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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

me jst enjoying winters... U knw its raining at my place



aww wow really..uff it was suppose to snow here but i dont know why it hasnt snow this year😭
where do u live?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

deari live at lucknow, india


ohh nice..i live in US😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 yaar... So no snowfall till nw?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

gr8 yaar... So no snowfall till nw?



hmm there was some in october once and like few days ago there were some flurries thats it
no BIG SNOWFALL yet that will close my school😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww even i wait 4 rains over here u knw it escapes me 4m gng coaching.. Lolz moreover i love rains too
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Posted: 13 years ago
zee kahan chali gayi? where did you go?😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part: 55

Night of Ecstasy
Warning: COntent for ages 18 +
Read at your own risk

Part: 55
PLAY THIS SONG:
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t4T8FQFq4tA[/YOUTUBE]
THe song is played in the background and just think it is from Geet's point of view😳


" Maan" she moans again.
aadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
It's magic, a spell, intoxication
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan
forgetting you, where could I go?
He was teasing her senses. She was forgetting who she was and where she was. Neither was he stopping nor just getting on with it. No he wasn't teasing, but torturing her poor and weak senses. Taking advantage of the effect he had on her.
" If you keep moaning my name like that, I will just hold you prisoner like this tonight" he says entrapping her between his two arms and the wall.
"Finish what you started jaan. Comlete picture dekhao na! I know you are hungry sweetheart", he huskily said as his intoxicating breath fanned against her lips, making her mouth water.

Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe
The way you look at me,
Main Khud Ko Chupaao Kahan
where could I hide myself?
" Show me not with words, but with your actions what I do to you!" he says as he runs his hands from her navel to up her back, as she melts and moves in closer to him.
She slowly closes her eyes and crushes her lips against his taking in his perfect M shaped lips. At first she was hesitant moving slowly against his lips, but then somewhere she just lost herself in him and started to increase the fervor of the kiss. Maan in the beginning controlled his raging desire in him and made sure Geet was comfortable and was willing to go through with this. And after seeing her deepening the kiss, then Maan decides to let himself loose. But just when he was going to return the kiss with the same passion Geet escapes from his embrace.
Maan open's up his eyes and just gives a look as if saying, " what am I going to do with this paagli".Sigh. . .
Geet ran to another corner of the garden hiding and placing her body and head against the wall trying to control her racing heart. Trying to suppress the millions of butterflies that were twirling and tingling in her stomach. Trying to control this unknown desire that was raging through her, making her go weak at the knees.
Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
It's magic, a spell, intoxication;
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan
forgetting you, where could I go?
She closed her eyes scrunching the part of her sari where her heart laid while her other hand scrunched the wall in her attempt to suppress her desire and beating heart as the images and taste of his lips still lingered around her lips and head.
Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe
The way you look at me,
Main Khud Ko Chupaao Kahan
where could I hide myself?
All of a sudden with closed eyes she felt her breath get stuck in her throat and her heart start to erratically beat faster and faster. Every cell and fiber of her skin that he placed his lips against were getting electrocuted with pleasurable sensations and were making them surrender in defeat by screaming his name in desire. His lips moved up her exposed arm and finally reached the nape of her neck. He just stayed there nibbling against her neck, and slowly moved hovering and lingering around her lips making her moan in ways she never knew could be even possible.
Maan just smirked seeing the effect he had on her. This was the way he got revenge from her for escaping from the cage of his lips. He was going to make her come to him. He was going to make the cells in her body surrender to him tonight. And that's exactly what happened. She ends up slamming her lips against his taking in and engulfing her moans inside his lips. For a long time they just stood there, Geet letting Maan devour, tease, and bite her lips driving every nerve on her body off the edge of insanity. Maan started to get a little more aggressive pushing her up the wall, Geet returning with same passion as her hands had a mind of their own. Pulling and tying knots in his hair bringing him in closer, if that was even possible, and letting herself taste him and take in his intoxicating mouthwatering scent.
Yeh Pal Hai Apna To Is Pal Ko Jee Le
This moment belongs to us, so let's live this moment
Shwalo Ki Tarha Zarah Chal Ke Jee Le
Let us live burning, like flames.
Pal Jhapakte Kho Na Jana
Don't disappear in a fleeting moment.
They finally break away to breathe. At first Geet had the guts to meet his eyes, but then she couldn't control as her shyness got the best of her and the return of her burning pink cheeks gave her away. She was even surprised with her boldness and brings the gaze of her eyes down away from his hypnotizing eyes.
She just melted against his touch as his hands made their way around her exposed waist, and before she knew it she no longer felt her feet against the ground. Geet opens up her eyes and just admires her night and shining armor.



They were drowning in each other's eyes that Geet didn't even notice when she even reached the bedroom. Maan placed her on her feet as he gently locked the doors behind them. The sound of the door clicking closed sent a sort of shiver down her spine.
Maan's eyes fall on Geet's back where a drop of water sensuously crawled down ever so slowly numbing every fiber in his body with carnal desire.



His numb legs start to inch closer and closer to her, drowning in her innocence and beauty as if he was trapped just like a moth and was just moving closer to the brightness that had captured his mind and soul.
His hungry hand traces the trail of the droplet of water from Geet's neck all the way down her spine.




