How you want ahem's cut scene to happen?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay guys how do you think tomorrow's scene of ahem's cut gonna happen. Okay I want this:

ahem is shaving in the washroom and when he reaches the spot of kiss he stops suddenly and remembers the accidental kiss. Now here I want a cute little smile from him to assure he liked it😆
Then he starts shaving again and accidently cuts the spot and blood starts flowing from it. He immediately cleans his face and comes out with the towel on his wound. Here I want him to come out in a vest 😳😆
Gopi sees his cheek and asks him what happened and ahem tells her. Gopi takes the towel from his hand and starts cleaning his cheek. Obviously here I want a cute eyelock as well😳😆
Ahem says not to worry as its only a small cut but Gopi gets worried due to blood not stopping. Then gopi goes to kitchen to ask kokila about the antiseptic cream. Kokila gives it to her from her room and then goes with gopi to see ahem. Koki asks gopi to apply the cream on ahem's cheek. Gopi immediately cleans his wound and then applies the ointment and during this I want lala track😆 and ahem lost in gopi😳 and koki observing ahem😆

Keep adding what you want to see in the scene or how you want it to happen😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Till the cut I am with you so I have just copied that and made a few changes

ahem is shaving in the washroom and when he reaches the spot of kiss he stops suddenly and remembers the accidental kiss. Now here I want a cute little smile from him to assure he liked it .. Then he remembers her face when he glanced at her before stepping out of the mandir.. Head lowered... shivering from head to toe... The smile on his face weakens

Then he starts shaving again and accidently cuts the spot and blood starts flowing from it. He immediately cleans his face and comes out with the towel on his wound. He opens the door a little...

Gopi who is in the room near her cupboard(She came when she was sure he is in the bathroom and wanted to leave the moment she notices he is about to come out) hears the door open and bolts out of the room... She has just stepped out when...

Ahem slightly moans in pain causing Gopi to stop and peek at him through the ajar door... She sees all the blood and runs down to tell Kokila.

Though not very romantic ... This is what I think will happen

Aish

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Posted: 13 years ago
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he is shaving when he arive on the spot of kiss he remember the kiss and smile he lost in her kiss he did not taking attention that he is shaving then he cut he clean his face and come out and see gopi there she also see him she was about to leave she saw blood she come near to see with tears and say i will bring anticeptic she go to kokila she return with the anticeptic to put while she apply there eyes met koki will be kabab main hadi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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My take also has a similar opening with the shave in the washroom. So copy pasted the first few lines..

ahem is shaving in the washroom and when he reaches the spot of kiss he stops suddenly and remembers the accidental kiss. He is flustered and accidentally cuts the spot and blood starts flowing from it. He immediately cleans his face but makes a noise as the cut burns when he washes with water. He accidentally drops the mug/vessel.

Gopi's in the room, trying to get her stuff before he comes out and is startled by the noise. She is pulled on both sides. She wants to see if Ahem is ok but she wants to avoid seeing him.

Ahem comes out hurriedly with his hand on the cheek muttering about the razor and Gopi notices the blood. Both have a eyelock. Before he can say anything, Gopi says, "Khoon".. Her eyes become round with concern and she rushes to get the cream from Kokila
Ahem is surprised. He looks like he does not know whether he should be pleased with her concern or mad that she left in a hurry.
Gopi goes to Kokila, asks for the cream. Kokila gets the cream from her room and both walk towards Gopi's room. Gopi tells Koki to give him the cream. Kokila looks at her with suspicion but goes ahead while Gopi watches from behind. Gopi sighs when the cream is applied and leaves when she feels Ahem looking up.

Ahem looks up just to see her leaving.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok my take... i am not writing a scene...

but what i think is after the cut Ahem might ask her to go and get antiseptic for the cut... because going by gopi's pronunciation looks like she is saying the word for the first time as if Ahemji has told her to get it... this is what i feel...

can't really think of the scene...😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahem is shaving in the washroom and when he reaches the spot of kiss he stops suddenly and remembers the accidental kiss. Now here I want a cute little smile from him to assure he liked it😆 and a flashback as well
Then he starts shaving again and accidently cuts the spot and blood starts flowing from it. He immediately cleans his face. Still the blood is flowing and he comes out with it. But he's in his kurta pyjama.

Gopi who had come to the room to take some her stuff in the wardrobe and sees him in pain and blood and is struck with horror! (according to maddy her expressions are a bit exaggerated😆 ). Ahem is looking for an antiseptic in the dresser. He sees her and both have an eye lock, and she's looking down most of the time quiet scared. She asks him in a nervous tone "Aapko kuchh chaahiye"

Ahem says "antiseptic nahin mil raha hai..."

hearing so she rushes down like a ninja and ahem keeps on staring and admiring her for her worry for him.😊

Gopi brings Koki with her and makes some excuseso Koki finally applies the antiseptic on Ahem while Ahem gets disappointed at this😔 And again the intermittent staring starts😆

this is how i wanna see it.

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