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Posted: 13 years ago
๐Ÿค—Hey guys,

Hats off to me?๐Ÿ˜ฒ not fair buddies...If not for contributions of all our forum members, their active participation and lovely responses and encouragement...this would never be possible...

so hats off to u all.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ..yay..we hit 100 pages...Lets keep going...๐Ÿ˜‰

Special thanks to neetu, rupu and aish and storyteller SSBN and all other contributors...๐Ÿค—




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Posted: 13 years ago
Hats off to u lucky,neetu...and others๐Ÿ˜Šand keep going with great and wonderful ff's...and this page should hit 200 pages๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Edited by adityarao151 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

DakshnaFan, adityarao151, sweetaish, Lucky
Thankyou very much!!!! I am happy that you liked my FFS.

Rupali,

yes yaar.. I am badly missing Daksh! :( I feel, without him this serial is empty... ;)... I searched for Daksh's name in y'day's written update. I don't find it. So I think, y'day also they didn't show him rite? OH!!!!


adityarao151,

Thanks yaar...!
OH... kya kahu yaar... !!! y'day also thre was no Daksh??!!! tooo boring!!!


sweetaish,

Thanku thanku dear.. i was tha much bored in not hearing abt Daksh..!!! thats y 3 FFs ek sath..


Lucky,

Hats off to you...!!! you deserve it first.. coz, the idea was urs.


and hats off to Rupali, SweetAish, SSBN Storyteller an other who participated in writing FFs also. Wonderful job! I am not forgetting the ones who supported and encouraged all to write good FFs. Thankyou very much!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Contd

On the way; In the car...

Daksh; tho poochiye aapko kya poochna hain?๐Ÿ˜›
Naina; tumhe kab pata chala ki tumhe mujhse pyar hogaya hain..๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Daksh;(;woh... thinks for while)...actually pata hi nahi chala kab pyar hogaya hain..hmm lekin shayad gudipadwa ki din se ehsaas hone laga iss pyar kaโค๏ธ
Naina; acha!..kaise?๐Ÿ˜›
Daksh; kaise matlab?..uss din na tum bahut alag lag rahthi..aur uske baad hamesha tumharae baare main hi sochta rehtha hain..confused that ki ye mera saath kya ho raha hain?๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Naina; phir?๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Daksh; jab tumhara accident hua aur tumhe hospital main dekha tan yakken hogaya tha ki ye pyar hi hain..aur tum mere liye kya ho...
Naina; kya?๐Ÿ˜›
Daksh holds her hand; meri zindagi ho tum๐Ÿ˜...I love u naina.โค๏ธ.naina getting lost..comes into this world with his words
Daksh; ab next question?๐Ÿ˜›
Naina; jab tum mujhe abhi ke saath dekh the the tumhne jalan ho tha tha?

Daksh suddenly brake daalta hain and stops the car...

Naina; daksh..kya hua?๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Daksh ; woh..ghar jaake dinner banana mushkil hoga ..yahi kuch khalete hain points at hotel infront of them...

Both get down..go in to restaurant and order dinner..naina notices the change in daksh after her question..she feels bad...In between..

Naina; daksh..I am sry..๐Ÿ˜•
daksh is like; kyu?
naina. ;jo maine saawaal kiya us ke liye..
Daksh ; aise baat nahi hain naina..tumhe mujhe kuch bhi poochne ka haq hain..aur main tumhe jawaab doonga..๐Ÿ˜›

Daksh; takes a deep breath,"jalan"..bahut chota shabd hain.ye express karne ke liye ki mujhe kaisa lag tha tha..
Jab bhi main tumhe uss abhi saath dektha tha..haste huye..baat karte huye..mujhe bahut gussa aataa tha.๐Ÿ˜ก.๐Ÿ˜ก.jab bhi woh tumhara kareeb aata tha tumhara haath pakad tha tha ..jee karta tha ki ek tappad du usse aur ye kahu ki ' "door raho naina se..kyunki naina sirf meri hain sirf meri"..sirf gussa nahi dard bhi hota tha...

Naina puts her hand over his hand and daksh puts one more hand on hers..

Daksh; pata hain naina..jab bhi tumhe uske saath dekhtha tha tho ajjeb sa darr lagta tha ki kahi tum mujhse door na hoajvu..aur wahi hua. aaj bhi jab main woh pal yaad karta hoon tho( after few min)...becomes lil emotional..๐Ÿ˜ญ.๐Ÿ˜ญ

Naina;(hand on his cheek) I am sry daksh...ayinda se hum unko kabhi yaad nahi karenge..sirf tum aur main..koi teesra nahi..๐Ÿ˜›

Daksh nods his head saying yes..litfs up her hand and kisses it..both xcnahhe few quite smiles..and leave from there...

