My first OS True Love chap. 5 updated on pg 12 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi all

i am back with Chapter 3 pls. read & comment😊

CHAPTER 3

Manyata was reading the chit and said to herself I will be ready for you Uday …………and she starts thinking of her past when she was new in this Rajmahal and meet her real family first time, she was very upset and sad she misses her friends and one special friend named Akash………

Akash who was her attraction but she thinked it was love, she likes his honesty and simplicity and on the other hand the style of royal prince Uday does not attract her as she herself was a simple living girl before entering the Rajmahal,

Manyata took some time to accept her family but at last she accept everyone her DS,Papa,maa and her sister j and other members including her bua and Vijay bhai

But one day when manyata realizes that her family loves her a lot and she decide to enclose her and Akash relation to the family but she was little scared of her Dad bcoz she knows that Uday is her fianc and her dad never let her marry to a normal person Akash

But she thinks that she have to be brave and tell the fact to the family so she gather everyone in the hall area including Uday (as she thoughts its his right also to know)

She also Invite Akash there,first Ds looks at Akash and ask manyata why she gathered everybody here

DS- manyata what happened beta why you call us here?

Manyata- DS I want to introduce you all to an important part of my life who is Akash

Everyone was confused so Brijraj speaks up

Brijraj- Manyata,what do you mean by that?

Manyata- Papa,I want to say that he is very important part of my life he is the person I love

Now everyone was shocked but Uday was angry,very much angry so uday say in anger

Princess, stop it you know you belongs to me you cannot do this to me I will never let go you from my life now I have waited for you so many years.

Manyata said-Uday don't overreact this is my life and I will take the decision and my decision is I will marry only akash not you I love Akash

Ds intervene and ask manyata to stop as you also know it is not possible Manyata Uday is your husband to be and he will be your husband noone else and than she told Akash to satay away of Manyata but Akash said It is not possible I love Manyata by heart and I will take care of her whole life

DS said to Akash-Do you really think you can take care of a princess ?she is not ordinary girl she is the Princess of devgarh.so get out of her life it is not possible but Akash says no he is not ready to forget Manayata and Manyata also join him and said we both are made for each other and we will not leave each other DS commands to the guards to take Akash away from there and they take away,

Suddendly manyata starts running behind Akash and Uday stops her so she starts crying and screaming loudly she said you all cannot be my family so even don't care about me and my feelings I love Akash I love him very much and I only belongs to him

Suddenly Brij comes towards manyata and slap her tightly,Manyata and everyone else was shocked including uday

Brij says –Manyata I think it is very happy moment for us when we got you back but sorry to say now I feel that was the worse day of our life how can you do this to your own family, and from today I will think my lost daughter is dead DS stops Brij and say Brijraj What is you saying please mind your words

Brijraj say How can I control myself maasaheb you see the behavior of this girl she is not ashamed for what she did and openly saying that she loves that ordinary boy Akash in front of her family and her husband to be Uday,

J comes to Manyata and consoles her she and Vijay bhai takes her to her room

J gives some water to Manyata and say jiji I know that you are upset but please think from our family point of view that boy Akash,he is nothing in front of us jiji so its better you forget him and carry on your classes to be a princess and become a princess and marry to Uday he loves you so much….. and he is your best friend also, in this Rajmahal you accepts him like your friend first than all of us he is the one who bought you back in your family you should be thankful to him……………

Manyata look at J tears fells downs from her eyes she said J I was thinking you love me most and you will understand my position I know he is my best friend but just friend nothing else I cannot accept him as my fianc or husband I don't love him but you too……….

J quickly say please jiji don't get me wrong I love you very much and that's why I m saying this to you Vijay join and said yes manyata we all love you so much and we have waited for you so many years and just think about Uday he loves you from childhood

He always loves one girl in his life you Manyata you please think about him and think about the prestige of our house

Manyata was not in mood to listen all this so ask both of them to leave her alone

J and Vijay moves out now Manyata was alone in her room she was getting flashbacks of her family and Akash she screams loudly nooo she Opens eyes and see Uday is standing infront of her…………………………

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi lovely update ...love the flash back
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pri01

Hi lovely update ...love the flash back

plzzz continue soon


Thanks i will update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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luvly rashi... i luv d flashbck... tell me 1 thng is it maanveer story...???bcoz i luv maanveer 2gther...
thanks 4 long update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: luckdiya

luvly rashi... i luv d flashbck... tell me 1 thng is it maanveer story...???bcoz i luv maanveer 2gther...
thanks 4 long update😊


hi do not worry i love MANVEER too and the end they will be together😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow it wox awsome plz pm me 4 nxt prt
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for the pm. it was so great, i rly want to no what happens next. plz update soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: capriya

very nice part...continue soon...


thanks i will update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Laxsha

Wow it wox awsome plz pm me 4 nxt prt


thanks i will pm you

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