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Posted: 13 years ago
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Now thats an awesome one again
loved it
Tamy is so cute

Continue soon
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Loved it dear continue soon.
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simply wow ,waiting for next ...
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superb start dear

is tamy maan n geet's child

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sweet start pls cont soon
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Thank u so much friends for ur support,, and for those lovely and encouraging comments and likes,, its really motivated me...




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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice strting.. luv d bnding btwn d kid n Geet... gos n u knw wat hpnd wd maaneet..


which song u used at d fst?

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Originally posted by: princess_mimi

nice strting.. luv d bnding btwn d kid n Geet... gos n u knw wat hpnd wd maaneet..


which song u used at d fst?


shreya its not a song,, its my poem... 😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THIS WAS AMAZING
LOVED THE MEETING BETWEEN ALL THREE
WHAT IS THE MYSTERY
HOPE TAMMANNA CALLS HIM
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Naina Barse

Part 2

Maan: geet,, I won't let u slip away so easily,, may be u r married but I want to attempt one chance to win u back'. i can't be wrong to judge u,,, u were lying me but why? U were jealous to see sasha so close to me, but why,, if u are married u shouldn't be jealous'. So many years I have lost,,, I yearn u' I missed u,, u didn't even inform me before ur departure from here,, where were u, I don't know, and when I found u are keeping urself in a shell,, didn't wanted to open up' but I'll find everything geet'..

Sasha: chale maan? sasha asked little afraid' Maan nodded and headed towards his car'..

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The day came and I was standing far

Never cross the river of tears

But just a glimpse of ur sorrow

Made me flinch,, only to borrow!!

The unsaid words

Moisten eyes that haunted me

Forever and ever in my life!!

Wanted to hug u composed my self

Never in my life felt so aloof,,

No I m wrong,

My life was abandon without you..

I m standing the way u were

Shattered in my world of fear,,

Now u came like sunshine

But still felt the hollow dark inside'..

(poem by me)

Maan sat on his car, while driver took the turn to his office,,, he was engrossed in his thought that he forgot about all time.. the meeting with geet and her face came in mind of maan,, he closed his eyes'

So many years,, no no,, its 6 years 7moths 14 days we have been apart only because of my one mistake' I didn't recognize our love,, today when I saw I just found my lost treasure' but I can't see the same geet anymore,,, and that sweet angel, is she ur daughter geet? Yeah have to be, she so looks like u,, I wonder her 1st collide is just reminded about u,, her facial expression'.. a smile formed on his lips, he remember tammy and her bumping,, she is so small,, I was sipping cold coffee and heading towards the exit when someone bumped, but it was so sudden then my shirt just got wet as coffee spilled all over,,, I think she was running that's why a speedy tug felt my knees,, I wanted to burst on that person who was the reason of my stained shirt but when I saw her frightened eyes,, which was closed due to fear just mesmerized me,, reminded me about HER'. tammy was holding a cute teddy, just like her, all in pink' and then she open her one eye, and looked at me with puppy face'. I couldn't stop my smile,, and then see my smile she also smile' and then she stutter S-o-sor-sorry'. At 1st I thought she actually stammered in all,, I bend down my knees and caresses her face unknowingly'.

Maan: it's ok came out form my mouth'. But u have to careful na? if something has happen to u then? She frowned

Tammy: nothing is gonna happen to me till my mom is with me' I looked at her in amazed,, i don't know the mother child bonding but yeah I love my dadi of course,, but in this age she talks like so mature' she believes her mother so much'. And then a voice came and I froze on my track,, its HER'. a lady clad in white and blue saree bend down infront of tammy, I instantly stood up' I saw her concern voice,, she has her back on me, I couldn't saw her face, but I don't need it also, her voice, her aroma is enough for me'. And then she faced my shirt, but she didn't saw my face, I saw her panic state that's remind me about our 1st meeting'. After sometime I thought to call by her name and she saw my face'. We lost in our past for some time, maybe I m only, maybe she forgot about us,,,

But then her eyes that was holding so many emotion what was that,, but sadly I can't read, not now not 6 yrs back'sometime I thought did I deserves her love then?

His mind took him in the past where geet 1st enter the collage,, he was senior of her,, and his gang was ragging everyone, when their eyes met geet.. she was nervous and then his gang decided to tease her,, as among all the college student maan was the most handsome hunk' he took his collar up and assured them he will entertain them'. He smirk at her and then goes close to her' geet clutches her book to her chest when someone just bumped her, it was maan,, she was going to fall due to sudden jerk but he hold her waist to prevent her fall'she instantly closed her eyes,, her pink cheeks and rosy trembling lips,, maan just blown away just to see her,, he stares at her like that,, soon the college broke their trance as geet heard some noise and slowly opens her eyes and saw she didn't touch the ground but hanging in maan's arm' she separated from him instantly,, and started knotting her dupatta,, her frightful eyes looked at maan with hope to rescue from this crowd and maan did so,, his one shout was enough the crowd to disappear'. He wanted to know her better but geet being being just walked away,, doesn't gave a chance to anyone'.

