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Posted: 13 years ago
I am so thankful to my silent readers. Here is the next part. I hope you'll like it. Sorry it might be short.

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Part Twenty-Three

Exam has begin for Prithvi and Tani differently. Both are equally tensed and missing each other badly.

Tani silently pray to god for Prithvi instead of herself.

Prithvi also stood inside a temple, but praying for Tani's success in her exams.

***

Its been two days since Maan and Geet arrive to their honeymoon in simila but her eyes spoke different language that nobody could understand. Only those who are closer to her heart and if Maan was than he would have never brought Geet to simila because its the reason of her loosing her everything.

Geet stood looking outside the window (at the moon) and questioned her destiny "why god did you bring me back where I lost my faith in relation and love? Why? Because whenever I come here it always bring along bad news with it. I can't tolerate it" tears stream down her face.

***

"Oh god! This proposal is full of crap and if I sign the deal than Khurana Construction is on the path of destruction" Maan told himself while listening to them who wants to do business with them. Maan couldn't take it anymore and stood up.

"Is something wrong Mr. Khurana?" his colleague asked him

Maan look into his eyes with anger and spat out "have you called me here to just listen to bullshit"

Man: What do you mean?

Maan: If you have look at it closely than you'll only find mistakes nothing more or less. And I don't think the deal will work between two companies because the budget itself doesn't make any sense.

Man: Please don't

Maan: I said I am not interested anymore. Please excuse me now! And don't think about bothering me again for this deal. Its over.

Maan walk away leaving everyone shock.

***

I knock on my door hope my wife would open the door, but I was wrong. I had to open it with master key. Once I open it. I saw her sleeping peacefully by the window. Allowing the cold air caress her face. Her innocent reflected in her deep slumber, but pain also written in her dry up tears.

Maan rub his temple...

I thought bringing her here would be change for us and trying to work out over relation, but now it feels as if nothing is working. Only pain that reflects in her.

I wish I could take those pain away..

... hold on! What are you thinking, Maan? You want to take away her pain when her pain use to bring happiness to you and now you are feeling guilty of bringing her here. Pull yourself together Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. You have came here enjoy your honeymoon with your wife not feeling guilty for giving her pain. Understood!

Maan scolded himself before throwing his tie aside and lift Geet up in his arms. Slowly stare at her than drops her on the bed and lay beside her.

***

Middle of the morning around 4am Geet woke up and found herself extremely closer to her husband. She stare at his face for awhile and thought he look so cute and innocent when he's awake he's a devil.

... get a grip on yourself. You sound as if you are sick puppy who struck in love. Just control yourself and every people look innocent and cute when they are a sleep." she scold herself and decide to get out of bed, but she couldn't move.

She looked on her stomach and found her dear husband arm around her. Whenever she tries to wriggle herself out he tights the grip tightly.

She just lay beside him and waits for him to wake up or let his grip loosen on her.

Didn't realize when she herself fell asleep again in the arms of her husband... feeling protected.

***

Prithvi stay up extra late study for his last exam... its been two weeks already since his exam started and two weeks since his parents are gone away on their honeymoon.

Vicky: Are you ready?

Prithvi: Yeah.. just waiting for it to be done and over so I can go back to Delhi before my semester start again.

Vicky: So you are sure about it?

Prithvi: I've been sure than anything.

Vicky: Alright than. I'll miss you

Prithvi: Me too!

Both hug each other and head for exam hall..

***

Maan complete his work on his laptop while Geet is packing their bags to return back to Delhi...

Maan: Geet

Geet: What?

Maan: I was wondering that we should move back into the main mansion because Tani and Prithvi both are shifting in soon.

Geet: I don't mind staying with Dadi and them, but knowing Tani and Prithvi I think we should mange in the outhouse because they need the space. I've seen them together since they were child.

Maan: Alright per I only have two rooms and Prithvi already took one room so where should Tani stay.

Geet: Oh! She and Prithvi will mange one room because you don't know a thing about them. When they were young they would sleep in two different rooms but by the morning it would be one room either Tani is in his room or Prithvi in her room. Since that day on me, Amit and Sapna have decide destiny will shape out their relation and if they want to stay together than we don't have a problem.

Maan: Oh! Everything was decided when they were young and now do you know if they feel the same?

Geet: You won't understand because if you did than on the day of lord Krishna's birthday you wouldn't have witness Tani running into Prithvi's arm than seeing them sleep together on the roof. They thought nobody would find out but we knew from beginning they would be together. So just giving them the space they need until they are ready to share their inner feelings with us.

Maan just smiles and watch Geet pack their things. Suddenly he began scolding himself "what's wrong with you? Why are you smiling like a idiot? Get a grip on yourself or else people will loose their fear on you." Geet tap him on his shoulder to get his tension.

Maan: What?

Geet: I've you look at the time?

Maan: Why?

