Hi Guys,
First let me say that we have a lot of talented people here who have written some of the best Fan Fictions I've ever read. I've been writing fan fictions for about 5 years now but none of them have been of Hindi serials so I figured I'd give it a try. I hope you all like it and please give me some feed back so I know whether I should continue or not.
Thanks,
Anam aka Salmansgirl
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Jai & Bani: Maine Pyaar Kiya, Chapter 1
Authors Note: I've decided to start writing from the first day after Jai & Bani made love and when Pia interrupts them. Also, I don't remember exactly what Pia said word to word so I will change a lot of it around to make sure it goes with this story itself.
Jai and Bani were both sleeping facing each other when all of a sudden sunlight through the window hit Bani's eyes. She suddenly opened her eyes and realized what had happened last night. She quickly got up from the bed and stood by the window looking outside and thinking about the night before how she and Jai made love. She knew she loved him but did he love her? She was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't realize Jai waking up. He too realized what had happened last night and smiled, thinking how beautiful it was last night to make love to Bani and accept her as his wife. However, Jai suddenly looked sad because he wasn't sure whether Bani loved him or not. "Mujhe aaj kal kya ho gaya hai? Har waqt Bani ke bare mein hi sochta rehta hoon! Kya isi Pyaar kehte hain? Kya Bani bi mujh se…" he snapped out of his thought when he heard a real loud knock on the door. Bani too was brought back to reality. She was about to go open the door when she heard Jai said "Tum ruko, mein dekhta hoon!" as he got up to put his robe on and open the door.
When he opened the door, he was shocked to see Pia standing there crying. Pia, without acknowledging Jai ran to Bani and started crying even more.
"Pia tum itni subha kya kar rahi ho? Are you ok?" concerned Bani asked.
"Dids, mein Pushkar ke saath hor nahi reh sakti. Didi aaj us ne mere upper hath udaya" Pia told her sister as crying.
Both Bani and Jai were shocked. Jai, who was still standing at the door didn't know what to do or say so he just stood there.
"Pia huwa kya hai? Kuch batao to sahi?" asked Bani as she tried to calm Pia down.
"Didi, us ki family mujhe hamesha taunt karti rehti hai, aur Pushkar bi mujh se Pyaar nahi karta. Did aaj mujhe apni galti ka ehsas ho gaya hai. Agar us din mein Pushkar ke saath baghi nahi hoti to aaj mein Mrs. Wali hoti, mere paas paisa, power and fame hota. I'm really sorry didi ke maine aap ko itni takleef di. Mein janti hoon ke aap Mr. Walia se Pyaar nahi karte aur sirf un ke saath meri wajah se hain" Pia went on to say as Bani and Jai looked at each other shocked.
"Didi, mein janti hoon ke aap Mr. Walia se Pyaar nahi karti, Lakin maine to un se saacha Pyaar…" Pia was saying when all of a sudden Bani put her hand up.
"Bus Pia…Bus…Bohot ho chukka hai…mein tang a chuki hoon tumhare se" Bani said angrily.
"Didi?..yeh aap keh rahi hain?" a shocked looking Pia said. She couldn't believe her ears, her sister was not the sister she remembered.
"Haan, yeh mein keh rahi hoon. Pia tumhare liye har cheez paise se shuru aur hatam hoti hai. Jab mein Pushker ko pasand karti thi to tum ne us ke saath….tum ne to mera jeena haram kar diya hai Pia. Tumhe paise ke siwa uch nazar nahi ata. Tum Mr. Walia ko bi nahi chahti thi, instead on ke paise se Pyaar karti thi. Jab tum Pushkar ke saath baghi to tumhari wajah se Mr. Walia se shaadi karni paari, lakin aaj jab Pushkar ke paas job nahi hai to tum wapis a gayee ho?" a pissed off Bani said.
"Lakin Didi…"
"Lakin wakin kuch nahi Pia. Kabhi kisi ne maire se poocha hai ke mein kya chahti hoon? Ya mere koun se sapne hain? Tumhari wajah se mujhe aur Rano ko kitni sehna para." Bani said as she got more and more angry at her sister. She was sick of making excuses for her sister, when she knew Pia would never change.
"Didi..I can't believe this. Mein samjhi thi ke aap meri behan hain. Lakin aaj mujhe pata chala hai ke aap to sahi is walia parivar ki tarah behave kar rahi hain…"
"PIA!" Bani said as she slapper her.
"Tumhari himat kaisi hue apni bari behen se is tarah baat karne ki? Kya yehi tumhe sikhaya tha baba ne."
"Aap ne mujhe thapar mara?" a shocked and pissed of Pia said.
"Kya lagta hai ye parivar aap ka didi? Aree…yeh log to aap ko is parivar ka hisa bi nahi mante. Lakin aaj aap ne show kar diya hai ke aik bare ghar ki bahu kaisa baritav karti hai. Kya lagte hain Mr. Walia aap ke?" Pia asked.