Soon with maan's effort they became friends,, maan was a flirt, he can charmed any girl except geet, and he accepted his defeat,, he was attracted to her,, her smile, her innocence, but that was only attraction not love (he think so buddhu)'. They became good friends, best buddy,, maan can share his whole problematic life with her and geet only listen to him,, admiring his cute antiques,, she was developing new feeling for him, but maan always thought she loves him as a friend,, soon their proximity spreads the college but in a wrong way,, everybody started gossiping about their relationship, some accuse geet, with taunt that she is head over heel in love with maan but maan didn't recognize that for him they are only friends, she takes him as a friend (he thought), some thought they might be in live in relationship though they never share the same roof,, he went to her place only to solve her study problem as a best frnd and senior'. Those rumor spreads like fire and soon it reaches maan and his gang,, his gang always supported their friendship,, they have 4 ppl in the gang,, sumit roshni, annie rohan,,, sumit was good frnd with geet so he understood geet's plight,, he wanted to help her but geet always denied that she have feeling for him'.

It was a party where some of the student started teasing geet with maan,, some girl who envies her started accusing her,, she was in tears when maan saw this' and he came their holding her hand and declaring yes they are a couple,, they are in love,, geet looked at him with shocking eyes and man smiled at her,, all the hall went numb and they his gang walked on there and clapped and then followed by huge appreciation of accepting it in front of everyone'. From that day maaneet became talk of the college,,, maan realize geet too like him'. they started hanging together more,, but still there was a distance,,, maan thought she didn't like closeness least he knew she was afraid of her feeling, her hold on herself'

It was almost 6 month of their relation.. she was comfortable with maan's proximity then'. One day she was going to her class when someone pulled her in a dark,, she wanted to scream when he pressed his palm on her mouth,, and lit a lighter,, she calmed down to see the most desirable eyes in the world'. He let go of her mouth'.

Geet: maan what happen? Maan switches on the light which gave a little brightness'. Ye sab kya hain maan? he din't said anything but led her to a table' that has cake on it,, he lit up the small candle and came near her earlobe'

Maan: happy birthday geet' she looked at him surprised,, she never though he would remember that,,, and in the emotional turmoil she hugged him tight,, maan hold her with intensity' when his finger touched her expose back it gave shiver down their spine' he started making patterns to her back and gave a sensual kiss on crook of her neck,, she clutches him more arching her back'. her tummy crunched like thousand of butterflies were dancing in them' a moan escaped from her mouth'

Maan'''

Maan whispered in her ear: how could u think I can forget this day,, he kissed the earlobe,, geet shudder,, he held her waist and make her face the cake and he himself hold her from the back' Now cut the cake'. She blew the candle and then cut the cake,, before she can put the piece in his mouth he take that piece and fed her, smudging her lips with chocolate,, she didn't knew what he have done but can saw a small smirk on his face' he was having great difficulty to hold himself when he saw her cute face, no matter how he think somewhere he felt the attraction is much stronger' he felt taking her in his arms and do whatever desire he have in his heart'. His desire-full eyes were sending chill down her spine.. geet took a piece and approach him but he denied it' he was looking at her intently and she saw his eyes on her lips only'. She shied and blush crept on her cheeks'.

Maan: today I want a gift from u geet,,, she looked at him confused and then notice his eyes were on her lips,, I want KISS u'. her face become tomato red'. She just turn to hide her red face but maan took it in a wrong way,,, he thought she doesn't wanted it, so he was leaving when geet held his hand, but he didn't turn' it's ok if u doesn't like it, I can wait,, but to his astonishment she hugged his back,, and placed a soft kiss there,, he suddenly spin and cupped her face, and saw the shyness in her eyes, he understood she was just shy,, he leaned on her ad kissed her forehead.. geet closed her eyes and then he followed her both eyes, and then planted wet kisses on her cheeks,, she was gulping hard, then felt his lips on her'. at 1st it was like a peak and he sucks the lower lips smoothly,, taking all the rest chocolate in his mouth,, tasting the unforgettable sweetness of her juicy lips'. She hold his shoulder for support and he pulls her more close holding her slender waist,,, it was her 1st kiss she didn't responded rather she was nervous but he wait for her patiently,, his passion was taking the charge,, his hot mouth wanted to explode more,,, but she was opening her mouth and then his hand goes under her kurti.. geet gasp at the contact and taking the opportunity he enters her mouth'. She was lost in his passion and started responding him'. her hand goes to neck and started massaging their giving him more pleasure,, his body was rubbing her and his hand was making pattern on her smooth flesh, his cold hand trun hot with the contact of her warmness,, he was crashing her body in him,, and his lips continue its sweet assault on her,,, they both parted due to need of air, but maan doesn't wanted to leave from her, he has lost his all senses, his passion desire has taken the charge long back,, he came to her neck giving her sensual wet kisses making her knees weak' he pinned her to a nearby wall and started kissing her chest aggressively'. He has thrown her dupatta and his hand started opening her zip of the kurti,,geet knew they have to stop before they lost everything to the insanity'. She tried to call maan but only whisper came out as maan was making her weak with his aspiration ' when he was enough close to open her zip her eyes shot open,, she shouted his name but he was nowhere to listen'. He was biting her neck in pleasure.. and then geet pushed him with all her strength' he looked ta her with anger visible eyes' her eyes were moisten and that made him more furious, he thought she is denying him as she doesn't trust him'. her fear was giving negative thought to his mind' he never thought as a girl this is something something special to her,, she wanted to give herself with all right on her and him but alas! He didn't understand'.

