~Ajnabi Kaun ho Tum~ Part 2 --5/2 see Modnote pg 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

hi di😊 --- hi 😊😊😊

another ffπŸ‘ πŸ‘ me to very very happyπŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ awesome part but a lil confusing😊 😳 i mean wo ladka bhoot tha ya ladki jab tak end tak padha to baad mein aisa laga jaise dono mein se ek koi bhoot thaπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† --- dono hi bhoot nahi hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† hero toh bilkul bhi nahi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

but the part was nice , interesting and i found a litlle mysterious eagerly --- thanku 😳😳
waiting to read next part also😊 😊
thnx for the pm
shreya😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

Mana ki tarah mujhe bhi yehi laga ke tumne sayad koi bhutiya fiction shuru kiya..---lolz πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† sabko bhutiya FF lag raha hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

.phir maine apna sherni wala dimag daudaya...aur natiza yeh samne aay ki...yeh ladki jarur hamare pyare ajnabi ko janti hai...ya phir jann ne ke liye hire ki gayi hai...ya phir aisa hi kuch...πŸ˜›--- πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† smart sherni πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

yeh koi bhoot-phoot nahi hai...πŸ˜†

aur agar hui bhi toh kya...!!! dekh lo...bhoot bhi raj se itne impress ho gaye ki...apni shaitani dimag chod kar raj ki khatirdari me lagg gaye...ise kehte hain charm...πŸ˜›πŸ˜†--- πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

warna aaj kal koun ajnabiyo ko ghar me ghushne deta hai...main toh ek hi din me do baar apne bhai ke upar paani dal chuki hoon ke...andhere me yeh koun chala aa raha hai...--- aww poor him πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ask ur bro to roam around shouting his name πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

aur rahi baat 2005 aur 2012 k mystery ki toh...yeh wo kuch points hain jinhe le kar main iss bhoot bani ladki ko le kar doubted hoon...-- socho πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

aur rahi baat heroine ki toh mujhe koi tension nahi hai...main khud ko imagine karr leti hoon... real life me bhi toh main roz sab ko shocks deti rehti hoon...ek fic me hi sahi...after all ajnabi bann ke Raj jo khada hai...πŸ˜†--- dats good πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ after all hero pe line marne ka mauka milega πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

ab ajnabi ki bhi ek sweety chopra hai...jiss me cheeni ki jagah namak hai...warna raj itni tarif nahi karrta...πŸ˜†--- πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

khair raat ko tumne uss ladki ko bhutiya dikhaya...subah ajnabi ko gayab karr ke ajnabi ko bhutiya dikhaya...--- do u really think i will make Rajeev a bhoot πŸ˜† impossible πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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ab tumhare dimag me chal kya raha hai...jara next upadet jaldi se post karr ke yeh baat describe karogi plz...πŸ˜›--- dimaag ki abhi scientists research kar rahe hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† pata chalte hi will tell u πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
btwn beautifully written...maza aaya padhne me...πŸ˜ƒ--- thank u πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kya hua no reply to comment itna bura tha kyaπŸ˜† anyways up soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2


As the girl dragged herself inside the house... Sunlight filtering in the room... giving it a completely different appearance from the previous night...her eyes fell on a shining object kept on the Mantlepiece, near the Family Photograph. 😊

The young girl walked slowly towards the Mantlepiece and saw a Gold Chain with a Crystal Locket emblazoned on it lying on top of a folded piece of paper which looked like it was torn from her Notebook. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

As the girl took the chain in her hand, the Crystal dazzled magnificiently from the rays of Sunlight which were filtering inside the room!😊 It was the most beautiful piece of jewellery she had ever seen in her Life.😳😳

The girl then picked up the folded piece of paper and opened to see it scribbled in a slanting, mature handwriting, written in Pencil;😊

Dear Princess,

Did anyone tell you, that you look like an Angel when asleep? 😊😊 didnt' have the heart to wake you up...not after I made you Cook and give me Company last night! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

How can I ever thank you or repay for the kindness you showered on a stanger? πŸ˜ƒ They say that what goes around, comes around...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ so I hope that Life gives me atleast once chance to pay back your kindness. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Please keep this Crystal locket as a Birthday Gift from my side... 😳 this will be a reminder of our wonderful and strange meeting for all the years to come! 😳😳

Take care of yourself and do practice more on the Statistics 😊!

