FF: ~Beauty Meets the Beast~ Part 4 Pg 18 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely prologue
continue soon and ya do add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CONGRATS ON THE NEW FF
MAAN IS A TYRANT WHO TERRORISES EVERYBODY
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: XXaquafireXX


Haha yes I did...we'll see how long my urges for writing will continue tho šŸ˜†

ahaha your dad..he's not serious is he? šŸ˜• hah jk šŸ˜†
I hope people like this concept, cuz I'm planning to update tonight...😳
Yes Maanu Jaanus going to be one hell of an arrogant guy, but we all like that don't we?šŸ˜‰


haha yeah am glad you have writing urges lol
I love this concept
And yes he is serious, one time I fell down and needed to get stiches and throughout the whole ride to the hospital he just kept yelling for not looking and for being stupid...that story is still stuck with me šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† whenever I jump or run around he always yells I don't have time to take you to the hospitalšŸ˜†šŸ˜†

And you know what surprisingly we all love bad, arrogant MSK...what is hte world coming to? We love bad guys šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I want update. Wo bi 2 - 3 part. Yaar jaldi update do
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrs.msk


haha yeah am glad you have writing urges lol
I love this concept
And yes he is serious, one time I fell down and needed to get stiches and throughout the whole ride to the hospital he just kept yelling for not looking and for being stupid...that story is still stuck with me šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† whenever I jump or run around he always yells I don't have time to take you to the hospitalšŸ˜†šŸ˜†

And you know what surprisingly we all love bad, arrogant MSK...what is hte world coming to? We love bad guys šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†


omigod...i hope you werent hurt too bad. how many stitches did you get? yeah ur dad has a totally valid reason for yelling at you...sry im on his side! 😊

haha i know what you mean. But we also know that bada** maan šŸ˜Ž always changes later on into a good desi boy...😳. not to mention he gets his good looks and body shody from the dark side 🤣


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: XXaquafireXX


omigod...i hope you werent hurt too bad. how many stitches did you get? yeah ur dad has a totally valid reason for yelling at you...sry im on his side! 😊

haha i know what you mean. But we also know that bada** maan šŸ˜Ž always changes later on into a good desi boy...😳. not to mention he gets his good looks and body shody from the dark side 🤣



hahah yeah I know he is right in his own but damn tone it down a little with the speech lol...haha I had to get couple of stiches on my pinky finger and my elbow...yaar idk bout the how many exactly as I was too busy being a chicken seeing the needle 🤣 🤣
Yeah I know he is hottest when he is darkšŸ˜†šŸ˜† it makes him more attractive šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beauty Meets the Beast

Part 1:

"Papa, please. You must take your medicine. Stop fighting with me like a child," argued a young woman of about nineteen years.

"No, no NO! I will fight boars, climb mountains, start random fights, but nothing on this planet will make me shove that so-called voodoo drink down my throat!" Mohinder wailed back.

"Voodoo?! Papa! I'm trying to help heal you!" Geet wasn't about to give up just yet. So she tossed in the bait: guilt.

"Fine, as you wish. But I won't eat a single morsel of food or drink a drop of water unless you down the 'concoction' right here, right now."

Geet smiled to herself. Gotcha. Yes, she was just as stubborn as her old man, but it certainly had its advantages in situations like right now. Both knew her stubbornness also strung from her late mother (meaning she's received a double dosešŸ˜‰) and so with a frustrated "humph!" he held the bottle to his lips. Silently praying to Baabaji, he gulped it all in one go. He cringed as the bitter taste flooded through his mouth.

"That's better! See? It wasn't so hard now was it?" Geet said triumphantly as she kissed his cheek.

"I guess not. What would I do without you, dear?" Mohinder smiled while Geet giggled.

"Well Papa, if you are finished being overdramatic, I'm heading off into town. We are low of some provisions and I also wanted to stop by at the bookstore."

"Of course, you be careful out there."

"Will do. Well, I'm off!" And with that she took her basket and went out the door. The town was bustling with activity. Geet could her children laughing by the bakery. At the fruit vendor's stand, a woman was screaming at the man for slyly giving her less fruits and charging more. After gathering the necessary provisions, she heard a deep voice yell her name. "Oh GEEET!"

She rolled her eyes and tried to walk away as fast as she could without making it too obvious, but alas--

"Ah, Geet, there you are. I've been trying to catch you all morning, sweetie," a man drawled. He was about six feet in height, overly muscled, with very white straight teeth, and a breath that could knock one out for a week, in a bad way.

"Oh uh, Rahul. Uh... it's nice to see you, but I really need to get going. My father is expecting me," she replied quickly.

"Oh, c'mon you really should relax every once in a while. How 'bout your come on over to the tavern with me? I'll show you all of my gaming trophies," Rahul said, wiggling his eyebrows in the process.

"Maybe some other time, I need to go now." Geet slipped away and ran down the trail.Grrh he touched me. Yuck! She knew Rahul for a very long time. Sure, he was handsome and all, but also a complete self-centered jerk. Honestly, all the man thinks of his himself. How he became the heartthrob of the village is beyond me, she huffed mentally. She stomped all the way back home.

After dinner that night, Geet asked her father if they could go to the orchards the following day and pick some apples to make apple crisp and preserves for the winter.

"Why not," he said cheerfully, "it's the perfect season and we'll get quite a bundle of fruits. We will head there tomorrow morning." Geet lay in bed, super excited. She couldn't wait, the orchards were full of trees laden with various fruits. Near there was a meadow full of wild flowers. She remembered like it was yesterday when she would run in and out of those fields and dance around. All the picnics they had when her mother, Rano, was alive. She adored that place because it held many treasured memories. She smiled before closing her eyes and embraced sleep.

Note: Sorry I know this is short, but I have somewhere else to go in, like, a few minutes. šŸ˜† Let me know what you guys think!

Edited by XXaquafireXX - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome n beautiful update...
yeah its short but loved it...
thank u very much fr such a lovely update...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi!! I have som very fond memories of The Beauty and The Beast from my childhood.
I just love it but never did it strike me that Maaneet would be simply perfect to play the roles.
Bring it on girl !! I'm just waiting to read more.

😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part dear loved it...
U write like a real fairy tale writter...
Waiting for nxt part cont. soon

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