With every inch that his hand traced down Geet just sucked in her breath all the more and melted against his touch.


Sparks of desire were hovering over their bodies, the only question remained was if they could feel it. Geet opens her eyes but couldn't take his rippling passionate gaze and touch; it was as if he was undressing her with his eyes. She shies away trying to make a run for it, but Munda held her pallu and she instantly freezes in place.
He starts to encircle around her with her pallu in his hand. This time he did not place the pallu around her shoulder, this time he was untwining her sari off her as he encircled around her. Then all of a sudden he tugs on all the material sari material in his hand and Geet comes crashing into his chest as both of them twirled around and fell against the bed beside each other.
Geet laid there with eyes shut, her heart racing and her body waiting in anticipation.



Maan entwines his fingers with hers and then hovers over her body and slowly proceeds in taking the bra off, while his body crushed against hers and stole her rosy lips. He couldn't control the beast in him anymore. His manhood was already throbbing against his pants.
Chuke Karlo Yakin Na Jane Yeh Pal Paaye Kahan
Touching you, let me make sure; who knows
when I'll have this moment again.
"Oh maan" Geet moaned as she ripped opened his shirt and let herself feel and take his Greek body in.



Hearing her moan his name drove the beast in him crazy. He proceeds lower and takes in her curves and with his hand, he hovered over her sensitive parts and takes the final barrier between their bodies off her. He quickly get's his pants off, but before he knew it Geet slams herself on him and naughtily whispers, " you taste so good" as she nibbled against his lower lip before fully crushing and pushing her tongue through his soft lips.
Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
It's magic, a spell, intoxication;
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan
forgetting you, where could I go?
With every second that passed Maan just increased the fervor of the kiss, while the palm of his hands stroked her inner thigh and hovered around her sensitive parts sending her off the edge of insanity, making her V muscle throb and not to forget to mention wet.
" Maan" she moaned in pleasure.
Baahon Mein Teri Yun Kho Gaye Hai
I lost myself just like this in your arms.
Armaan Dabe Se Jagne Lage Hai
Yielding to desire, I began to wake.
"you like that jaan" he huskily whispered and lingered around with his finger some more.
" Make me yours already please" she whispered as she hit her orgasm.
Maan: Are you ready sweetheart.
Geet: I want you
Jo Mile Ho Aaj Hum Ko Door Jana Nahin
After what I've found today, I can't go away.
Mitado Saari Yeh Duriyan
Erase all these distances.
" But I want you more" and that was it when Maan thrusted his way in.
She moaned and screamed out of pleasure. He just increased the pressure and soon everything felt out of place. She couldn't think, she couldn't breathe. In fact all she wanted was for Maan to continue to make love to her like this. Maan was near exploding and he kept on going until she reached multiple climaxes. Both had never felt such pleasurable ecstasy in their life.
Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
It's magic, a spell, intoxication
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan
forgetting you, where could I go?
Later that night Maan could sense Geet drifting away with a sweet smile on her face. Although she was dosing off she could still feel his lips over her face and kissing her lips, before putting the spread over them.
Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe
The way you look at me,
Main Khud Ko Chupaao Kahan
where could I hide myself?
Geet murmurs, " I love you" and just snuggles in closer against him.
" I love you too" maan softly murmers kissing her forehead before cuddling close to her and drifting away to sleep in each other's arms.



Pre-cap:


will post when i can start to think again. . . after this update i am not alive r u???🤣


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Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
WHATT THE HECKKK😲
ZEEE
OMGG HOW WILL I COMMENT ON THIS UPDATE
I MEAN
ALL I CAN SAY IS HOT
MORE THAN FIRE
loveddd the updatee soo much ahh


Couldn't stop blushing when reading it..hayee
Hawhh!Zee..your soo badd
omgg
you didnt even gave a WARNING?

YOU KILLED ME..YAAR
This was my halat after reading it🤣


but the update was freaking amazing hayee

I have no words zee..you killed me..like you said
you sent me to Grave straight instead of a hospital

after reading it..i was like what the heck is going on
is this zee who wrote it haha🤣
HOT HOT HOT FREAKING HOT update
i dont want to give description of the update ahaha

Thank you soo much for the update
i cant wait to see what happens next..hayee

my chikni chameli..lol
updatee soonnn
muahh love youuu
and here is one gift for the update🤣
hahaha
love you
muahh
your
chamak challo.😳






Edited by maangeetcrazy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yup zee 10 min se 20 min ho gye
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Abi's comment

first of all i need to calm
myself then i could comment

i m officially 3rd in the list to comment

coming to the update it was out of the world mind blowing
and i m in loss of words to write the comment
currently i m in heaven and typing the comment


a big hug to select this song


a very sensuous song apt with the
situation

hayee the way maan said"what m i going to this
with this pagli" i was dead🤢

geet was out of control
loved this avatar of geet was was also surprised

the kiss was magical

everything about the update was magical
i was likethroughout the update

now maan and geet
r not maan and geet
dont be confused dear

then have became MAANEET with body as well as soul

love u dear do continue dear




NOTE to every one plz vote for our MRS ZSK in this thread

PLZ PLZ NOMINATE OUR MRS ZSK IN FF AWARD NOMINATION THREAD


Edited by maangeetcrazy - 13 years ago

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