My first OS True Love chap. 5 updated on pg 12 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyy!! Nice one, Update soon, i cant wait to see what happens on their date :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

šŸ‘šŸ‘great job...love it...šŸ‘šŸ‘



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arlover1

Heyy!! Nice one, Update soon, i cant wait to see what happens on their date :)


Thanks
I will update it soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it.. Add me in your PM list please! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one...Eagerly awaiting for your next update...
Edited by akshaaya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: akshaaya

Nice one...Eagerly awaiting for your next update...


thanks i will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi all
i m back with chapter 4
CHAPTER-4

Manyata saw Uday and ask him

Uday do you think I am wrong ,you are my best friend I always loved you like my friend ,you are important in my life but please understand Akash is my life

Can I expect that my friend will understand me and help me in this situation?

Uday said Manyata you know I always loved you and I will always love you please rethink about it I understand you much better

Manyata said no uday its my final decision I love Akash and only marry him I hope you understand

Now Uday have tears in his eyes but he said ok if this is your decision so come outside

Uday grab manyata by her shoulder and take her to the hall where everyone was gathered

He said to all

Uday-I want to inform you all about one mutual decision between me and my princess I mean manyata

Dadisahab ask him what is that decision uday beta?

Uday-we decided that ...

That Manyata will marry Akash but only after my wedding .Manyata and everyone looked shocked

Manyata said 'Uday what is '''' Uday don't allow her to complete her sentence and said yes princess I do not have any problem in you marrying to Akash but think about me also I will be alone without you so I will get married first''''''and after my wedding you can marry Akash'''is it fine

Manyata said-ok but she was feeling a kind of pain she never gone through so she quietly move to her room

Dadisahab ask Uday are you sure what are you going to do you know that Akash does not deserves manyata he is nothing infront of her..

Brijraj- Uday I did not expect this from you, But let me clear you one thing I will never let manyata marry to that ordinary man

A long discussion take place and finally uday succeed in making everyone agree for this marriage

Uday go to his palace after that

Manyata comes there and ask everyone about Uday DS told her that Uday have already left for his palace

Manyata was shocked she speaks to herself that Uday never leave without meeting her

Why he do this ?Why..

Present

Manyata was lost in her thoughts when someone knock the door she just realize and said Come in

Uday walks in and said Princess what's this you are not ready its already 6 and I am here on the correct time but you are late why?

Manyata run to him and hug him she starts crying

Uday asks her princess why are you crying stop crying please you know I can't see you cry

Uday wipe her tears and ask her what is the matter please sit and tell,

Manyata says Uday I was remembering our past when you were almost getting married and I realize my love for you and stopped your marriage but the punishment you gave both of us was not good either

Uday says Punishment ? princess I can never give you the punishment it was a test for both of us.


please comment...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was awesome. Uday knew that manyata actually loves uday more than aakash so he sed that to everyone knowing manyata wud end up stopping it. Great Idea...

Keep writing and thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey this was fantastic and please pm me when u update please

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