OS: Knock Knock, Who's There?

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HeadOverHeels

@HeadOverHeels

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Posted: 13 years ago

Caution: Content below could be considered inappropriate for some age groups. Moral guidance is advised.

Someone knocked at the door. *knock knock*

Khushi opened the door, and was startled. (Which means her eyes opened wide, and she was shocked)

Arnav stood at the door.

He didn't step inside, because it was inappropriate. (Which means it was not nice)

Khushi said: Please come inside my house Arnavji

Arnav said: Are you sure I'm allowed to come inside your house Khushiji?

Khushi said: Umm... I don't know, I have to ask my mommy first.

Arnav said: OK, shall I wait?

Khushi said: Yes, please wait.

He waited.

Khushi asked her mommy's permission.

Her mommy said yes.

Khushi let Arnav come inside the house.

Arnav was happy.

Khushi was happy.

Mommy was happy.

They were all happy.

The end.

Edited by HeadOverHeels - 13 years ago

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Infofan

@Infofan

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Posted: 13 years ago

🤣

This has to be one of the best OS ever. My six year old can read this. Happy to see you are back to writing.

Beautifully written Anne and thanks for the PM.

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shybabe

@shybabe

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Posted: 13 years ago

🤣 OMG Anne...this has to be the most hilarious OS i have ever read🤣...Only u could pull something like this...

u should seriously send this to the mods of the fan fiction🤣

maybe they can post this on the rules and regulations for writing an OS or a FF...👏

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Nisha

@Nrp77

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Posted: 13 years ago

This must be removed immediately!!! This is not appropriate for anyone under the age of 18 b/c an unmarried Khushi is allowing a BOY to come into her house!!! 😲 OMG, what if other teens read this and allow boys in their home!?! 😲 What a travesty!!! Hahahaa 🤣

Damn, where are those net-nannies when you need them!?! 😆

Edited by Nrp77 - 13 years ago

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TeleFan

@TeleFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

Anne sickly sweet romance please send this to the mods and ask if thiz is appropriate for all the children?
Your have a superb sense of humour always admIre your wit.