Lovestories...2011 !! MG !! pt 15 pg 124 - Page 54

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Lovely updates. Waiting for the next part.
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awesome update mish
loved both of the parts
i remembered my workshp class during 1st yr of engineering
god! its hell for me!!
we girls have 2 do welding!!
during dat time i was so sick becouse of dat room's smell n so much sound!!
still when i remember dat i feel like puking..
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Part 13



sam sat dere making angry and sad face...
geet waked him - dnt make dat face..i m so excited for u all...im sure u all vil hav great fun...
piya - im not going...
sam - me too...
maan - me as well...
abhay - no1 is going...
geet stood up - dat vil hurt me more...so dnt even think of it...
saying so geet walked away..leaving behind..all gang sad...

...
geet and gazal having dinner...
gazl making baby face - yaar..aunty se ek baar puchh toh...
geet - wat r u saying gazal...dis is impossible a big NO...
gazal - but how vil we hav fun without u..
geet - gazal try n understand my prob...
gazal - cnt u borrow money from any1 of us...
geet - no i cnt...coz agar mumma ko pata challa..she vil be hurt...
dats wen her cell rang...
geet - haan mumma...(pause)..ji mumma..(pause)...me thik hu..aap kaise ho...(pause)..haan abhi kha rahi hun...aapne khaya..(pause)..aapki awaz etni dhimi dhimi kyu aa rahi hai..(pause)..aapki tabiyat toh thik hai na..(pause)..haan maa me thik hun...aur bahot khush bhi...
gazal poked her to talk abt trip..but geet glared at her...she made baby face...
geet - haan..mumma..me sun rahi hun..(pause)..ji aap bhi achhe se rehna..(pause)..ji me b rakhti hun ab...(pause)..ji...
as she hanged up...
gazal jumped on her - geet plz plz pzl...chal na..tu chahe to beed me hume apise retunr kar dena..mumma ko pata bhi nahi chalega...
geet rolled her eyes - tu kya bakwas kar rahi gazal...agar me trip par jaungi..to waise bhi mumma ko pata chalega..fir wo puchhengi trip ke liye paise kahan se aaye..to me kya karungi...me unka dil nahi dukha sakti..no for dis stupid trip..not for anything..she is all i hav in dis entire world...
gazal sighed knowing geet had valid point...

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next day colge..

maan - dis is not going easy...we need to do sumthing...maan sighed...
sam interupted - but she hav valid point maan...wat r we supoose to u...
piya - cnt we just borrow her money...im she can give it back to us if she wants to...
gazal rolled her eyes - i hav already talked abt dis to geet..but she is not willing to even listen...
abhay - oughhh...dis vil be no fun..i mean..we hav started to bcum so good frnds...n geet ke bina kya maza aayega yaar...
piya made sad face - tell me abt it..
gazal - any1 having plan...
maan - idk
sam - can we talk to princy abt dis...
every1 looked at him confused...
abhay - wat r u talking..wat vil say to princy abt dis..
gazal - u kidding right...i gets yawns even watching d face of princy...
maan rolled his eyes - shut up gazal..sam is right..geet is on scholarship...we can think abt it...
piya - y to waste time den...heyy btw..where is geet...
gazal rolled her eyes - she is in library...
maan - i wonder..does dis gal do anything other dan just studying...
abhay - oughh.dis assignments r sitting on our nervs...
gazal - absolutely..i cnt wait for d trip...
maan - only if geet cuming..otherwise it vil be boring 1...
piya - wat if geet vil take books on trip...
every1 burst into laughter...
...
geet joined dem wid a bunch of books in her hands...
geet - wats so funny going on...
maan stood up - help lady...
geet - i dnt believe u r such a gentle man...
maan rolled his eyes..helping her keep all d books on d banch...
geet - so..y u all were laughing so much...
gazal again started laughing - piya puchh rahi thi...tu trip pe bhi books to nahi leke aayegi...
geet smiled - jab me aaungi tab na...
sam made sad face - cum on geet..plz yaar...atleast try...
geet - sam..its not dat i dnt want to...but i ready dnt hav option...
maan - u hav...
geet - dnt even think of it maan...
maan made baby face - y not..r we not frnds...den wat r frnds for...
geet - maan..we r frnds...but i hav sum morals...n i cnt do adjustment wid dem for anything...
sam - ok...to iska matlab..kal agar hume kisi baat me prob huyi...to hum tumhare paas help ke liye nahi aayenge...
geet sighed - dats not d point sam...
piya - dat is d point geet...tum humse help nahi le sakte...dat means we also dnt hav d right to ask for ur help in any matter...
gazal - geet...
geet - gazal u know it...
maan - wat is it...
geet - agar me tum sabki help lekar trip par chali gayi...to obviously mom ko yahi lagega..dat she is not taking good care of me n my wishes...
every1 sighed...so did geet...