Geet hit her forehead and mumble to her Babaji "oh god! Babaji he's the owner of construction company and yet he doesn't know the value of time. Always giving other people the lecture on how time is important and here he is lost in his own world." Maan just glare at Geet because he heard her.

Maan: Geet!

Geet: What?

Maan: Lately you have been getting very spoiled by saying whatever comes to your mouth about me and if you don't control the mouth of yours than (he stood up same level as her and grab her waist tightly)

Geet gets scared: What are you doing? Let go of me!

Maan lean closer to her lip and whisper "I'll just have to shut your mouth by myself." he throw her away from him "understood" and walk inside the bathroom because they are getting late for the airport.

Geet just stare at the close door of the washroom while cursing him badly in her mind for dropping her on the floor.

Edited by Miketa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i really wonder where their relationship is headed
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow that was awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update...
hmm luved it..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice
plesae pm me dear
its gud
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Posted: 13 years ago
wooo
at last i caught up to this...
wooo
oh phew
for a moment i thought tht vicky was going to be a triangle with tani n prithvi - but i wouldnt want that...
please make things better between maan n geet soon
i want to knw her past
n also...i want them to understand each other a little better and why he hates her soo much from before (not now of course hehehe )
and also i would want dadi to be aware of tani n prithvi's relationship - in case she springs in a rishta for vicky - lool...make vicky find someone else - someone just for him...
lol
chalo - looking forward to reading more
til then
take care
and awesome update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

simply amazing part..

loving everything abt it...

all r sharing such a sweet n cute relation...

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Author's Note: Sorry Friends, I know many of you guys are upset that I wasn't able to update for awhile - well my laptop was gone for service and now I am going to India for few weeks. I'll update once I am back.

I hope you understand..

Thank you.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Miketa

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Note: Sorry Friends, I know many of you guys are upset that I wasn't able to update for awhile - well my laptop was gone for service and now I am going to India for few weeks. I'll update once I am back.



I hope you understand..



Thank you.

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its ok dear...take ur time...we'll b waiting 4 ur update...when u update plz pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for keeping you guys waiting for along time... Since I was gone to India - it was alright but painful because at the last week of coming back from India - I lost my grandmother on my mother side. Its gone take me time to recover and plus yesterday at my cousin place my phobia came in-front of me. I was in terrible condition that - its hard not to think about it. Anyways here is another update of Tere Liye and I working toward the ending of this fiction because I have more things to plan up.

Enjoy the Next parts!

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Part Twenty-Four

It was long flight from simila to Delhi... after having his driver picking them up.. the minute they drive into the driveway.. Maan doesn't wait for anyone... and rush inside his room.

Geet just watch him rush inside as if he's missing his flight, but they just came back from flight. I greet Dadi by touching her feet than made my way inside the outhouse toward my room to find my dear husband coming out of the washroom feeling relaxed.

I control my laughter, but when I saw him tucking his shirt back inside his pant I couldn't stop laughing. He looked at me, but I couldn't stop because now I realize why he was in grumpy mood since the moment we arrived in Delhi.

Maan: Stop laughing!

Geet: I want to, but I can't

Maan glare at her...

Geet: Sorry sweetheart, but your stares don't scare me anymore. In-fact I am surprise if you are the same person I married because you are starting to change (the word change echoed in Maan's mind. That was it)

He walk toward Geet and grab her by the shoulder "you think I've change than you are wrong because I am still the same MSK I was before our marriage. In fact we couldn't do much in our honeymoon so why not start our night with our (he lean closer to Geet's ear) missed out Suhaag raat"

Maan push Geet away and she fell on the ground while he walked away.

-

Tani focus on her final exam, but the materials weren't sticking inside her mind because she was thinking about Prithvi.

Prithvi's smiles and everything related to him floats inside her mind. She kept on trying to stop herself from thinking about him, but she couldn't help herself anymore and decide to give him a ring.

Tani dial his number, but his phone tune was engaged...

Tani tries again and same response...

-

At Khurana Mansion everyone gather around the dinner table...

Geet serving Dadi than Maan who looked unhappy with meal being served. He hates Indian Cuisine - just tolerate it for his Dadi and now his good for nothing wife.

Suddenly a door bell ring...

Dadi stood up to open the door, but Geet stop her and said "Dadi.. I'll open the door... You continue eating your meal."

Geet slowly walking toward the door, but with her each step felt uneasy as if something huge is going to happen in her life. That would change many lives forever.

Geet with shivering hands open the door...

-

... ab tere kya hoga (Rahul starring at Geet's photo) Geet. (He kept on giving a evil smile) When you find out the true meaning of those papers once they reach you (he took sip of his hard liquor) than what will you do. I told you not to marry that person, (he threw his glass on the ground and the sound of broken shattered glass piece gave him peace when he start to crush Maan and Geet's wedding picture) but you never listen to me. Now you have to pay the prize and I know you'll have to come toward me and beg.

Rahul gave nasty smile while Geet stare at those paper (which change the meaning of her life forever).

Edited by Miketa - 13 years ago

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