselves on chair wid thudd...
geet gave a glass of water to gazal...
geet - r u sure u wanna do it again...
gazal - relax geet..me thik hun...
geet - we can talk to proff...i mean...
gazal - no way...wat vil i do alone without u all...
every1 rolled deir eyes...
piya - dat was pretty hell...aise lag raha tha..koi purane janm ka badla aaj hi ke din lelega...
sam rolled his eyes - enough drama queen...
piya hit his arm...
sam - ouchh...
abhay smirked - u deserve dat...
maan - owow...dat remind me..how was d date...
piya preferred to concentrate on her coffee..trying to ignore...
while abhay looked away..trying not to smile...
geet - seeme like..sum1 dnt wanna share...
maan - true yaa...sumthing special...
piya rolled her eyes - shut up u 2...
sam - den stop ur melodrama n just tell us how was it...
abhay cleared his throat n looked at piya...
piya smile at him n looked away...
gazal whiseled..singing dramatically - kuchh to huva hai...kuchh ho gaya hai...
abhay waked her - shut up...
every1 burst into laughter...

...
hiding herself in warm duvet..geet opened her diary...
" heyy..u know..it was such a hectic day...im so tired..but i was missing u so much dese days..n so wanted to write...papa...im feel scared sumtimes..vil i be able to do it...aaj mumma se baat karke aise laga ke wo bahot pareshan hai..is she alright...just tell babaji dere to take care of mumma...n abt me..im good...just trying to cope up wid studies..dey r pretty hard...(her cell started ringing)...heyy papa...sum1 is calling..vil catch u ltr..bye..love u..."

wid dat ..geet closed her diary n picked up her cell...
d number made her confuse...
it was maan...
y maan calling me and dat too dis late...
without thinking much she picked up...
geet - hello...
a small smile placed on maan's lips wid her melodious voice...
maan - heyy geet...
geet - hii maan...
maan - hope..i didn't disturb u...
geet smiled - ofcorse not...dnt be so formal...
maan smile...
a silence prevailed between dem...
maan was not sure how to strt a conversation...while geet was waiting for him to say sumthing...
it was feeling so weired..so stupid..yet exciting sumwhere...
geet cleared her throat..giving him signal to say sumthing...
maan - ough...did u hav dinner...
geet - yes..just an hr ago...n u..
maan - same here...sharp 9...maan mocked..
geet giggled - y sharp...
maan smiled - its dadi..we call her HITLER PART-2...
geet burst into laughter...
while maan was lost in her melodious laugh...it sounded so pure..so excitment..so fresh...
he too giggled...
he had been wid so much gals..but never had such kind of talk wid any1...
geet - dats bad maan...dadi ko aise nahi bolte...
maan - agar tum unke sath 2 din rahogi..u vil also agree us...
geet - ha ha..very funny...
maan smiled...
geet - so..completed any assignment...
maan made lazy face - nahh..its damn boring...
geet rolled her eyes - we r suppose to submit it..by d end of week...
maa - damn wid d proff...
geet - im already done wid 2 assignment...
maan almost shocked - wattt..r u human or sum kind of alien...
geet made gol gappa face - dats rude...
maan - okk..i mean..tumhe padhayi ke alawa kuchh aur bhi sujhata hai ya nahi...
geet smiled - sujhata hai na...mumma se baat karna...papa se...
geet stopped instantly...
maan smiled - u can share...
geet - no..m fine...tell me..y did u call..i mean..any prob wid project work...
maan made funny angry face - achha matlab...agar mujhe koi prob ho to hi me tumhe call kar sakta hun...
geet giggled - u r such a dramaking maan...
maan giggled - dnt tell me u r not impressed..gals dye for my words...
geet rolled her eyes - dat i saw...
maan confused - wat do u mean...
geet - i mean..dat day at frndship day party..dat gal was going creazy over ur fake words...
maan smirked - how can u be so sure d words were fake...
geet smiled - bcoz..i know it...sachee feeling aur fake drama ke bich ka antar janti hun me...
a pinch of jealousy ran through maan's mind...
wat does she mean...
is she experienced in it...
did she already had a boyfrnd or so...
ohh maan..stop acting like a possessive freak...
maan still not controlling himself - experienced haan...(hoping to hear a no)
geet smiled - ab...maut achhi hai ya buri..ye janne ke liye hum khu-khushi to nahi kar sakte na...
maan was convinced wid dat...
she had a very different point of veiw towrds life...
she not just see things..but learns from dem..understands dem...
maan - btw...can i give u a complement...
geet was litle conscious wid dat...
she herself wasn't sure..wat was it..consciousness..nervousness..or sumthing else..
no boy ever complemented her...
neither she liked it...
she hav kept herself reserved...
geet smiled weakly - yaah...
maan smiled - u look very good in pink...pink suits u a lot...
geet was a bit flushed hearing it...
she had worn pink colored top n white colored toe length skirt 2day...
geet gently - thnxx...
maan liked dat...
...
b4 man could strt wid his charming talk...
a storm ran through him room shouting on top of her voice...
bhaaaiii helppp
maan held his ears and geet too...
soniya came in runnng followed by an extremely angry abhay...
maan rolled his eyes...
geet - wats happening dere...
maan anoyying - its my stupuid sis n abhay...both r imposible...
geet giggled - u sort dem..vil see u tom...
maan sighed - ok..tc..gn
geet - yaah..bye.
and she hanged...
maan looked angrily at abhay n soniya who were busy fighting...
maan too jumped into d fight..
n all d 3 fought like cats n dogs...
lolll