Lots of Love,πŸ˜³πŸ˜›

Ajnabi 😳

PS: Do you mind knowing that I planted a teeny-weeny kiss on your Forehead before leaving...Just couldn't help it... you were looking too adorable !πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

As Purvi (heroine gets a name πŸ˜†) read and re-read the letter time and again, she grinned widely, πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ as tears flowed down from her eyes...😭😭 she clutched the letter in her hand and did a sort of twirl around the room..πŸ˜†..Guess that is what falling in love feels like, afterall!☺️😳

Nidhi had come back from their school-trip around later half of dat day 😊😊 and was pestering purvi to open the Present she had got for her Birthday...

"Gifts toh dekho na di... tell me whether you like it or not...pata hai itna dhundne ke baad ek acha sa gift mila aapke liye" πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Purvi nodded her head as she set about preparing the Lunch... her Parents were expected back today...The last two days had been spent in sleepless nights as Purvi kept thinking about her Fairytale rendevouz πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰with the Stranger.😳😳😳
πŸ˜‰


Just then the phone rang and putting the Cooking Stove on Sim, rushed towards the Phone, it was working for a change...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

"Hello...Papa...Aap kahan hai..πŸ˜• .Hum log aapko itna miss kar rahein hai...Hello Papa...Kya hua...😲 yeh aap kya bol rahe hai ?"

Hearing Nidhi looked on towards Purvi , as she stood with the phone reciever her in her hands, dumbstruck and numbed...a lone teardrop falling from her cheeks.😭

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7 Years Later - Delhi


It was 7 years since that fatal telephone call from her when Father had told her that their Mother died in a Road Accident in Delhi ,😭😭 where they had gone to viist one of their relatives.

The last 7 years had been the toughest in Purvi's life, she had become the nurturer and protector of her Family, as her Father had almost gone into depression with his wife's death and was barely in a position to give any solace to two young girls.

Purvi took upon the mantle of being the Mother and Head of the Family, growing mature beyound her years, as if her childhood had been shut and locked up forever in Space...As if her childhood stopped the day she received the fatal phonecall


The only memory which had helped Purvi sustain, survive and flourish was the magical night she had spent in the Company of the Charming Stranger... πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ whom she still referred to in all her thougths as 'Ajnabi.' 😳😳😳

And then a month ago... her Father had collapsed because of a massive Cardiac Arrest.

Before his death, he had handed over a Letter to Purvi and had told her to leave Panchgani and go to delhi , where an old acquaintance of their Family will help them out..😊 ..

After her father passed away ...Reluctantly , with a heavy heart, purvi had set about winding her House in Panchgani ...which had been not mere house but a place where she spent her childhood, her growing up years 😊😊 ...but now all alone & Nidhi to take care of who just completed her schooling ... she leaves for Delhi .

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And here she was...😊

Waiting in the Guest Room of 'Kapoor Mansion'...

As Purvi looked at the crumpled letter in her Hand...given by her father she wondered what the future held in store for her. πŸ˜•

The Letter was written for her Father...by a certain, Mr. Jeet Kapoor, one of the richest men in India... belonging to an Old and Wealthy Aristrocratic Family.

The letter stated in a clipped and two the point manner that if something is to happen to Anirudh Verma , the writer of the Letter would be responsible for his Family.😊😊

Purvi wondered time and again... who this person was... whom she had never heard before in her House and why was he being so generous towards her Family.

As Purvi looked around...she saw Nidhi admiring the superlative Carpeting and Upholstery that bedecked the room...Purvi had never seen anything so beautiful but somehow the whole house had a Cold look.

"Wow Di, kya ghar hai! I wish...jab meri shaadi ho... toh main bhi kisi aise hi ghar mein rahoon." πŸ˜†

Nidhi gushed as she felt the sheer silk curtains which covered the huge Bay Windows overlooking the picturesque garden from a distance a garden filled with some of world's rarest bful flowers .

