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Waiting for update..😍
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great ...
i knew she cant stay quite for long
and maan is silently enduring everything for her
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Hi Muskan,
Will comment later. I have copied all the 5 parts of DA & 5 parts of Bandhein. Will revert soon after reading them. Was trapped in a seminar for last 5 days and no outer world for us till now. Just stretching out now.
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maan so silent OMG mujhe chakkar aaraha hai
Geet in love with?????????????
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wow!! dii

loved this SS..

this superb..a silent love story..

but i really think maan is upto something..

cont soon
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~bandishein~
PART 6

According to her they were close. Or atleast she was!!! he knew every thing wat she did & where she went. She even told him all abt the proposals she got in college. He would sweetly listen to every think with no judgment, just with an open mind. Probably thats why she never feared to tell him every thing.
It was her second year of college, she was showing him snaps from her facebook friends list on their drive back. She was again & again showing a particular pic of a guy. He looked at her... he didn't have to ask anything..her cheek turned all red. She bit her lips in the corner.
wo..
yeh Tanmay hain

he looked at him again & continued to look back at the road. It was kind of understanding between them.. she would just continue to speak.
He said he likes me...
Maan looked at her... she sighed turning all pink.. main
she chuckled knotting her duppata.. tum tho mama aur papa ko janathe ho na
don't know when she started calling him tum... nun of them realized
he sighed sadly understanding her point
Geet ' but I think mama- papa ko Tanmay aacha lage ga
wat do u think?
He didn't say anything then.
She tried to explain Tanmay is good
he gave a questioning look back
Geet - he is not from our college, but my other frds know him personally.
Maan didn't seem convinced here. She got really restless
Geet ' tum ek bar ussen milo ge mera liyen
Maan didn't say anything & his expression she couldn't read either this time. There r instances when his silence goes beyond her comprehension. Like his every nod.. every sigh ..every glance she knows wat it means... but then..there r these instances she just can't understand..like he shuts himself
But then she understood she was pushing her luck little too much here.
Few days had passed Geet was not seeing this guy but she was definitely began to feel something for him. Maan never said anything... one day out of the blue he pulled out his phone & showed her some group photos of Tanmay in very different frd circle.
Instead of looking at the photo Geet was more curious u too have a FB account
Maan rolled his eyes & pointed at the photos
Geet was taken a back
it was like a different account of Tanmay with all his frds.
She clearly looked hurt & didn't even talk to Maan.
She was kind of angry on him now. Maan really didn't know wat to say. He silently dropped her home... couple of days had passed with her gussa on him. It only made him more quiet & reserved.

As the days passed she was ok & herself started speaking to him like nothing happened.
The saddest part was Tanmay managed to brain was abt the other profile & began to get close to her. Spending time with her .. small tiny miny college bunking, sneaking out.. all keeping Maan in loop. She knew Maan didn't approve of Tanmay but he was happy for her.

2nd year of college just couple of months left.
Feb.. valentines day celebration was just around the corner. Geet sat in the car thinking something...
Maan looked at her couple of times.. he knew she wanted to tell him something but was hesitating...
he stopped the car & looked at her
she fluttered her lashes rapidly. He sighed looking away...giving her space
Geet ' Tanmay wants to kiss me
her face was red in embarrassment.
It was pretty odd for Maan too... he didn't know if it was ok.. it was not too early.. they have been together now for 6months.. but he knew this guy was not good!!!
Geet ' I don't know how to ..
she ate her words
Maan tried to turn on the ignition.. she held his wrist. He looked at her.. I tried to stop him couple of times.. lekin kal valentines day hain tho
she could clearly see his disapproval ' why don't u like him
u know tum asien mana karo ge tho
she crossed her arms & looked away
mujhe aacha nahi lagtha
Maan didn't say anything just started the car & continued to drive

next day was valentines day.. she was looking really very special
she gave Maan a rose & wished him happy valentines day.. Maan smiled & took the flower.
Waisen tum bhi mujhe happy valentines day kah sakten ho..
he smirked at her cute cribbing
she showed him the gift & card she brought for Tanmay, while dropping her off Maan gave her warning look.. she twisted her lips & went in cribbing.
Later in the evening Maan waited for her patiently. He knew she will be late today... especially her first valentines day. But he was shocked to see her dot on time..
she came & sat with a grumpy face
he cleared his throat
aab khush ho na tum she shouted at him
he lifted his brow is wonder
Tanmay fought with me because of u. mujhe tum se baat nahi karni hain
Maan wondered main ne kya kiya
I was so waiting for this day... u.. u .. GRRR...
u ruined it all.
He still had that wat did I do look plastered
it was all going so fine... we had such nice day.. we went out... he gave me this bracelet..
he even liked wat I got for him...
were so romantically walking around holding hands... & he so sweetly proposed... I couldn't deny...
it was all so dreamy...
in the parking lot...he sweetly caressed my cheek... he leaned close... I could feel his breath... & then
Maan looked at her with questioning eyes
she waked him... & then this stupid warning face of urs came in mind.. I couldn't...
Maan looked away.. was he muffling his laughter.. well she didn't know... he was looking away from him.
he got so angry at me.. she began to cry... hiding her face in her lap.
Its first time we have fought u know
who bhi valentines day ke din
I am so heart broken..
she cried... I feel so horrible.. he thinks i don't love him
all because of u...
mujhe tumhari baat hi nahi sunni chahiyen
baat tho karten nahi... bus yun.. badi badi aanken dihka rahten ho
aaa..
she cried...
Maan almost held head ' hearing cry for the rest of the drive.
Precap
haila Geet heart broken
-PREV PART 5 NEXT PART 7-

hope u like it
please motivate me with ur comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago

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