my take on the precap(optimistic approach)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Since i was very sad after seeing the precap and was constantly thinking about it this imagination came to my mind.

Kriya is very angry😡 with rey after breaking up. In this grumpy mood she doesn't rehearse properly and then goes to her home. When she thought about the situation she was more angry at herself how cud she let such a thing allow her to come at such a decision. She was devastated thinking about the break up. Over the days rey had become a habit for her(like d3 and kriyansh is for us). She was scared to think about how will she manage for other days. She was thinking about all the past moments and how she took care of her everytime. She then realised how important rey was for her. She thought of calling and saying sorry (but since she is kriya) she decided against it and started justifying her action.then she blabbered to herself about saying sorry or not.😭

On the other hand rey was devastated💔, completely broken. He was constantly thinking how cud she do this. She felt for him and she was letting it go easily. He was angry 😡how cud she misunderstand him so much. The day b4 she was talking about clearing misunderstandings and today she is again doing the same thing. He thought of trying to go to her and sort out everything as he cudn't let her go easily. Though his male ego was telling him not to do so and ignore her so she cud realize his worth but his heart was constantly pushing him to for going and talking to her and encouraging him to not let her go so easily. He too was in a dilemma😕. But decides to just go and see her how was she feeling and then decide further.

He climbs to her window with a stern mind that he wudn't slip easily in her cuteness but when he climbs he sees his baatcutter talking to herself and universeji about what she did was wrong and then cursing herself cutely for letting him go. She was arguing with herself whether to go and talk to him or not.

Seeing this his anger melts and then he decides he will make it up to her. He then goes inside and stands there and when she turns she bumps into him and falls but rey catches her securely. Kriya is very happy seeing him there. She is abt to say sorry but then starts arguing.

Kriya: apki yahan aane ki himmat kaise huyi. Aap bhul gaye kya ki ab main aur aap hum nhi rhe. Main nhi bhuli hoon. Just get this straight. It was a mistake ki aap aur main saath aa gaye. aap aur main kabhi saath nhi ho skte. Aap hamesha dazzler rhoge and main hamesha weakling. And that u proved today.

Rey was shocked to hear it but knew it wasn't his baatcutter speaking but her ego.

Rey: i know ki tumne kaha tha ki hum baat nhi karenge. But tumne ye sab rey se kaha tha. Rey aur kriya ka breakup huya hai. But tumne ye sab chabilal se nhi kaha tha. Chabilal abhi bhi ramaira ke liye vaisa hi feel krta hai and woh ye bhi jaanta hai ki ramaira also feels the same way. And chahe woh isse jitna chupana chahe woh yeh kabhi chupa nhi skti.

Kriya:(happy but doesn't shows it and plays along😳ramaira aap ke liye kuch feel nhi krti. Jo krti thi woh khatm ho gaya.

Rey:ramaira mere liye kuch feel nhi krti but chabilal is a very special friend of her. Chabilal toh bas ramaira se milne aaya tha as he was missing her badly. Woh ramaira ko itna easily nhi jaane de skta.

Kriya is silent. Rey comes to her.kriya looks at him doesn't know what to say. Keeps his hand on shoulder.

Rey: Baatcutter ye hum donon jaante hain ki hum donon ke beech hai woh bahut special hai. Aaj tak maine aisa kisi ke liye feel nhi kiya. Tum mano ya na mano tum bhi mere liye hi vaisa feel krti ho.

Kriya: (stuttering) aisa kuch nhi hai. Aap hamesha dazzler rhoge.

Rey(angrily): 😡to hell with dazzler and weekling. Yeh sab uske bare mein nhi hai. Ye sirf mere aur tumhare bare mein hai. I don't give a damn about this toh fir tum isse itna importance kyun deti ho. And what do u mean by aisa kuch nhi. Ye tum bhi jaanti ho ki tum mere liye kya and kyun feel krti ho. Agar tum kuch feel nhi krti toh kyun tumne shivam ki party mein mera mood thik krne ke liye woh sab kiya. Kyun tum tensed thi mere bare mein kal. Pehle ka chodo uss samay toh hum saath the. Ab jab hum "hum"nhi rhe then kyun tum apne aap se aur apne universeji mere bare mein baat kr rhi thi. Tum itna tensed kyun thi. Kyun tum apne aap se lad rhi thi ki jo tumne kiya woh sahi tha ya nhi.

