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Posted: 13 years ago
mind blowing update eagerly waiting for next part continue soon
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mind blowing update eagerly waiting for next part continue soon
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just editing the next part.
I'll update after editing
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Part 15

Maan stopped a cab and they drove to an address which he told the driver.

G: Maan?

M: Ha Geet.

G: Where are we going?

M: We are going to the house of an old friend of mine. Our parents have been family friends since I can remember.

G: How long you lived in Delhi Maan?

M: Since my birth. After the death of my mum, I went to London. And there I met you.They smiled at each other.

After around half an hour they came to a place with many rich and modern houses. They stopped in front of a closed area where a big house was standing. The place was surrounded with high walls. They were at the backyard. Maan paid the driver and took Geet near to the forest.

Geet was confused where they were going now. They entered the forest and Maan took her near the wall. After few meters he stopped. He went to the wall and laid a few branches to the side. There was an old wooden door well hidden in the forest which leaded into the property.

No one who wouldn't know that there was a door would be able to find it. Maan opened the door and hushed her to the lawn. He closed the door after him. Now they were in the property and just few meters away from the house. Maan took her hand again and leaded her to the corner of the house, where a few big trees were directly next to the wall of the house were behind the trees another door was well hidden for the rest of the world. He took a key from a hole in a tree and opened the door and they were inside.

Geet was baffled at what Maan did have done. She was curious to know how he knew the hidden doors. Before she could ask him, he answered her unspoken questions.

M: As teenagers we used to sneak out in the nights and party. Our parents did know that the door to the house existed, but not the door on the wall to the forest. We found the door when we were children and playing at the backyard. So every time we wanted to go out and our parents hadn't allowed it us, we sneaked out from the door. Till today, no one else then us knows about this door.

He smiled at her and she couldn't do anything else as to smile back at him.

He kissed her hand and leaded her then to the living room, where a girl in a short mini dress, around the same age as Maan, was sitting. She was shocked to see them and at the same time happy to see Maan again after years.

Girl: Maan?!!? Oh my god!! Is it really you?! Where have you been?? Everybody was thinking that but before she could speak further, her eyes fell on Geet, who was standing behind Maan, still holding his hand. Who is she Maan??

Maan freed Geets hand and went toward the girl and hugged her tight. She hugged him back with the same intense.I missed you Sam!! I missed you too Maan.

Geet couldn't believe what she saw in front of her eyes. Maan was hugging another girl and that too in front of her eyes??!! Maan broke the hug and looked back to Geet, who was standing there motionless. He indicates her to come. Sam, this is Geet, the love of my life. He looked back at Geet, who was now standing next to him. He laid his arm around her waist and pressed her softly to his side in a semi hug. Geet, this is Sameera Kapoor, my best friend and a known lawyer in Delhi. Our parents were best friends and we grew up together. Then he looked back to Sam and spoke further. Sam, if you are ok with it, can we both stay here for a while?

S: What is that for a question Maan? Of course you can stay here. There is not even a need to ask for it.

M: Thanks Sam. But there is a problem. No one knows that we are here and please let us keep it so. Don't even tell the guards that we are here.

S: But they saw you Maan cut her off, not letting her finish her sentence.

M: We came from the forest door. They don't know that we are here.

S: Don't worry. They won't get to know about it either. Now you both go and freshen up. You know where the guest rooms are. After an hour dinner will be served.

Maan nodded and went with Geet up the stairs to the west wing of the house. After they reached one of the guest rooms, they went inside and sat down to talk.

G: You never mentioned that your friend is female Maan.

Maan was buff at this statement.

M: I haven't?

G: Nooo. Geet spoke slowly and clear. You haven't mentioned it. Were you even planning to tell me about it? She asked now, getting angrier with each passing second.

M: Eeeh, we both grew up together as I told you. We were very good friends. He looked at her to analyze the mood in which she is now. But it looks like she is still not convinced.

M: We are like siblings, you know. Our parents were best friends.

G: Achha ji.

M: Hmm' Woo, we went to same collage and so. He looked one more time at her, but turned his head quickly back when he saw the fire and anger in her eyes.

M: We are just friends Geet. There is nothing between us. Really, I swear and he holds the skin on his throat to show her there is nothing between them.

When he saw that it didn't really work, he stood quickly up with the words we should better get ready and left the room in the speed of a marathon runner.

Geets mouth formed an "o" when she saw that he run away from the situation. She promised herself that she wouldn't talk with him, until he apologized to her. She went to the bathroom and got ready.

After around 30 minutes she walked into the living room where Maan and the Sameera girl were sitting and waiting for her to start the dinner. They were talking and laughing and were closer than Geet liked it. Maan shut up the moment he saw Geet in the doorway. Sam looked at him confused, why he shut up so suddenly. Maan just took the water glass and took a sip of it. Dry throat, he whispered to cover it up.

The dinner went very silent, as Geet wouldn't talk to Maan, as she was still mad at him, Maan wouldn't talk as he was tooo afraid to say something wrong and preferred to be silent and Sam asking questions to Maan and Geet and not getting really answers and stopping to try to make any conversations.

After the dinner everyone bid good night and went to their rooms.

The next morning Geet woke up early and started to tidy up the room and making the bed. When she opened the cupboard to take out a fresh towel, she saw something stuck between the two drawers inside the cupboard. She opened the drawer a bit to take it out. It was a card, which looked like an invitation. She took the card to lay it back to the drawer, when she saw what was written on it:

Engagement Ceremony

of

Maan & Sameera


Precap: Geet running away
Part 14 Page 45 Previous - Next Part 16 Page 53

So dear friends, that was part 15.
Sorry for not updating since soo long, but was bussy with my private live.
I hope you liked the updates.
Pls hit the like tab and comment,
as it motivates me to type further.
Love you all,

Bushra
Edited by Shimmerr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, brilliant parts
loved them
what a twist engagement card and the precap is shocking
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, brilliant parts
loved them
what a twist engagement card and the precap is shocking
continue soon


thank you dear😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!!!! Fab update!!!! Loved the twist... am looking forward to the next part!!!
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME parts!
but precap is scaring me!
argh why can't Maan just tell the truth instead of running from the situation!
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME updates
but precap is scaring me!
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank-you-desi-glitters-9 THANX FOR PM AND WONDERFUL UPDATE

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