Maan: u don't trust me,

Geet: maan'

Maan: u don't trust me geet,,,

Geet: its not like that,, but he was leaving the room'. MAANNN,, she shouted but he was gone'.

(flashback will cont in the next part also)

Maan jerks from his thought'. Then realize he is in front of his office' he came out from the car and straightly goes to his cabin' everyone is used to see his angry self but today something is different,, he didn't even gave a look to anyone, but his face was calm'. But when he enter his cabin all their hopes of seeing him relax goes into vein,, as he shouted

Maan: Aadi I said arrange the meeting now'.

Adi: but sir the photographer just came from London today,,

Maan: we are paying him double only cause of his work,, if he can't come right now fire him'. aadi was nervous to tell him it's a girl not a guy as he hates women'.

Adi: si-sir-sirr

Maan: WHAT ADI,,, if u want to waste ur time in stammering, go ahead I can give u the time for permanently,, then u can sit in ur house and stammer as long as u want'

Adi: s-soo-sorr-sorryyy sir'..

Maan: what kind of ppl I have to face to bring up this publication house'. Just called him now,, give him 2 hr to reach here..

Adi: yes sir'

Aadi made a call to the photographer and he seems to more sweating then he was in front of maan,, but then he convince the photographer to come for a talk with the owner'.

Maan has publication house name KOHINOOR'. He was not interested in this company but his father's sudden departure made him to take the control in his hand'. this is her grandmother and his father's dream though he wanted to build his own IT company but fate has some other plan for him,, after geet departure and his dad's funeral he has become isolated' he works day and night to establish the company not only in india but also worldwide' now KOHINOOR is international publication house that has various branches all over world'. Starting from novel to b town magazine or page 3 party all have to published in this publication house as it's the most popular company in india'.

The photographer enter the office with full attitude,, wearing a pair of jeans and white t-shirt full sleeve,,, aai greeted her..

Aadi: welcome mam'. She nodded.. how is ur trip Geet mam'.

Geet: it was good but why u r calling me mam,, call me geet only' and why the hell the owner wanted to meet me at this hour,, he knew I have just landed her few hr back'

Adi: I m extremely sorry mam, umm geet.. wo sir wanted to meet u personaly as this project is really big,, it's a launch of a new magazine that he is launching personally' and he wanted u to know the whole concept, and that will help u with ur work'.

Geet: then why u are wasting ur time,, let me know ur boss's cabin..

Adi led her to maan's cabin'.. maan was having his back on them when adi enter with geet with his permission'. geet was least bother to meet him but when his chair moved both looked shocked to their wits'.

Maan: geet?

Geet: maan?

Adi: he he he he aap dono ek dusre ko jante ho?

Maan: what r u doing here geet? Adi she is my

Geet: friend,, old FRIEND,,, adi saw their faces that has some pain hiding it.. he left the place taking some excuse'.

Geet: umm u called me here?

Maan: no,, I don't have ur no' geet looked at him confused and then the picture hit her,,

Geet: I m the new photographer for this project,, I have worked in Kohinoor London brance handling by dev' but u

Maan: I m the owner of this company and handling all the project in india'

Geet: but u were in IT,, u wanted do build,,,,

Maan: that was a dream only, and its my father's last wish,,

Geet: uncle?

Maan: he left me,, a pain stretch his face'. She can't see the sorrow on his face, she goes closer to him..

Geet: I m sorry'.

Maan: u were not there to hold me,, to support me,,

Geet: I was never gone maan,, I was with u always, in ur,, but she left the words there,, she can't say ur HEART as she doesn't know what place she has in his heart' I m Sorry she said while distancing a little'

Maan felt a tug in his heart but he is happy to see her'. he can find all about her now'.

Maan: u are here in this profession? I thought u want to join ur father's company'.

Geet smiled: I think fate had some different plans..

Maan : yeah fate has some different plans'.

Precap: jealous maan, hot geet'. And some intense scene''

Ohhh not to forget tammy and her antiques'..

Part 3

Thank u friends for ur lovely support,, I never thought this OS can reach 70 likes'' but u all made me feell over whelmed by ur love'. I don't want to end this OS soon but I have to'.. this story needs 2 more part to end it'..

And that flashback part isn't end till yet it will go with the story'..

Edited by tich.1990mg - 12 years ago

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