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Shimmerr

@Shimmerr

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#331

hey sweetys!!
sorry for not updating again but im at the house of my nani since a month and dont have any acces to a computer.
but if you want i will try to update on my mobile for you.
plzz tell me if you want me to update.

love,
bushra

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#332

if u r comfortable then only update dear...😊

waiting for ur update

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Shimmerr

@Shimmerr

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#333

note:

plzz tell me if you want an update guys and if you are still interested in this ff, as i am writing it for all of you.

love you all,
bushra

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: Shimmerr
note:

plzz tell me if you want an update guys and if you are still interested in this ff, as i am writing it for all of you.

love you all,
bushra

ofcourse we want an update😃

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@jssood

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#335

dear bushra

neki aur puchh puchh

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#336

update whenever u are comfortable

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: Shimmerr
updating:-)

WE WAITING 😃

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Shimmerr

@Shimmerr

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#338

sorry for the late update. im at the house of my nani and dont have any acces to a pc. so this is a mobile update. i couldnt check the grammar mistakes and there is also no coloring. im sure there are lot of mistakes, as my english is verry low and ims ure i have often used wrong words. please bare with me. so, here is the next part.

Part 16

Maan woke up early and got ready quickly to meet his lady love. He came out of his room and moved to Geets room, when he heared the main door open and close downstairs. He thought it must be one of the servants and went to Geets room. He knocked on the door a few thimes, but there was no answer. He called for her but again there wasnt any reaction. He opened the door and looked inside, but there was no one. He went to the bathroom door and knocked there, but there was also no response. He opened the door and looked to an empty room. Now he was confused. He went back to her room and looked around. He stood there numb, when he noticed, that there were none of her belongings. He was about to rush out, when he saw two papers on the night stand. He went there and took the first of them up. It was the invitation for the engagement of him and Sam. Shit. She found it out. What will he do now? He have to tell her everything. She have been mad at him the night ago and now she will surely kill him. He then picked up a piece of paper, which was folded from the middle. He opened it. He was suprized to find a letter adressed to him from his Geet. Uff, now im surely gone. Lets see what my punishment is for not telling it before. He became pale when he started to read the letter. His heart cryed when he readed each of her words, which she wrote in hurt and pain. After the last sentence, he let the letter fall out of his hands and fell on his knees on the floor. It was, as if god was punishing again in his life. She was gone. She left him too, like everyone else. She left him, but this time it was his fault. She went away because of him and his stupidicy. No, he cant let her go too. No, he wont allow it. He cant allow it. After all she is everything which was left in his life. He have to find her and apologise to her. He will beg to her and ask her to take him back. With a made up mind he stood up and rushed out to take her back to his life.
He rushed out and banged in to Sam, who was looking for him. She was about to ask him something, when he stormed past her and out of the house. Sam stood there confused. Why he left so suddenly without any word? And where is Geet? She went in Geets room to find a letter at the floor. She picked it up to see what it was.

Maan,

You have been the only person which I trusted more then my self. But today, you broke my trust for you. You broke it with the lie you told me. You told me that Sam was an old family friend of yours, but never mentioned that you both had been engaged. Why? Why you lied to me? Did you think that I would be mad at you when you would tell me about it? That i will be hurt? You hurt me more with your lie than you could ever with the truth. Im sorry, but i cant trust you any more. Im leaving. Please dont look for me, because even if you would find me, i will never come back to you. Good bye for ever.

Geet

Sam smirked when she readed the last line. It would be easier for her than she had been imagined it.

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Edited by Shimmerr - 14 years ago

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Shimmerr

@Shimmerr

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#339

sorry for the short update guys.
will try to update again.
also there is some problem with the format, as it is updated from my mobile.
hope i will be able to solve this for the next update.
love you all<3<3<3