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Posted: 13 years ago
hey zee excellent song selection
superb update lovely romantic
the video u gave to listen is mind blowing
how u wrote these lines zee
"He was teasing her senses. She was forgetting who she was and where she was."
highlight dilogs written by u in this part are
" If you keep moaning my name like that, I will just hold you prisoner like this tonight"
"Finish what you started jaan. Comlete picture dekhao na! I know you are hungry sweetheart"

zee i am flat by this lines
" Show me not with words, but with your actions what I do to you!" he says as he runs his hands from her navel to up her back, as she melts and moves in closer to him.
kiss was yummy
romance was in 7th heaven
the pics u used perfect for update
maan gave exact punishment to tease geet senses
most sensuous dilogs
"you like that jaan" he huskily whispered and lingered around with his finger some more.
" Make me yours already please" she whispered as she hit her orgasm.
Maan: Are you ready sweetheart.
Geet: I want you
" But I want you more"
superb higlight perfect climax of part
Geet murmurs, " I love you" and just snuggles in closer against him.
" I love you too" maan softly murmers kissing her forehead before cuddling close to her and drifting away to sleep in each other's arms.


we already dead by this update
and ur precap most hillarious
Pre-cap:


will post when i can start to think again. . . after this update i am not alive r u???🤣

zee really when i read this update i feel all natures at a time



for this lovely update this is for u

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 13 years ago
aakritisri1111 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
@shreya yup dear u can call me watever u feel lyk
..shreyaa.. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
I cant sPeak after this uPdate
Im like a zombie
So zee inwill edit my comment tomorrow coz my dad using the computer i came from my phone
*thud*
Mrs.ZSK thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

I cant sPeak after this uPdate
Im like a zombie
So zee inwill edit my comment tomorrow coz my dad using the computer i came from my phone
*thud*


🤣🤣

smell of sweet sweet revenge. . . feels good 😈🤣

it's okay jaani. u can comment tomorrow when you come back alive 😳🤣
..shreyaa.. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Zee i need some time to realize whats happening around me
..shreyaa.. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chalo i need to go no
I need to realize whats happening haha im like all hooked to this update
Will edit tomorrow zee thanks for making me dead lol
Good nite sweet dreams luv yah jaani u rockk muah bye

By aakriti di loved talking to u hope to talk to u again see ya bye
aakritisri1111 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
zee m 4m mobile so cant cumment long bt jst to say u made me rpeechless i was in another world 4 few mins... I jst gt fainted yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

zee m 4m mobile so cant cumment long bt jst to say u made me rpeechless i was in another world 4 few mins... I jst gt fainted yaar


**zee sprinkling water on aakriti's face"😆

awww that's okay dear u can also comment like shreya tomorrow 😆

and also when you gain consciousness again 🤣

so happy you luved it 😳



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

Zee i need some time to realize whats happening around me


love love LOVE is in the air my jaaneman 😉🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

Chalo i need to go no
I need to realize whats happening haha im like all hooked to this update
Will edit tomorrow zee thanks for making me dead lol
Good nite sweet dreams luv yah jaani u rockk muah bye

By aakriti di loved talking to u hope to talk to u again see ya bye


alrights babez!
hahaha let me know how long it takes you to realize who u r and what's happening around u 🤣

ur welcome jii. . .i am always here to send my friends to the grave 🤣

hayyye i know i rock 😎😆

muahhh! GOod night!
<3

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