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dats wen d proff entered wid a thick book...
d lecture wasn't exactly boring 1 but it definitely was for maan...
maan was actually not understanding dat y it is effecting him so much dat geet is not cuming...wat d big deal...
but no..he wants her to cum...her wants to know her more...to be her special frnd..and...and..he himself dnt know..y is he behaving like stupid teenager...
oughh..stop it maan..if she dnt want to cum..u cnt force her...
...
as d lec completed...
d proff made an anouncement regarding d trip...
proff - alright students..we understand its so hard to pay attension on teacher wen he is teaching sumthing importnt (students giggled..proff rolled his eyes)..but u all vil definitely love to hear dis announcement...as d submission date of ur assignments is cuming closer...let me all inform u..as 2days is wednesday...ur submissions vil ve on cuming monday (every1 face fell hearing it)...tuesday vil be holiday..n ur trip vil be on wednesday... i.e. wednesday thurseday n friday..we vil be back on friday night...saturday sunday hoiliday n ur schedule vil strt from monday..fair enough...
...
every1 was so so so happy wid d news...
geet smiled at all...
1 student - but..where r we going...
proff smiled - dat vil be declared on monday..hav sum patience...nwz..1 more importnt thing..we hav received fees from all d students...but we returned d fee of 1 student who was hear on scholarship...bcoz..dis trip is free of cost for dose who r on scholarship basis...thnq for ur time..
wid dat proff left d classroom...
...
d group thudd on deir banches..wid shock..surprise...excitement...
geet sat deir in shock...
" aaa " screamed all of dem in happiness n jumped on geet...

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spoiler - d 1st kiss...😳

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Part 14



d group thudd on deir banches..wid shock..surprise...excitement...
geet sat deir in shock...
" aaa " screamed all of dem in happiness n jumped on geet...
...
gazal jumped on geet - yesss yesss yesss...u heard dat...dats mean..u r cuming...
piya - omggg i still dnt believe myself...did i heard right...omggg..she too jumped on geet...
geet was still in shock to react...
sam giggled - hello madam..cum back to earth..its not dream..u r cuming..now no moere drama of urs..u r cuming..omg...its happening...
abhay - so sam was right..i wish..humlg ne pehle hi princy ko puchh liya hota...
maan smiled n put his hand around geet's shoulder from back side...like buddy type hug...
its was unintentional from maan..as he was very happy...
but dat did effect geet...
she looked at him surprised n looked at his arm dat was around her...
maan failed to realize her reaction...
she wasn't agree..but she was feeling uncomfortable..she prefered to ignore her stupid thoughts n shook her head at maan..who was acting like deir r buddies from dnt know how long...
maan was on 9th cloud - so madam...now u cnt make any other excuse...
geet smiled at him...
she tried to move a litle away from him feeling weired into his arms...
but maan unintentionally pulled her closer..looking at her sweetly...
...
maan whispered in her ear- tum sach me aana chahti thi na..to dekha..tumhare papa ne sab thik kar diya...
geet looked at him amused..n smiled wid tears...
maan so much loved dat gesture of her...he moved a bit closer n gave a gentle n smooth peck on her cheek...
his lips barely touched her cheek...but it sent a current through her body...
she looked at him motionless...
but he was unaware to d fact dat...his unintentional act gave different kind of sensation to geet...
did he just kiss me...
d maan singh khurana..all d gals in d class drools over him..n he..oughhh geet shut up...
dnt act like n idiot..it was just a act of showing happiness...
she dared not look at him...
he was so so happy to relize wat was happening in her mind at dat particular moment...
...
all d group were so happy in deir chit chat..abt trip..shopping b4 it..
dat dey failed to notice dis small incident between maan n geet...
maan dragged geet to dem..bringing her back to her senses..
she shook her head smiling..wat d stupid she is thinking...
piya - onggg...im dying to do d shopping...
geet confused - wat shopping...?
gazal - we r going to shopping...
geet - we..?? wait...
b4 geet could speak a word maan cut her...
maan - not single word geet...we r not listening to u more...
sam - absolutely right maan..tu chup hi reh samajhi..so here is d 2days plan...as its lunch time..we vil go to a good hotel now n vil enjoy great food...dat vil be my treat for dis great news...
geet - wait..me...
abhay cut her again - tu chup...next..aftr dat..v vil be going on shopping...gals..u can as much shopping as u want to..n dat vil be treat from me...
maan joined - and ME...
gals jumped in happiness -yesss
ofcrose except geet..who rolled her eyes..
...
every1 dragged geet along..b4 she could spoil dis plan as well :P :P

...

having lunch...