Purvi made a wry face as she sat awkwardly & spoke softly...

"Yeh sirf makaan hai Nidhi... isme Ghar jaisi koi baat nahin hai..."πŸ˜•

As Purvi spoke, she realized that the Crystal in her hand...which had been her constant companion for the last 7 years... 😳😳 slipped from her fingers and fell on the floor.

Purvi bent down to pick it up...as she heard a deep baritone speaking in a cold and deliberate manner,


"Yeh mera makaan hai...Jeet Kapoor ka makaan... aur yeh kahin Gharo se behtar hai..."

As Purvi looked up startled and scared 😲... she kept standing to her spot... frozen to the ground...😲😲.

Purvi kept staring at the Tall...well built man...with piercing black eyes set in a classically handsome face...with the classy rimless glasses... his silky black hair...perfectly gelled back😊

Jeet gave a frosty look at Purvi, which was enough for sending down shivers ...He showing no signs of any interest and seated himself royally on the Couch, one leg on the other.

Purvi kept standing where she was... not able to believe what she thougth she had just saw...😲 .No, it can't be...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜² .How can it be possible? 😲

Jeet asked Purvi in the same clipped and authoritative voice

"So Tell me...what do you want from me?... mere paas barbaad karne ke liye waqt nahi hai? pehle hi tum bina kisi intimation or appointment ke aayi ho...? (seeing her not answering) I hope you are not deaf & dumb πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜• tumhe sunai de raha hai na? what am I asking ? Hello...

Purvi felt as if she had almost stopped breathing, 😲 but her heart knew that her gut feeling was bang on...Jeet Kapoor was her 'Ajnabi', the stranger who had came to her House...not only house but made a permamnent place in her heart that rainy... storm-lashed House, 7 years back...😳😳

... to be continued...


Edited by -purnima- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Here the part 2 ends ...😳😳 ... Hope its Ok πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ ..hoping ab koi confusion nahi hai ki yeh koi bhootiya FF hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† its a sweet simple love story 😳😳😳... sab bekar mein dar rahe the πŸ˜›πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...

Wud be looking forward to comments πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

As I always say ... njoy reading... ...

Any suggestions, criticisms.. all are welcome πŸ€— .but commenting is necessary' πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† silent readers can press the like button to let me know u liked reading the part'😳😳😳

Since the other FF will be updated may be day after tomorrow isiliye RK news yahin par πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Will U Marry Me Music Launch/movi stills - pg4 😳😊

Keep Smiling & Njoy Reading πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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Love Purnima 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one puri !!
and thanks for clearing out the confusion regarding genre of fic..πŸ˜†
aahh...n what else i wanted to write???
umm...ab jab tak Purvi aur Jeet kapoor interact nahi karenge...hum aur kya keh payenge...?πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
so come back soon with the update dear..

luv,
mana😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -purnima-

Part 2

... to be continued...




<3ly update.. but wat happened in 7 years with jeet kapoor.. :-O y he was so rude





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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi
the up is good
so the stranger left a cryastal locket for the girl as her bday girft and with it aleeter where he thanked her for her warm hospitality which she showed on him last night
the girl became really happy by getting the gift
but life was really cruel towards her she lost her mother and now father
she have to wind up her house and shidted to delhi as told by her father
but the place where she came with her sis was the house of that stranger
lets see what happens next
plz cont soon and pm me
ur story reminds me of kasam se's bani leaving her house after her father death with her sisters
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Puri
Update was just wonderful butt really too small.πŸ‘πŸ‘
But I am happy atleast my guess was right.😎.
Ajnabi has surely made a place in Purvi's heart forever.That gift seems to b quite expensive and she was quite happy to accept it as her borthday present.
The letter was really warm and I am sure that ajnabi definetely felt something for her..πŸ˜ƒ
Poor Purvi!! she has to face so much difficuties after that magical night.
How come her father knows Jeet???
Jeet !! nice name and he is damn arrogant..but he is in for a pleasant shock.he hasn't recognized Purvi yet but she has instantly recognized him..I am sure any 1 in her shoes wont ever forget such a face..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Bye

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