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Great part sweety... luvd it... plzzz continue soon

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love their beautiful memories of the past...

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Part 6:-

Maan layed on bed and closed his eyes...

Flashback:-
G:" Ladoo"
Mk:" haa princess kya huwa"
G:" aapko yaad haina ke mera birthday Araha hai parso"
Mk:" haa princess mujhe yaad hai..tumne dekhna hum kitna maza karenge...aur kitne saare birthday gifts bhi milenge meri princess ko"
Geet smiled widely and hugged him...maan smiled and hugged her tightly
G:" Ladoo.."
Mk:" haan princess.."
G:" aap mujhe kya gift do ge"
Mk:" meri princess ko kya chahiye"
G:" Ladoo"
Maan looked at her confusingly
Mk:" yeh kya princess...tumhe Ladoo chahiye..woh tau kitne saare honge tumhari birthday mein u know sweets"
Geet rolled her eyes at her innocent Ladoo
G:" o ho..Ladoo woh wale Ladoo nahin yeh wala Ladoo" she pointed at him
Maan smiled and said
Mk:" par mein tau humesha apni princess ke swath hoon"
G:" theek hai..phir aapko mere se ek promise karna Hoga"
Maan looked at her confusingly
Mk:" promise?"
Geet nodded and maan said
Mk:" kesa promise princess"
Geet take out her hand and said
G:" pehle vada"
Maan holds her hand and said
Mk:" vaada..princess"
G:" VADA KARO KE AAP HUMESHA APNI PRINCEES KE SAATH RAHOGE...USSE KABHI BHI CHOOR KAR NAHI JAAO GE...KABHI BHI NAHI"
Maan looked at her and smiled lovingly
Mk:" TUMHARA LADOO TUMSE VAADA KARTA HAI KE WOH HUMESHA TUMHARE SAATH RAHEGE...TUMHE KABHI BHI CHOOR KAR NAHI JAAYE GA..KABHI BHI NAHI"
Mk:" princess tumhe bhi promise karna hoga ke tum bhi humesha mere saath rahoge"
G:" promise ladoo"
Geet looked at him with tears and hugged him tightly..maan hugged her back..they had promised each other..they will never leave each other..they will stay with each other for their whole life...
Naina and kiran were looking at them with tears in their eyes..they smiled at them...they love each other so much...
Kiran and naina looked at each other and smiled
N:" yeh dono ek dusre se kitna pyaar karte haina"
K:" haa...lekin"
Naina looked at her confusingly and said
N:" lekin..kya"
K:" naina..abhi yeh dono bache hai..inhe in sab cheezo ke baare mein kuch Nahin pata hai...abhi tau yeh ek dusre se alag Nahin ho sakte..lekin jab astha astha bare honge..inke jazbaat badalte jaaye ge ek dusre keliye...ho sakta hai ke bare hokar yeh ek dusre keliye kuch bhi mehsoos naa kare"
Naina looked at maan and geet and then at kiran
N:" shahid tum theek keh rahi ho..abhi yeh dono bache hai...pyaar lafz ko shahid yeh log samjhte bhi Nahin hai...par kahin na kahin mera dil keh raha ke yeh dono ek dusre keliye hi bane hai"
Kiran looked at her and smiled
K:" kassh...tumhare dil ki baat sahi ho jaaye"
They looked at them and left from there...
Maan and geet start making plan of her birthday...
Naina goes to her room and saw Rahul was sitting on bed..thinking something..he was looking tense
Naina sit beside him and touched his shoulder..Rahul came out from his thoughts...and looked at her...
N:" kya baat hai Rahul...aap itne pareshaan kyun lag rahe ho..sab theek haina"
R:" hmm..business mein much problem chal raha hai..bas uski wajah se hi"
N:" aap pareshaan mat hoiye...yeh tau business hai..Aur ismein yeh sab tau chalta rehta haina"
R:" I hope sab theek ho"
N:" sab theek hoga..aap fikar mat karo"
Rahul looked at her and smiled..and they hugged each other..rahul kissed her forehead.
There maan and geet came running in their room...
G:" naina maa"
Naina looked at them
N:" kya huwa geet"
G:" naina maa papa aap ko yaad haina..mera birthday aaraha hai"
Rahul and naina smiled
R:" bilkul Hume yaad hai princess...apni princess ka birthday hum Kese bhul sakte hai"