...
as d lectures completed...
proff - dere is a importnt newz for all d students regarding college picnic..plz..check d notice board...
every1 jumped in happyness hearing d news..
d whole claas filled wid noise n excitement...
proff rolled his eyes n left from dere...

...
in canteen..
gazal - i still dnt believe..we r going on a trip..dat too for 3days n 2nights...
maan excited - its gonna be fun...
sam - true maan...we vil just rock...
piya was dancing all d while in excitement...
abhay rolled his eyes - its still hav 2 weeks piya..save sum energy...
piya waked him...
geet didn't want to spoil any1's mood..but..she cnt afford it...
already her mumma..doing dis much for her...
how can possibly she think of wasting 5000 rs on trip...
geet sighed - listen guys...i dnt want to spoil any1's mood...
geet looked at maan - nor im doing dis for seeking any1's attension...
maan felt guilty hearing dat...
geet to every1 - but im not cummning for d trip...
every1 looked at her shocked n was abt to say sumthing...
but geet cut off - let me complete...i wud hav loved too...but d fees in too much..n i cnt waste so much money...
every1 was abt to say sumthing...
but geet cut dem again - let me complete 1st...i know..u all vil say...v vil pay on ur behalf and blah blah..but dnt even think of it..coz dat vil hurt me a lot...
every1's face sighed hearing it...
maan was feeling very guilty now...he called her attension seeker dat day..but her prob was money..how can he be so rude without knowing her...
gazal - sweety plz...for me..
geet - gazal dnt try it..n plz dnt spoil ur moods bcoz of me...
sam sat dere making angry and sad face...
geet waked him - dnt make dat face..i m so excited for u all...im sure u all vil hav great fun...
piya - im not going...
sam - me too...
maan - me as well...
abhay - no1 is going...
geet stood up - dat vil hurt me more...so dnt even think of it...
saying so geet walked away..leaving behind..all gang sad...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome parts
geet can work for learn money
maan can help her for job searching still there is 2weeks time
Sam want to keep geet away from maan
maan feeling guilty
loved it
wow first me 🥳
iam very lucky
Edited by kahkashansakina - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Iss Sam ko na sudhaaar dooo she is coming between maan and geet / great part i am happy geet want to work good i am sure maan will help her ...awesome dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
dont like sam coming between maaneet
thanks for pm
cont. soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Updates
Continue Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Hi thanks 4 da pms n fab updates! Well written! sorry cld nt liek the updates as error in posting! seems lyjk there is something wrong with the liek button

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