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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meena..

i read ur ff in onee go

awesome ff
precap is shocking
omg what a twist
continue
do pm mee after ur updating



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

awesome parts..


continue soon...

thnx for PM>..



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: parikashyap

hey dear awsmmm ff⭐️
lvd it🤗
add me in ur pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: siyana

Awesome ff
loved all parts
con soon dear



thx dear

updating now😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

if u r comfortable then only update dear...😊

waiting for ur update


im back dear and updating
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mollycoddle



ofcourse we want an update😃



updating again dear!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jssood

dear bushra

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ab kuch nahi puchongi aur update karongi😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

update whenever u are comfortable



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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 17

Geet was sitting in a cab and traveling to the house of her dadis uncels grandchild. When the Handas have been living in India years ago, they have been good friends and they called each other sometimes during diwali and other days. But they havent seen each other since over 25 years now. Geet got the adress from them from dadi the day when she was leaving. She told her to go to them and seek help, if there was any kind of problem. The Khannas are a well edducated family. Mr. and Mrs. Khanna have been teachers and own now a small restaurant under their appartment. The children are all grown up and the eldest daughter was now married and the mother of a baby girl. The younger girl is going to Delhi University and compleeting her studys.

When Geet reached there she was very nervous. What if they dont want to help her or they tell her brothers that she is there? But, she had no other choice. She had to go there now. So she payed the driver and went to the appartment. She was now standing on the door and took a last deep breath before knocking on the door. After a few seconds a woman in her fifties opened the door.

W: hello? How can i help you?

G: hello aunty, im Geet.

Mrs. K.: Geet??

G: woh, from London. Handas daughter

Mrs. K: Geet, my dear, you here? Where are the others? They havent even told me that you all are coming.

G: aunty, the others arent here. They are in London. Woh, i am shifting to Delhi and dadi told me i should visit you before i do anything and seek your help. So i came here.

Mrs. K: its ok my dear. Come, get inside.

And she leaded Geet inside the house, where she was greated by a nice family, which treated her like their own daughter from the first second she went inside.

But, mr and Mrs Khanna have been a bit confused as what a girl does on her own in such a big city without her family or a husband. They didnt say anything to Geet, but decided to talk to the Handas the next day, as they were not sure if they knew that their daughter was here in Delhi. They called it a day and went to bed after dinner.

Maan on the other side was going mad. Where could she be? Geet doesnt know the city and there is no place where she could have gone. He searched everywhere where he thought that Geet could be, but no chance. She was nowhere. He was about to go back to Sams house as it was quite late, when he remembered something. Geet told him once that they had some relatives in Delhi and Geet must sure be there. But how will he find them? He doesnt even know how to get the name, then how would he find an adress?

He was walking back, when he saw a phone box on the corner of the street. There were names of cities all over the world written on the box. But what made him stop was not the phone box there, but the word which was written there. London. This was the solution to all his problems. He coud call dadi and ask her the name and adress of those relatives. Yes, he will ask dadi.


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Posted: 13 years ago

superb but so small update after a long time n sad also that nw they are seprated i hope ki maan jald hi geet ko dundh le pls n happy also ki first to comment par fir jaldi next update karna aur maan aur geet ko bhi jaldi mila dena waise hw r u?

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago

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