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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME <333
loved it too core. just the PM of update of FF makes me smilee
luv u mehakuu!!
you both are doing a GREAT job.
keep updating...;) already in luv wth this FF :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing updt mehak
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Posted: 13 years ago
nic update..
loved the eye lock
n how sweetly mayank appraised her...
nic part
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing part!!
loved it!
continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww...so beautiful...it was indeed very sweet of mayank 2 praise her wen she needed it d most...:)n dat SMS n his reply wer cute 2:)...continue soon... 😃 Thanx 4 pm:)
Edited by arti_17 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow. amazing. waiting for next part
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very nice part

continue soon

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Chapter # 7

"gunjan he is not that bad"

Changes occur in life when u least expect. The day Nupur thought she will hate Mayank to the most because he had made her cry ended up gaining more respect for him. He was a nice person ' indeed!, and thus Nupur was informing this to gunjan, who wasn't given any option but to listen.

"I told you from start nups!, a handsome man like him cannot be bad", gunjan sighed dramatically but Nupur felt a flutter in her heart.

Handsome man ' without doubt. The day she saw him first , this was her first observation and she even drooled with gunjan over his silent intense looks, but over the time, his rudeness and blunt remarks made her forget this quality he possessed, and today when she had a soft corner for him, she went back to his looks.

A perfect height with strong body, deep brown eyes and normal jet black hair, through which he use to run his hand at times. Although she had never seen him smile, but she was sure that those face muscles would look charming when relaxed. His clothes were never that expensive, it showed, but still decency and elegance reflected, and most of all, he always wore a watch. He was indeed handsome.

"nupuuurrr!", gunjan shouted and nupur quickly came back to her phone call, "umm, yes .", she fumbled and gunjan chuckled, "ma'am now can I kindly go and help my mom in kitchen, before she shoots me for being busy on call when we have guests coming home tonight",

"oh sorry", nupur bit her lip, "sorry doll, you go and work, we'll talk at nite, bye sweeryyy, looovvveee uuu", nupur affectionately said and thus finally an hour long call was ended and nupur got in her bed with her books, she had to submit the questions to Mayank tomorrow, and she was looking forward to it.

**

Mayank was as usual working quietly on his assignments, when samrat threw a packet of chips at him, "I don't want to answer anyone that my roommate died due to skipping dinners", he glared and smiling a bit, mayank opened the packet, "well I would really like to tell everyone that my roommate is getting fat due to eating double dinners", he giggled but samrat was still glaring, "dare u comment about my looks, I have a date tomorrow", he huffed and opened his books, while shaking his head Mayank got back to work.

A while passed in silence, when Mayank interrupted, "by the way I did have dinner today", he said munching on chips, "at Mr Bhushan's place", he said and samrat smiled meaningfully,

"oh!!, at nupur's place you mean!!", he giggled and mayank nodded, "yes", he sighed, "you know it was so amazing to see a father loving his daughter so much", he said slowly and samrat's heart was caught in a fist.

It was very less that Mayank started a conversation, talking about his feelings, but whenever he did, the pain and longing in his voice used to pain samrat.

"umm, well, I am sure of one thing", samrat said in a serious tone and mayank turned to her, "what?", he asked."

"you are going to be an amamzinggg father", he said intellectually and mayank shook his head and got back to his work.

"hey don't ignore okay!, I am serious, you are going to looove your kids", he smiled and mayank started working without any expression, "and more than kids, you are going to love the mom of your kids!!", he chuckled, but mayank still had the same expression on his face and thus samrat also got back to his work.

Samrat was sure that the only way to make him smile and enjoy was the entry of love in his life, he badly needed to see the beauty of life. Spending the childhood with a drunkard father, seeing his mother beaten up and his sisters being killed due to poverty made him a stiff person. Such circumstances could make anyone stiff, but seeing his best friend in such pain used to cut samrat inside, but from the past month, he did notice a ray of hope ' Nupur.

He always noticed that while talking about her, his stiffness used to fade, his eyes used to sparkle, no matter how much he avoided, he was soft to her, maybe he liked her, maybe loved ..

"samrat",

His trail of thoughts was interrupted by mayak's stiff call, "yes", samrat replied, "pass me that SAT book",

Samrat passed him the book, he knew that he was now maybe going to prepare a test for Nupur, and thus he noticed his expressions, and he was glad that yet again mayank's soft expressions proved him right ' she indeed was changing him, and he prayed Mayank realizes soon.

**

Nupur made sure his questions were neatly done, and checking them for the third time she was sure that there wasn't any mistake.

Mayank was expected daily at 6.00 PM, and it was about 5.00 PM when she arranged her books and started waiting for him. She was aimlessly roaming around her drawing room, where he used to teach her, scolded her servant to wipe off dust from the table for the fourth time and finally sat down quietly at 5.50.

Mayank was always punctual, she thought and relaxed but the every next moment frowned. Why was she being so impatient today, she used to dread this time and just because he praised her in front of her father, she had started liking him. How idiotic!!. She was busy scolding herself when another sound distracted her.

Rain!!", she jumped from the chair and rushed to the glass window. It had started raining heavily. Her garden view from the drawing room window looked heavenly, all the lush green plants enjoying the shower of rains and the dark clouds tuning the environment into something mystic. She smiled dreamily and closed her eyes for a while.

After a moment when she opened her eyes, her view was the main gate of the house, and what she saw made her sigh even more. Mayank quickly rushed through the garden into the house. It was so quick that she could even look at him properly, and before she could even regret missing a look of him, his voice from behind penetrated her heart,

"nupur".

Nupur turned and her opinion that he was handsome changed a bit. His wet hair and a few water droplets lingering on his face, his jacket and clothes being a slightly wet made him look VERY HANDSOME. Almost killing.

Edited by Fantasia. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res...n ya I'll unres 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Just had to quote my absolute favorite parts:

"you are going to be an amamzinggg father", he said intellectually and mayank shook his head and got back to his work.

"hey don't ignore okay!, I am serious, you are going to looove your kids", he smiled and mayank started working without any expression, "and more than kids, you are going to love the mom of your kids!!"

and
Nupur turned and her opinion that he was handsome changed a bit. His wet hair and a few water droplets lingering on his face, his jacket and clothes being a slightly wet made him look VERY HANDSOME. Almost killing. <----itni kanjoosi kyun, say HOT! 😆

im waiting for their love story too just like samrat...and ive noticed it to be true that guys who only have their mothers with them (for mayank, that's essentially the case) are a lot more sensitive...cant wait for mayank to let down his guard and show that side to nupur

must say im loving this 2 writers thing because you guys gel well together despite having different styles...it kinda gives a freshness to the story 😃
Edited by sumonetolub - 13 years ago

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