Contd..

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Posted: 13 years ago

I am dreaming again... i think, for Ayi it will be the best punishment that Kaka and family live happily with Dakshna. I mean Ayi should feel that the family she wanted ever is there in Naina's side. If Aku and Vedant happily laugh, Kaki will feel "kitne dino ke baad mere bache ke chehre par muskurahat dekha..." tears of happines in her eys. Ayi will think "how happily they live there.. mera pariwar vaha hai". after that she will feel that DIL should be like Naina. If such a happiness sharing moments is shown, then it wil be good for us too...
For eg: vedant prepares a cake and he is excited.. he is coming with it.. meanwhile Daksh comes from office. he does not see him. both hit each other. on Daksh's face cake... and cream.. seeing that Aku laughs... Naina who is coming with tea also laugh.. but seeing Daksh's Kp face, they try to stop laugh... hearing the laugh, Baba- ayi come from their room and watch. they also feel to laugh.[rem holy's day] vedant stunned with a little fear... Daksh looks everybody... he puts the bag and comes forward towards Vedant with KP face... slowly takes the cake and asks "tumhe mei cartoon lag rahe ho.. abi dikhata hoo.." hearing that vedant runs.. Daksh behind... at last he catches him and applies the cake on vedant's face. both Aku and Naina laugh.. daksh and vedant wink each other and point them.. Naina, Aku run... outside lawn.. vedant catches aku and applies cake. meanwhile Daksh catches Naina and abt to paply the cake.. "nahi daksh... please.. mein hasoongi nahi.. pls" daksh melts... "teek hai.. to tum mera face saph karo...". naina cleans his face using her pallu... small eye lock.. vedant and aku come behind them and apply the cream on them... dakshna comes out from their wolrd and run behind them.. that happy scene fades abut Ayi Baba's face zooming... Ayi's mind fills.. Baba notices it. Kaki has tears of happiness in her eyes.

something like that..

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Posted: 13 years ago
Lucky i loved it.. loved it... Daksh is too emotional to think abt Abhi... sigh!! very nice very nice!!! "sirf gussa... bohot dard hota tha.. "oh my dear.. ๐Ÿ’”.. !!!๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago

Contd...

In car..

Naina trying to cheer up daksh..๐Ÿ˜›
Naina; daksh aaj na mujhe bahut mazaa aaya..water falls ke pass tho..aur tumhe??๐Ÿ˜›
Daksh; mujhe bhi...๐Ÿ˜•
Naina; daksh phir woh bacche ke saath..sach main kitna cute tha woh...hain na๐Ÿ˜›
Daksh ;haan..๐Ÿ˜•
Naina; within herself; ye kay kardiya maine? acha khasa mood kaharb kardiya KP ka..kuch tho karna padega..
Naina; daksh..kal ka kya programme hain?๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Daksh; kal ka? kuch socha nahi..wapas jaake sochte hain..bas pahuch rahe hain..5 min...
Naina; offo daksh..sry kahana maine..ab tho normal mode pe aajavo..aisa mooh pulana tumhe bilkul suit nahi karta..๐Ÿ˜•
Daksh ;aise baat nahi hain naina..main teek hoon...
Naina moves lil close rests her head on his shoulder and says; I love u daksh..
Daksh; luv u too...
They reach farm house

Daksh; finally aagyae wapas...
Naina; still wrd abt his upset mood; haan...

Daksh is abt to get down the car..naina holds his hand and stops him.
...daksh ; kya hua?

Naina; Ek min rukh javo..daksh sits back..

Naina puts her both hands on his cheek.and says; daksh..I am sry...and gives him a sweet kiss ..daksh gets lost as usual..๐Ÿ˜ณ

After few min..

They come out of kiss...look in to each others eyes...
Naina; ab tho smile kardo๐Ÿ˜›
Listening this daksh controls the smile that is about to come on his face...๐Ÿ˜‰
Daksh;lil attitude; sirf ek kiss se ...smile??...thoda mushkil hain.with a naughty look.and cute pink cheeks..๐Ÿ˜†
Naina gets his point..gives him a second one; ab ??
Daksh; acts as if thinking seriousy)...soch raha hoon ki smile karoo ya nahi? looking at her ab bhi soch raha hoon...๐Ÿ˜†
.naina gives him 3 quickies ; ab tho smile karo..๐Ÿ˜›

Daksh still doing lot of nakraas..

