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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update..
it was really cute..
aww the wind..rain...😳
rain is always lucky 4 mayur...😳
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...


sry for not commenting before...
all the parts are beautiful
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Posted: 14 years ago

Very Beautiful update Kinza and Mulan

Simply awesome

Loved all the parts…

Nups- nups dad binding and Sayank bonding was just wonderful

Felt bad for maynak-poor guy he didn't get love from his drunken father and he lost his sister due to poverty—very miserable past..

Maynk adored nups and her fathers bonding – he too miss his fatherly love…

Both maynk-nupur hav soft corner 4 each other in their heart…

But both r different in nature..

Lets c how will destiny unite them???

Btw the last scene of 8th chapter was too magical…. Oh GOD i just loved it…

Awesome , stupendous update…

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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW what a turn of events!!!...damn achanak se mayank itna bold kaise ho gaya...not complaining but just surprised...unless if she's dreaming...which i hope not!...waiting for the next update now 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...two of my fav writers are writing this beautiful ff 😊
sorry for being lazy nd not commenting earlier
i have been reading all the parts
& i am literally in love with this ff
Mayank & Nupur are soo adorable 😳
i love the way you guys are potraying their feelings
waiting for the next update
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!! wonderful updates..
jst awesome
cant wait to reAD MORE
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updt mehak
finally mayur started to talk normally...loved their truce & mayank's last confession ..cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part!!!
loved it!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
API... :'(
aj update milega ya nhi... :'( 🥺
main 5hrs se lappy on kar ke sou rahi hoon...🤣😳
iss ummid mein ke abhi update ayega...abhi...abhiii
plzzz update soon...coz main ab bhi wait hi kar rahi hoon...😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u all!! 🤗 and anila .. sweet, sorry for the delay .. 😳

Chapter # 9

" do u think I can take the truce as an excuse to tell u , u are very beautiful Nupur Bushan", he smiled sincerely and nupur who was still trying to bask in the tingle on her skin which appeared due to his slight brush of fingers, stared back blankly, acting as if she was completely alien to the language he used, and her unusual silence made Mayank awkward.

"Umm .. I am sorry if ..

" no .. please .. umm .. thank you .. ", she fumbled and looked away.

A while passed in silence, where Nupur felt an alien sensation running through her body after his compliment and Mayank took a deep breath, cursing him on let himself lose composure with her nearness, but at the same time he was stealing glances, affirming the belief that how right his compliment was.

He thought for a while that why was he running away from his heart giving it useless pain and anxiety. Samrat is right maybe, this girl isn't that bad, and when he can teach her in a friendly manner, then why should he always wear up this mask of seriousness, when always beside her, he wanted to smile and talk.

What exactly was this girl's fault that he used to treat her like an enemy, and this behavior made him feel like a thief who had to wear a mask to hide his oneself, which was not at all acceptable.

He thought maybe nature had already set the stage to pave ways for a friendly acquaintance.

"as today I fell unusually talkative, I would like to say something else", he broke the silence, as his voice mingled with the heavy rainfall outside, "sure", was all Nupur could reply, after gaining energy to look back at him.

"Nupur I am sorry for everything, I know I was rude and unnecessarily strict, but that was just an attempt to make you study because you tend to be careless, and well, I'll be honest, I started feeling an ego clash with you", he paused to take a look at her, "you are a very nice person Nupur", he ended with a smile and Nupur had to struggle not let out a gasp.

"are u sure we both are not dreaming", she asked in a serious tone and frowning at first, Mayank chuckled seeing the way she was faking amazement, "dreams are fantasies, I just told you the reality", he again smiled and Nupur giggled, "thank you, I am caught off-guard and I am flattered".

"you don't need to be, you deserve all the praise and much more than this"

"umm okay ..", she smiled, "lets give a pause to my praises and start yours', even you an amaz ..

"okay stop, we should stop talking turns in praising each other", he frowned and started looking outside and Nupur pouted , "that was not fair!, I had to praise you", she frowned and followed his line of sight and Mayank again stole a view of an utterly cute pouting sight.

"okay if not praises, then I have something else to say", she took a deep breath and Mayank turned to her with a smile, "please, go ahead.."

"can we strengthen this truce with a friendship", she smiled and looked at him hopefully while for a moment he thought anything refusing to this smile is utterly impossible for him, "please ..", she added, "u know today for the first time you have talked to me, and trust me I always wanted to do it but you never allowed, can we be friends .. please .."

She again ended her conversation with a hopeful smile but Mayank took a deep breath, "Nupur I do not form relations, because with relations comes liability, and I don't think I can take the responsibility of a friendship of a sensitive girl like you, I am sorry", he smiled but yet again Nupur felt her eye pockets getting wet, "but we can remain a friendly teacher and student duo", he smiled fully and turned towards the rain while Nupur took a deep breath to swallow that tear, making a note of one thing. This person can break her heart even with his smile.

Chapter # 10 - Page 32 - mulan.

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago

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