"Bus Rano Bus…bohot ho chukka…jab tum ne Pushkar ke saath shaadi ki thi to maine tumhe kaha tha ke jab shaadi hoti hai to sirf us insaan se nahi, lakin us ke parivar se bi. Yeh parivar mera parivar hai, un ki izat mein hi meri izat hai and mein yeh kabhi bardasht nahi karoon ge to koi uth kar un ke bare mein baat kare. Tum bi nahi!, Suna tum ne!" Bani said to a shocked Pia.
Jai who had been standing there all along was shocked! He had never seen this side of Bani before. He never thought she would care about his family so much or more so yell at her sister over his family.
"Wah Didi Wah…aaj to aap ne haad kar di hai. Mein samji thi ke meri didi mujhe samjh payee gi lakin mujhe nahi pata tha ke meri didi kitni badal gayee hai."
"Badli mein nahi Pia, tum ho. Mujhe nahi pata tha ke meri behan itni bari ho gayee hai ke vo mere se itni batamizi se baat kare gi. Us se pehle ke mein tumhe kuch hor kh baithoon, please tum yahan se chali jao." Bani said turning towards the window. She didn't want to have to face Pia or anyone else for that matter.
"Chali jaoon gi didi, lakin us se pehle maire aik sawal ka jawab dena pare ga."
"Mein tumhare kisi bi sawal ka jawab nahi dena chahti, Pia. Just leave!"
"Nahi didi, aaj tumhe jawab dena hi pare ga. Kya lagte hain Mr. Walia tumhare? Aaj tum ne Walia family ke liye apni behan ko thapar mara, kyun didi?"
"Tum janana chahti ho na? To suno. Mr. Walia mere PATI hain…samjhi?…"
"Pati?..Kaise pati didi? Aap to un se Pyaar bi nahi karti. Aree pati to wohh hota hai jis se us ki biwi Pyaar karti ho…na ke nafrat!!!"
"PIA!" Shouted Bani.
"Tum Pyaar ke bare mein kya jano? Tum kaise jaanti ho ke mein Mr. Walia se Pyaar nahi karti?…" Bani all of a sudden stopped…realizing what she had just said.
A shocked Jai looked at her. Was she serious? Did she love him?
Bani looked at Jai and Jai looked at Bani. Both stared at each other for a second before Bani turned to Pia and said "Pia us se pehle ke mein tumhe khud nikal doon, tum please khud hi chali jao…"
Pia, who couldn't believe what she had just heard, started to cry and ran out.
Bani too had tears in her eyes but she turned around so Jai wouldn't see her. Jai, who was still in shock…couldn't believe what he had just heard. He so wanted to just run up to her and hug her, and tell her how much he loved her.
He took a step forward and was about to say something when Bani cut him off and said "Mr. Walia, it's getting late, aap ko office jana hai, so aap change kar leegiye, mein aap ka nasta tayar karti hoon." Said Bani before she quickly walked out of the room without giving Jai a chance to say something. She didn't want to face him right now. She couldn't believe what she had just said.
"Lakin Bani…" he started to say but couldn't because she walked out too fast. He realized that she had forgotten that today was Saturday and there was no office. He knew she was ignoring him but he had to talk to her. He had to talk to her. He wanted to hear from her that she loved him.
Bani was in the kitchen making breakfast but her thoughts were still on what had just happened. "Kya mein sahi ka Mr. Walia se Pyaar karne lagi hoon? Nahi, yeh nahi ho sakta. Vo to mera moon bi nahi dekhna chahte. Lakin to kal raat ko huwa, vo kya tha? Nahi, uno ne party mein kafi zaida drink pi li thi, so he was drunk. He didn't know what he was doing." She thought to herself.
She was so lost in her thought that she didn't realize she had burnt Jai's paratha. She quickly tried to take it off the tawa but instead had burned her hand.
"OUCH!" she cried loudly. The hot oil had gone on her hand and it was killing her with pain.
Tony who was also in the kitchen heard her and said "Ma'm, are you ok?"
When he saw tears in her eyes, he said "ohh no, your hand…ma'm hold on." And left the kitchen.
He quickly called out to Jai saying "Sir, Bani ma'm ne apna hath jala liya hai?"
"WHAT!?!" a shocked Jai said as he ran to the kitchen.
"Bani, are you ok…?" he said before turning to Tony and said "tum yahan kya kar rahe ho, doctor ko phone karo…jaldi damn it!"
Bani, who was surprised at his reaction said "no, it's ok. I'll be fine."
"Bani, tumhara damagh to theik hai na, tum ne apne haath ko jala liya hai.." he said taking her hands in his.
Bani tried to pull her hand out of his couldn't because he was holding it so tightly. She again tried her hardest but couldn't and said "Mera haath choriye…mein theik hoon. App please ja kar table par baithiye, mein aap ka nasta le kar aati hoon…aap late ho rahe hain"
"Bani, tum shahed bhool rahi ho ke aaj Saturday hai and mujhe office nahi jana. Tum please kitchen se bahir aoo…let everyone else take of it" he said before taking her hand and walking out with her.
"Mr. Walia, mein theik hoon. Aap chor deejiye mujhe please…" she said as she let go of his hand and went to her room.
To be continued….
Anupamaa
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