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Posted: 14 years ago
wow amazing. I hope mayank thora to polite ho jaye
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update

continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updt kinza
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Posted: 14 years ago
very beautifully written. Gr8 going. Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter # 6

As soon as Mayank left the room, Nupur rushed to her own room and let the tears of anguish flow uninhibited. Curling up her knees and cuddling to herself she sat crying.. Yet again Mayank succeeded in reducing her to tears but it wasn't about him, it was about her own heart. Why did she have to crave for his praise when she knew very well that she was the best. Then why did it hurt when he never acknowledged her presence. Why was she behaving this way about the man whose arrogance tormented her?. Why on earth did he make her feel this helpless, this weak, this vulnerable.


Nupur was still trying to comprehend answers to these questions when she heard her dad's voice. Wiping tears she quickly got up and looking at her reflection to make sure she was looking fine, she ran downstairs.

**

Mayank was feeling stuck! Yes that was the word. When Mr Bhushan had seen him leaving and invited him for dinner, he had failed to summon courage to refuse and now sitting beside Mr Bhushan on dining table while he called out his *princess*, Mayank was lost in his own thoughts. He very well knew the reason he had accepted the invitation was because he wanted to see Nupur once again.. To see her and reassure his tormented heart that she was fine, he knew this was wrong m but so was the way he had reduced Nupur to tears. That girl was indeed a princess, and then why the hell did he treated her this way?
Both of them were thinking about each other when nupur entered the room and the first thing she looked into were his eyes, and somewhere she knew those eyes were lamenting.

"aray aa gaye mere princess!", hearing Mr Bhushan's his love filled voice, Nupur smiled and went to him for a kiss on her forehead., "meine socha aj mayank ko rok he loon dinner per.", he said and Nupur answered with another smile and sat down beside her father, facing Mayank.

The dinner started and Mr Bhushan was the one keeping most of the conversation going. Once or twice he cracked a joke and Nupur couldn't help but laugh out loud but she noticed the subtle smile that Mayank passed her dad. She was taken aback by how well he carried himself, and how easily he gave credit to the joke with that smile giving her dad the due respect but still kept a firm grip on himself.

She was looking at him thinking about this when he looked up and caught her staring. Before they both could let their eyes converse, Mr bushan asked, "mayank mere princess zyada tang to nahe kr rahe na?"

He ran an affectionate hand through her head and Mayank didn't miss the fear that appeared on Nupur's face. She was worried he would let her down in front of her father who prided her so much.

"nupur is a very intelligent student Mr Bhushan.. Its a pleasure teaching her", he said with a smile but couldn't look at Nupur because Mr Bhushan needed an audience to listen to him praise his daughter and Mayank dutifully listened.

**

It wasn't until he took his leave and was at the gate of the large mansion when his mobile vibrated.. He was surprised to see Nupur's name flashing with a new message notification.


Thank you.. :)


Just that smiley brought smile to his face and he sent,

ur welcome.

He sent it while looking up at the window where all the curtains were thrown open.. For a moment he stood there looking at the reflection at the window, they both stood looking at each other without letting the other know. But just before Mayank left the house, they both knew, something changed that day.

Chapter 7 - Page 22 - Fantasia.

Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
API...
awesome update...
loved it lodsss...
Beautifully written as usual...
loved it to d coreee...
u write it so beautifully...
dis update gv me a feeling of contentment...
it was sooo adorable...
i loved d eye locks...
it was amazing...
i loved Nupur's fear...
n d way Mayank didn't let her down...
n most importantly...
d msg...
it was d best part...
n yes!!! today something changed between dem...
n it will take dem to a beginning of love whc will take dem to d ectasy of love for sure...😳
loved it lodsss...
waiting for d next part...
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful update mehak api...
Glad that mayank dint say anything bad abt nupur infront of her dad...he didnt miss reading her red eyes...
And last part ws lovely...
Cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome story
loved the update
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was very amazing... update,,...

very very nice..
i loved it
you are fantabolous writer mulan..
i am.. a great fan of yours..
amazing.. update..
beautiful...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ajnabi mujhko itna bata dil mera kyon pareshaan hai
Dekh ke tujhko aisa lage jaise barson ki pehchaan hai
Kitni bholi hai tu kitni nadaan hai
Dil ki baaton se anjaan hai

Ajnabi mujhko itna bata dil mera kyon pareshaan hai
Dekh ke tujhko aisa lage jaise barson ki pehchaan hai
O kitni bholi hai tu kitni nadaan hai
Dil ki baaton se anjaan hai

Ajnabi mujhko itna bata dil mera kyon pareshaan hai

Kya sochta hoon main kya chaahta hoon hai mushkil tujhe vo bataana
Maine suna hai ki mushkil bada hai dabi chaahaton ko chhupaana
Hey kya sochta hoon main kya chaahta hoon hai mushkil tujhe vo bataana
O maine suna hai ki mushkil bada hai dabi chaahaton ko chhupaana
Raaz tere sabhi kholdegi abhi in labhon pe jo muskaan hai

Ajnabi mujhko itna bata dil mera kyon pareshaan hai

Kaise bataoon meri dhadkanon ko banaya hai kisne deewana
Begaane ko apna kehne lagi main bana mera apna begaana
Haan kaise bataoon meri dhadkanon ko banaya hai kisne deewana
O begaane ko apna kehne lagi main bana mera apna begaana
Pyaar ki har ghadi mushkilon ki ladi ye na samjho ye aasaan hai

Ajnabi mujhko itna bata dil mera kyon pareshaan hai
Dekh ke tujhko aisa lage jaise barson ki pehchaan hai
Kitni bholi hai tu kitni nadaan hai
Dil ki baaton se anjaan hai

Ajnabi mujhko itna bata lalala..

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