Just then Ajay and kiran came
A:" bilkul dekhna kitne aache se hum celebrate karenge birthday"
K:" maan..tumne plan bana liya hai birthday ka" she says while caressing his face
Mk:" haa maa yeh dekho"
He showed them everything and they smiled at him
K:" are wah mera beta tau kitna samjdar hai"
Maan hugged her..kiran hugged him back...
Mk:" princess chalo hum khelte hai"
G:" chalo ladoo"
They run from there...
G:" Ladoo...chalo aap mujhe pakar ke dekho"
Mk:" mein tau tumhe foran pakar sakta hoo princess"
G:" theek hai phir pakar ke dekhao"
Geet start running..maan start running behind her..they were laughing and screaming...they were running here and there..geet running from stairs..her foot got slipped and she screamed
G:" LADOO!!!!l she screamed
Maan looked at her with terrified eyes
Mk:" PRINCESS!!!" he screamed loudly...Rahul naina kiran and ajay came running after listening maan's scream
They looked at downstairs..shock hit them badly..geet lying in floor with blood all over her head...
K:" geet!!!!"
They run downstairs and kiran keep her head on her lap and start crying badly
K:" geet beta ankhe khol..Kya hua hai tujhe."
Rahul looked at maan..and run towards him..he was looking at her with no emotions..he was in state of shock..his princess got hurt..blood is oozing out from her head
R:" maan..maan beta kya hula hai geet ko..woh neeche Kese giri"
He was shaking him..but he was listening anything...Rahul thought he is in shock
A:" geet ko hospital lekar jaana hoga..jaldi"
N:" geet beta ankle khol" he said while crying
Maan was all alone in the house..he was still looking at that place where her princess was lying in pool of blood...tears were not in his eyes..he didn't even blink his eyes for second...he was still looking there...he slowly came downstairs and sit on floor near her blood...he touched her blood...her voice was echoing in his eyes..when she slipped from upstairs "ladooo!!!!"
They took her to hospital and ajay start screaming
A:" doctor!!!...doctor!!!"
Doctor came running and saw her with blood
R:" doctor humari geet ko dekhiye na..uske sir se Buhat khoon nikal raha hai"
K:" please doctor mere beti ko bacha lijiye"
D:" nurse jaldi se isse OT mein lekar jaao"
They took her to OT and start their procedure of saving her...
Maan was still sitting there..with her blood all over his hand
N:" maan...kiran maan ghar mein akela hai" she remembered about maan..he was in shock
Kiran looked at her..
K:" pata Nahin maan ki kya haalat hogi..mein waha jaati hoo"
N:" Nahin kiran tum yahi ruko is waqt tumhari zaroorat hai yaha mein jaati hoo"
N:" Rahul.."
Rahul looked at her with tears
N:" Rahul...maan.."
Rahul looked at her with fear
R:" o god maan ghar mein akela hai..pata Nahin woh kis haal mein hoga"
N:" mein jaati hoo"
R:" Nahin naina..is waqt kiran ko tumhari zaroorat hai tum yahin ruko mein jaata hoo"
Naina nodded and rahul left from there...
Rahul went home and saw maan sitting there with blood all over his hand..he was looking at blood continuously ...he run towards him and sit beside him
R:" maan...maan"
Maan was not listening because her voice was still echoing in his ears...he couldn't listen anything
Tears rolled down from rahul's eyes
R:" maan beta..meri farad dekho"
Maan was still looking at her blood..that place where she was lying
R:" maan hosh mein aao...maan"
Rahul hugged him tightly..caresses his back...
R:" maan..meri taraf dekho...kuch Nahin hoga tumhari princess ko...kuch bhi Nahin hoga"
He hugged him again..but he was not reacting
There doctors were still doing her operation...

Precap:- "what will happen now?"

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Sehri xxx

Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 14 years ago