And baat cutter get this straight tum hum donon ko alag kr skti ho. kriya rey ke liye feel nhi krti but ramaira chabbilal ke liye krti hai and that can never stop boz ye tum bhi jaanti ho aur main bhi ki ramaira aur chabbilal hamari zindagi ka kitna bada hissa hai.

Kriya doesn't know what to say. Becoz in her heart she knows that she cannot separate from rey. It hurts her a lot.

Rey:(sees her dilemmatic face) kriya kya itni chhoti si baat (dazzler and weakling) hamare itne special relation ko tod degi. Kya hamara relation itna week hai. Kya hamari dosti itni weak hai. Remember tumne hi kaha tha ki hum kabhi bhi misunderstanding ko beech mein nhi aane denge. Par kya hum itni chhoti si baat ke liye alag ho jayenge. Agar aisa hai then i am very hurt. I thought hum kuch na ho par hame itne acche dost toh hain ki hum apni misunderstanding sort kar le. But i guess i was wrong.(turns to leave)

Kriya has tears in her eyes😡. She realises how stupidly she behaved. She was very angry at herself. She goes and stops him. Turns him around and hugs him tightly.

kriya: i am sorry. Main iss duniya ki sabse badi idiot hun. Main jhalli hum, bewakuf hun. Pata nhi maine gusse mein aake kya keh diya. Main aisa kuch nhi krna chahti thi but main gussa thi aur woh main aap pe nikal diya. (and then she keeps on cursing herself)

rey(smiles at her cuteness. 😊Lifts her chin up. Puts a finger on her lips): chup bilkul chup. Tum kaun hoti ho meri itni special friend ke bare mein ye sab khne wali.

Kriya: ramaira ya kriya.

Rey: kya fark padta hai. Tum donon hi form mein mere liye utni hi special ho. Plz sorry mat kaho. Hum relation mein hai tumhara pura kaq bnta hai mujhse gussa hone ka and remember tum jitni baar angry hogi main utni baar aaunga tumhe manane. But plz kbhi alag hone ki baat mat sochna. Boz i can bear everything but main tumse dur nhi reh skta. Ek baar huya tha par maine tumse zyada apne aap ko hurt kiya tha. I can never stay away frm u😭. U know y.

Kriya: kyunki main aapki special friend hun.

Rey: no kyunki (pauses brings her more closer then whispers in her ears) I LOVE YOU.👏

Kriya is shell shocked. Doesn't understand what to say.

Rey: kya hua baatcutter ke paas jawab nhi hai(kriya blushe😳s)

Kriya: u know what. (Looks up) i love some1 else.

Rey is shocked:what.😕

Kriya: i love chabbilal😉. He is the best. Main usse sabse zyada pyar krti hun.

Rey: but woh toh main hun. Means tum mujhse pyar krti ho.😊

Kriya: nhi main aapse pyar nhi krti.😳

Rey: matlab tum chabbilal se pyar nhi kriya.

Kriya: nhi mera matlab haan. Mera matlab nhi😆(stumbles as rey was coming near her)

Rey:decide krlo(aaj toh main tumse bulva ke rhunga)

Kriya:mera matlab hain ki main chabilal se krti hun par aap se nhi.

Rey: but i am chabbilal.😈

Kriya:haan , matlab nhi. Matlab (frustrated) i love u reyaansh(oops what did i do)

Rey: i know u do. Tum na kaho ya haan par main janta hun that u only love me(then kisses on her cheeks😲) we r meant to be together.

Kriya hugs him tightly. Rey also embraces her.😊

Well main janti hun thoda over the top ho gaya. Jaisa socha tha vaisa shape nhi huya. But since chances of precap turning out to be a dream was very less and since i cudn't see them separated thats y this came to my mind. Plz give ur valuable comments.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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aah...tumne toh dil halka kar diya..hope ki aisa hi kuch ho...😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was awesome ...hope sooo ye sach ho jaye aur hame kriyansh confession dekhne ko mil jaye
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It was very nice.I hope ki aisa hi ho
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it's perfect...hope the same happens..😊.i was thinking on the same lines of rey climbing upto kriya's room through window n clearing the misunderstandings...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its awesome n sweeet...mai isse padhte padhte kriyaansh land mai chali gai...its totally amazing...i wish aisa ho...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnk u so much for ur appreciation
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i did not get to see precap
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was super swesome.. i just loved it.. hope aisa kuch sachchi mein ho jao d3 mein...

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