My first OS True Love chap. 5 updated on pg 12

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Magicalworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi all...

Today i am writting my first OS please let me know if you like it

True Love

CHAPTER-1

It was a beautiful morning Manyata wake up and realize it is already 9 o clock she hurriedly get off the bed and go to washroom to take bath she come out of washroom and start taking a look on her wardrobe afterall today is the big day for her she was getting ready for a person who she loves most and to whom she will meet after 4 years today

She was getting ready when her sister J enter the room

J-jiji aap abhi tak ready nahi ho,please hurry up Uncle Giriraj,Unnati and Uday bas kabhi bhi aate honge so get ready fast and come down

Manyata-Yes give me 5 mins I will be there

J-ok

J left the room and manyata start thinking about his days with Unnati and Uday,UDAY who is her first love,she loves him from childhood,he is her dream man and today is the big day as she was meeting him after 4 years of wait

She get ready and come downstairs where everyone waiting for her she was looking gorgeous''''''.

At first her mother Komal compliment her

Komal-Manyata Beta you are looking very beautiful today

Than DS,brij and other family members including J and Vijay bhai compliments her

She just passed a smile to all in response

At that time a servant come running and inform that Maharaj GIRIRAJ have arrived everyone goes to the main door to welcome them except Manyata she was very nervous and shy so she decided to see Uday from behind the door

Maharaj giriraj,Unnati and uday greets all the family members and come inside the living hall And Manyata was just looking at Uday from behind the door

She saw him and said to herself Uday is same as before Handsome & with his usual little smile on face she was just looking at him continuously''''''''

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Edited by magicalworld - 13 years ago

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Thanks all of you i will update it soon and will pm you all

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Posted: 13 years ago

ok i will update it soon and pm you all

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Posted: 13 years ago

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CHAPTER 2

Manyata was looking at Uday from behind the door she not realize that Unnati is now standing behind her she slowly say Hi Manyata ,Manyata was shocked to see her behind herself

Manyata-oh hi Unnati how are you?

Unnati- I am fine but what happen to you

Manyata 'what?i am fine you can see

Unnati-no you are not why are you watching dada from here why don't you go and say hello to him.

Manyata gives her a look and said I was just little nervous you know Unnati when I meet Uday last time before 4 years we make a promise to each other and due to that promise we hadn't speak to each other on phone in the past 4 years

Unnati said Yes I know it was very difficult for Dada also I have seen him suffering.

Sometimes I asked him to forget about the promise and just call you but he never does.

But now everything is fine, today is the day for which you both were waiting.Now you both can meet each other

Manyata says Yes

Then komal see both of them talking she comes and ask Manyata to come as Maharaj Giriraj wants to meet her

Manyata and Unnati both goes to the hall

First Manyata greet Giriraj and than Uday who was looking at her,his eyes were filled of emotions and love

Manyata- Hi Uday how are you?

Uday - Hi, I am fine and you?

Manyata I am fine too

Both just do some formal talks and DS asks them to come for lunch to dining area.Everyone goes to their and take their lunch

After Lunch

Giriraj said that he should leave now and asks brijraj and DS to visit them soon

DS and Brijraj agree they start to leave when Uday slowly handover a chit to Manyata

Manyata rush to her room and start reading chit

"Princess I want to meet you in private so please be ready at 6 in the evening I will pick you up"

Manyata smile and said to herself Uday today our wait is over I kept my promise and now we can freely meet each other I will be ready I will be ready for you''''''.

Sorry everyone today i think my net has some problems so cannot pm this but next time i will pm you all ...

Edited by magicalworld - 13 years ago