gazal wid mouth full of food - dishh..ish..aweshumm..
sam waked her - pehle muh me wo kha aur fir bol...
gazal swallowed instantly - m saying..dis is so yummy...
maan while having his italian dish - i dnt understand..how u all can like dis indian food..its so spicy...
piya - we r spicy..dats y we like spicy...
maan rolled his eyes..
geet - u dnt like indian food at all...
maan smiled - its not dat...but yaah..wen mom was dere..i alwz loved d food she used to make for me...
abhay smiled sadly...
sam - ur different from ur in maan...
maan confused - wat do u mean sam...
sam smiled - i mean..u alwz behave like cool dude..but u r kind of emotional person from in...
maan smiled..n shook his head...
piya - r we planning to hav dinner as well...just make it fast na...
gazal - watz d hurry yaar..d shops r not running anywhere...
piya - wat if dey do...
geet waked her - vil u ever speak sumthing which vil make sense...
piya giggled - i wonder..
abhay mocked - make it fast..sumbody is dying for shopping..
piya rolled her eyes..

...

" hows dis abhay...'' , asked piya for d nth time aftr her nth dress...
abhay rolled her eyes - r u planning to buy d whole shop...
piya giggled - im planning to make u kangaal...
abhay mocked - u wish...
...
as gazal came out wearing a traditional salwar kurta...
sam mocked - i thought u wud never like such kind of clothes..u r alwz like bhai types...
gazal rolled her eyes - shut up..n tell me howz it...
sam - u look fantastic in indian wear..i mean..u look human...sam giggled...
gazal make gol-gappa face - wat do u mean...im a human..n i look humman in every clothe...
sam shook his head laughing like maniac...
gazal - fine..d previous 1...was dat good...
sam smiled - both r fantastic..take both...
gazal - abhay n maan gonna kill me...
sam - aaj achha chance unki band bajane ka...le lo chance...
gazal giggled so did sam...
...
geet was checking a simple sky blue colored suit...wen maan came to her...
maan noticed she havn't chose a single dress yet...
he shook his head at d stubborn lady...
maan - u havn't selected a single dress yet geet...
geet startled at his sudden entry...
geet - u scared me..
maan - m sorry..but wat u doing..
geet - nothing..just checking dis dress...isn't it good..
maan smiled - every color vil suit u..but see dis 1...
he took out a beautifull gree colored suit wid delicate design...it looked awesum...
geet knew..it vil be expensive...so she played around...
geet making faces - actually i dnt like dat color..look its so dark..i like faint color...like dis 1...
she showed him d dress she selected...
maan smiled - take dat 1 as ur choice..n dis 1 too as my choice...
geet - wattt..i mean..no..i vil be taking only 1 dress...n dis 1 is good..
maan making shocking face - wattt...look at piya ( pointed at piya)...she hav selected almost d shop..n u r saying like dis...
geet smiled - no...im fine..im not really fond of shopping...
maan - cum on..do u alwz hav to say every i ask..
geet rolled her eyes - its not dat maan..
maan silenced her showing his hands..n started selecting dresses for her...
geet smiled at his sweetly..he such a sweet sumtimes...ok all d times...
geet shut up..n stop staring at him..
maan choose 4 dresses of his choice n her selected 1 dat means 5 dresses...
geet looked at him shocked - maan NO...
maan rolled his eyes - shut up..u r not allowed to speak..
geet - maan forget it..im not taking dis much dresses..plz try n understand...
maan put his finger on her pink lips...
she looked at starled...
he looked at her confused of his own act...
both just kept looking at each other motionless for a min or so...
...
deir small eye contact was disturbed by gazal's sudden entry...
gazal - geet..wat did u selected...
maan instntly gaining his senses back - geet was being an idiot...so i selected dis dresses for her..how r dey...
gazal giggled
while geet made baby face - i wasn't being an idiot...gazal plz tell him i cnt take dis much dresses...
maan rolled her eyes..
gazal - r u kidding me geet...dats so sweet of maan...i selected 4 dresses for me...
geet looked at her shocked...while gazal n maan gave a high-5 to each other...
gazal continued - n piya..dnt even ask..she hav planned to empty all d cards of abhay...
geet n maan burst into laughter...
piya was just selecting dresses n abhay was staring at her lovingly...
geet rolled her eyes...
maan - so now vil u plz agree...
geet - ok maan..i vil select 2 f dem..is it cool now...
maan - ofcorse not..u hav tale dem all..n no more words now...
geet smiled weakly..but she was not liking dis all...
but she had no option but to listen to maan...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow.. Great part
Beautiful
Maan Is desperate abt Geet...
Love their phone convo... It was sweet.
Geet did the project roghwork perfectly..
College trip on the way.
Geet told her problem abt trip to her friends..
Now wonder wat will they do... Especially Maan
Waiting For The next Update
Luved it.
Continue Soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow loved both updates
Maan did shopping 4 geet
Amazing
Waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love The part...so so so much Maan pech in geet check...its so lovely😳

N shopping With realy super gd...Love it Maan select dress for Geet to gd year...
Edited by Mayamaan - 13 years ago
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geet going 4 trip wow amazing update

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