..naina ; offo daksh..kitne nakre karte ho tum..main jaa rahi hoo..about to open door

Daksh holds her hand.naina turns towards daksh and he sings; abhi na javo chodkar...and winks at her with smile..๐Ÿ˜‰

Naina;(sigh of relief) thank god.hasliya...gives him one more and says.ab chalo..

Both get down car with cute smiles on their face...

Contd...
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Contd...

Both reach the room...freshen up...daksh settles on bed...naina combing her hair

infront of dressing table...

Daksh; ek baat poochoo tumse..lekin tum gusaa nahi karoge..ok๐Ÿ˜›

Naina; ok..batavo๐Ÿ˜›

Daksh; Naina..woh ladki jo hame park main milithi..tumhe kaise pata chala ki woh mujhe line maar rahithi?๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Naina; tumne dekha nahi woh kis tarah tumhe dekh rahithi..goor goor kar..๐Ÿ˜†meri daksh ko koi aisa dekhe mujhe pasand nahi.๐Ÿ˜ก..iss liye

Daksh iss liye tumne uska band bajaya..maan na padega mrs patwardan..waise achahua tum mujhe waha se le gayi .warna pata nahi uss ladki ki kya haal hota tumhare haathon..

Naina; jaan le leti main..uska...

Daksh; aur tumne kuch kaha ki" dil pe laga hoga' aisa kuch...matlab

Naina; oh daksh..tumhe har choti baat samjhana padta hain..woh tho tumhe dekh kar fida hogayi ..tumne uska chehra dekha jab usse pata chala ki tum shaadi shuda ho kaise utar gaya...

Daksh;tumhe dekhne se fursat mile tab jaake kisi aur ko dekhunga na..maine notice nahi kiya..ek baat samaj nahi aaya..aisa kya dekha usne mujhe main ki fida hogayi...main koi salman srk thodina hoon..

Naina gets up from dressing table...;har kisi ko salman ho ki zaroorat nahi hain.. waise FYI tum bahut handsome aur good looking ho..

Daksh; acha! aur

Naina; starts coming towards bed; bahut smart,sweet aur cute ho and settles besides him and looking at his smiley face; aur jab tum smile karte ho aur bhi handsome lagte ho..aur

Daksh; aur?( enjoyinh tariff from his swt hr8 )

Naina; hand on cheek very loving and caring...

Daksh; aur?

Naina; aur...comes closer to him...daksh already getting lost...then naina says; aur bahut bahut jyada

Daksh; hmmm kaho na...

Naina;akudu aur khadoos ho...

Daksh; kya?..

Naina; laughs looking at his face; aur tarif karu..continues to laugh...

Daksh; haso haso..aur haos..tries to get hold of her but naina runs away from hin

Thoda bhagam bhag around bed..finally daksh ne naina ko pakadliya and both fall on bed..naina neeche daksh upar

Eyelock..intense eye lock

Naina; bhool gayi ye kehna ki tum..

Daksh; haan main( stroking her hair)

Naina; bahut jyada hot ho...

Daksh; sach!

Naina holds his collar pulls him closer and says'; sach much...daksh comes more closer to her and scene fades...

Contd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
So sweet of naina ๐Ÿ˜‰... Hai hai... Dakshu ki itni tarif Pe tarif.๐Ÿ˜‰.. Yaar pehale dakshu ko Sab yaad dilaya... Aur too senti kar diya aur hume bhi..๐Ÿ˜ญ .๐Ÿ˜ญ Aur phir kisses ki barish ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ Aur phir itni tarif hot and sexy dakshu... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Damn cute scenes lucky ๐Ÿ‘ U know how to make us emo and to bring a smile on ur faces also... That's so so sweet.. ๐Ÿ˜› Thank u thank u dear... ๐Ÿค— a big tightwali Jadu ki jhappi too dear...๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— loved it...๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

So sweet of naina ๐Ÿ˜‰... Hai hai... Dakshu ki itni tarif Pe tarif.๐Ÿ˜‰.. Yaar pehale dakshu ko Sab yaad dilaya... Aur too senti kar diya aur hume bhi..๐Ÿ˜ญ .๐Ÿ˜ญ Aur phir kisses ki barish ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ Aur phir itni tarif hot and sexy dakshu... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Damn cute scenes lucky ๐Ÿ‘ U know how to make us emo and to bring a smile on ur faces also... That's so so sweet.. ๐Ÿ˜› Thank u thank u dear... ๐Ÿค— a big tightwali Jadu ki jhappi too dear...๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— loved it...๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—




Thanks a lot yaar and U are welcome๐Ÿค—

Ab SSBN main tho aisa kuch hoga nahi ..kamse kam thru FF's ๐Ÿ˜‰..we can make ourselves happy..

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