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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey every1 as every balhian is anxious for the upcoming bc track i too thought of giving my take for it
hope u like it 😳
(in room)
r = hey priya u know it's the last sunday of the month and i have a regular checkup so care to join??
p = no u go ahead i don't need any such checkup etc. i am fit and fine
r = u and fit (laughes )u u are jst so skinny see u look like an undernourished person and even i can wrap my single arm around ur waist
p = ☺️ i mean wo (regaining composure ) achha so do u think that u urself very are very fit and fine na
r = yes of course as my doc. never complained abt. anything!
p = oh yeah why would he care as u urself become a doc. and pop every possible pills u can get
r = ooh😡 right now i'm setting an appointment and then lets see who is more fitter what say???
p = o.k.
(raya in clinic )
they were through the whole checkup
raya were seated and were talking casually
doc. = i have been through ur reports mr .kapoor ur reports are all fine and i'm very happy to know abt ur new diet plan finally u took it seriously
r = oh no no doc. all these credit goes to priya
doc. a bit serious = oh yes mrs. kapoor i think that there is some problem with ur reports
r = doc. what is it is she fine??
doc . = i'm not sure but the tests done will come in the evening
both take a leave with ram a bit serious
r = p do u have any problems and if yes why didn't u tell me???
p = ohh it's nothing mr.kapoor it must be a minor thing and it's the usual habit of doc. to say like this leave it and now go and join vik for today's golf game that u promised
r still a bit unsure but left for the game whereas p went to finish her coaching's pending work
r could jst not concentrate at the game and called it off giving vik an excuse and went straight to the doc.
r = doc. is there anythng serious
doc = hm mr.kapoor i am sorry to say but i think priya has got certain symptoms of breast cancer
r = what!!! doc. u must be kidding rite??/
doc. i hope so ram bt it would be confimed by the reports in the evening
r - thnx doc.
ram send the driver back saying he had to go sumwhere out , ram was all distressed and drove vaguely ang haulted near an isolated beach he slammed his car's door and went out and sat on a rock
he couldn't belive what all happened today the day started bright with priya and her bt ...
he couldn't belive why destiny played another joke for him he was in a daze , he finally got up
yes he needed to be with priya today and god cannot take someone who had so easily crept into his guarded heart and made a special place
(k.m.)
ram rushed through the stairs and went and called out for priya but found her nowhere and got to know she was in her coaching class and would be returning shortily
ram paced up and down in anxiety and when heard the door click open(yup he closes it when alone😆) he saw p entering through and he rushed to her and embraced her in a tight hug as if trying to protect her from all teh evils himself
r = priya where were u why did u leave me alone i was so scared are u alright
p = at that time wanted to laugh and make a witty comment bt seeing his situation refrained
she pacified him and assured she'll not go anywhere leaving him behind ram with a tear filled eyes looked a bit calmed while p settled him for a sleep while ram head was propelled on priya's lap
at evening bansi kaka came in their room with package which was for p she took and dismissed him
p got up from bed and took out a paper which had the same doc.s sign she read the content and then slumped on the bed with shivering hands ram until now woke up and seeing p like this immediately got alert and took it from her hands and
he jumped off the bed and now with fersh new tears of happiness he hugged p once more
p was just in daze after readind abt her cancer test and a shiver ran through her on jst thinking abt loosing her family and foremost ram!!!
she shrugged the thoughts and sid
p = arre ram what did u think me itte jaldi chali jaongi naa never rite now i have to teach u many steps of life or else india pharmaceuticals will get a setback
both r and p laughed their heads off and went out for their routine walk together hand in hand
😳😉
ii hope bc scare is for a day or two only can't see raya in distress😭


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Posted: 14 years ago
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totally loved it... fab update dear.. but i want RaYa to knw about this at one go together... no separately... Ram trying to hide from Priya n she also vise versa... n i want Ram to completely break down infront of may be Vik n admit that he cannot live with her n that he loves her do continue😛
Edited by Anamika163 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sammy
beautifully written!! BC scare is not going anywhere dear.. atleast 3 weeks😭
I love RAm's pov in your writin!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ fosla hey don't say that plzzz.
not fair only abt a week of raya's happiness and again 3 week rona dhona!1
can't take it😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ di i couldn't write that together as it would require more emotion
and after writing i would have been in tears jst imagining their expression which rashi beautifully portray 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sammy_108

@ fosla hey don't say that plzzz.

not fair only abt a week of raya's happiness and again 3 week rona dhona!1
can't take it😡

Neither ccan I 😭😭 but I remember reading something along the lines reg the time frame... Hence getting u up and ready for that😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sammy - well written... Lets hope we are all wrong and this track doesnt really last 3 weeks though it would be great to see Ram and Priya interact with each other with a fear of separation...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice.let us hope the track is short & we get a lot of raya momments.loved your take
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 take yar ,u are a briliant writer ,but ekta mata will makle it atleast 3-4 weeks.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update... but its true yaar... 2-3 week toh taay hai hamara rona...:(

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